Not as Accurate as You would Like

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My Team: Azelf, Infernape, Suicune, Salamence, Gengar, Heracross
Opponent's team will be revealed as it is shown.
I didn't ask my opponent to warstory this, so out of politeness I made him anonymous.

rayquazamaster7776's moves will look like this.
Opponent's moves will look like this.
other text will look like this.
Leftovers will be removed.
Nicknames will be removed.
Sandstorm/hail damage will be removed.
Scores will be shown after each KO.
Rules: Ladder Match, Sleep Clause, Freeze Clause, OHKO Clause, Evasion Clause, Species Clause, Strict Damage Clause
rayquazamaster7776 sent out Azelf (lvl 100 Azelf).
Opponent sent out Gengarisu (lvl 100 Gengar ?).
Azelf used Stealth Rock.
Pointed stones float in the air around your foe's team!
Gengar used Shadow Ball.
It's super effective!
Azelf lost 100% of its health.
Azelf hung on using its Focus Sash!
Interesting matchup. Normally, they Trick and I can take advantage of the Scarf later on in the match, but it seems this one is a bit different. I know he's not Scarfed, so I'll finish him off next turn.
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Azelf used Psychic.
It's super effective!
Gengar lost 100% of its health.
Gengar hung on using its Focus Sash!
Gengar's special defence was lowered.
Gengar used Shadow Ball.
It's super effective!
Azelf lost 0% of its health.
rayquazamaster7776's Azelf fainted.
He has a Sash too, but oh well. Azelf did its job.
(5-6)
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rayquazamaster7776 switched in Suicune (lvl 100 Suicune).
Suicune is exerting its pressure!
Gengar used Destiny Bond.
Gengar is trying to take its foe with it!
Suicune used Hidden Power.
Gengar lost 0% of its health.
Opponent's Gengarisu fainted.
I always use HP Electric in these situations, incase they have a Vappy.
(5-5)
Suicune lost 10% of its health.
Gengar took Suicune with it!
rayquazamaster7776's Suicune fainted.
(4-5)
I should have seen this coming and CMd while he wasted his Destiny Bonds, which would not have taken long with Pressure. Oh well...
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rayquazamaster7776 switched in Gengar (lvl 100 Gengar ?).
Opponent switched in Tangrowth (lvl 100 Tangrowth ?).
Pointed stones dug into Tangrowth.
Tangrowth lost 12% of its health.
Double switch here. I decide to go to my ScarfGar.
Opponent switched in Omaygaud (lvl 100 Dusknoir ?).
Dusknoir is exerting its pressure!
Pointed stones dug into Dusknoir.
Dusknoir lost 12% of its health.
Gengar used Hidden Power.
A critical hit!
Dusknoir lost 35% of its health.
Even a crit is barely a 3HKO, not counting Lefties. Oh well, I know more of his team now.
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rayquazamaster7776 switched in Infernape (lvl 100 Infernape ?).
Dusknoir used Pain Split.
Dusknoir restored 20% of its health.
Infernape lost 20% of its health.
Mixape is very powerful, and should be able to damage Dusknoir with a STAB, Life Orb Flamethrower.
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Opponent switched in Donphette (lvl 100 Donphan ?).
Pointed stones dug into Donphan.
Donphan lost 6% of its health.
Infernape used Flamethrower.
Donphan lost 78% of its health.
Infernape lost 10% of its health.
OK... Not sure what he expected here, but either way, his Donphan is going down.
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Donphan used Ice Shard.
It's not very effective...
Infernape lost 9% of its health.
Infernape used Flamethrower.
Donphan lost 22% of its health.
MAAntek's Donphette fainted.
(4-4)
Infernape lost 10% of its health.
This still doesn't make any sense...
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Opponent switched in Omaygaud (lvl 100 Dusknoir ?).
Dusknoir is exerting its pressure!
Pointed stones dug into Dusknoir.
Dusknoir lost 12% of its health.
Infernape used Flamethrower.
Dusknoir lost 35% of its health.
Infernape lost 10% of its health.
Dusknoir used Will-o-wisp.

Understandable, as he probably expected a switch.
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Infernape used Flamethrower.
Dusknoir lost 37% of its health.
Infernape lost 10% of its health.
Dusknoir used Pain Split.
Dusknoir restored 12% of its health.
Infernape lost 12% of its health.
He's clearly trying to stall me out, but Flamethrower should insure he loses something too.
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Opponent switched in Titan (lvl 100 Gyarados ?).
Gyarados's intimidate cut Infernape's attack!
Pointed stones dug into Gyarados.
Gyarados lost 25% of its health.
Infernape used Flamethrower.
It's not very effective...
Gyarados lost 38% of its health.
Gyarados was burned!
Infernape lost 10% of its health.
Gyarados was hurt by its burn!
Gyarados lost 12% of its health.
Hooray for Stealth Rock! Gyrados is going down soon.
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Opponent switched in Omaygaud (lvl 100 Dusknoir ?).
Dusknoir is exerting its pressure!
Pointed stones dug into Dusknoir.
Dusknoir lost 12% of its health.
Infernape used Flamethrower.
Dusknoir lost 13% of its health.
Opponent's Omaygaud fainted.
(4-3)
Infernape lost 9% of its health.
rayquazamaster7776's Infernape fainted.
(3-3)
Double kill, but he lost a major wall.
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rayquazamaster7776 switched in Gengar (lvl 100 Gengar ?).
Opponent switched in Thanatos (lvl 100 Heatran ?).
Pointed stones dug into Heatran.
Heatran lost 12% of its health.
Gengar used Focus Blast.
Gengar's attack missed!
Heatran used Dark Pulse.
It's super effective!
Gengar lost 100% of its health.
rayquazamaster7776's Gengar fainted.
(2-3)
Stupid 70% accuracy. I just lost Gengar for nothing. Oh well, still have Scarfcross in reserve.
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rayquazamaster7776 switched in Heracross (lvl 100 Heracross ?).
Opponent switched in Tangrowth (lvl 100 Tangrowth ?).
Pointed stones dug into Tangrowth.
Tangrowth lost 12% of its health.
Heracross used Close Combat.
Tangrowth lost 31% of its health.
Heracross's defence was lowered.
Heracross's special defence was lowered.
Tangrowth comes back to play and takes the CC pretty well. I have a plan, though.
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rayquazamaster7776 switched in Salamence (lvl 100 Salamence ?).
Salamence's intimidate cut Tangrowth's attack!
Tangrowth used Knock Off.
Salamence lost 4% of its health.
Tangrowth knocked off foe Salamence's Yache Berry!
Losing my Yache Berry shouldn't affect this at all.
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Opponent switched in Thanatos (lvl 100 Heatran ?).
Pointed stones dug into Heatran.
Heatran lost 12% of its health.
Salamence used Outrage.
Salamence went on a rampage!
It's not very effective...
Heatran lost 27% of its health.
Weakaning whatever I can.
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Salamence used Outrage.
It's not very effective...
Heatran lost 25% of its health.
Heatran used Dragon Pulse.
It's super effective!
Salamence lost 96% of its health.
rayquazamaster7776's Salamence fainted.
Oh well, Salamence, you did your job.
(1-3)
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rayquazamaster7776 switched in Heracross (lvl 100 Heracross ?).
Heracross used Close Combat.
It's super effective!
Heatran lost 23% of its health.
Opponent's Thanatos fainted.
(1-2)
Heracross's defence was lowered.
Heracross's special defence was lowered.
1 down...
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Opponent switched in Tangrowth (lvl 100 Tangrowth ?).
Pointed stones dug into Tangrowth.
Tangrowth lost 12% of its health.
Heracross used Close Combat.
Tangrowth lost 31% of its health.
Heracross's defence was lowered.
Heracross's special defence was lowered.
Tangrowth used Sleep Powder.
Oh no, didn't see this coming. Power Whip should hurt with my lowered defences.
















Tangrowth's attack missed!
YES!!!!
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Heracross used Close Combat.
Tangrowth lost 20% of its health.
Opponent's Tangrowth fainted.
(1-1)
Heracross's defence was lowered.
Heracross's special defence was lowered.
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Opponent: GG
Opponent switched in Titan (lvl 100 Gyarados ?).
Gyarados's intimidate cut Heracross's attack!
Pointed stones dug into Gyarados.
Gyarados lost 25% of its health.
Opponent's Titan fainted.
(1-0)
rayquazamaster7776 wins!
rayquazamaster7776: gg
Opponent has left the room.
Yes, GG Opponent. In my opinion, though, it would probably have been smarter to send in Gyra first for the Intimidate. That might have changed the outcome of this match.

Props:
Heracross-for singlehandedly KOing half of the other team
Heatran+Gengar-for KOing 2 Pokes each
Opponent-for a good game.
Slops:
Focus Blast and Sleep Powder-for missing
This log was formatted using Warmachine Version 1.0

Thank you, and please enjoy my first warstory!
 
I don't know how many times I have to see those damn red's and blues!

Use soft colours people! Dark blues, greens a purples! You don't need to highlight each individual move either we can read we can see who does what. Please, I beg you, remove the colours from the battle text, either leave it bold or leave it normal, not colours. Then use a dark blue or green or purple (don't bold it) to make your comments. Comments should be about 3-4 sentences each, don't skimp out unless it is very very end game. The battle was alright, but you need to expand on the comments more to make this a good read.

http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/sprites.html get sprites from this website to make it visually appealing (use these when you post your and your opponents team).
 
Lacking comments, try to expand them a bit more, explain a bit more in depth about your moves, instead of a commentary about what we are reading.

Also, the title kind of gave it away, as soon as I saw it was a warstory it was pretty obvious it was to be hinged upon a miss, ruining the ending for me. :(
 
Lacking comments, and you got really lucky in this battle. Burning Gyarados and Tangrowth's Sleep Powder missing sealed Opponent's fate. Still, I've seen much worse. Colours weren't great though.
 
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