RU Offensive Empoleon

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[SET]
name: Offensive
move 1: Surf
move 2: Ice Beam
move 3: Grass Knot
move 4: Roost
item: Leftovers
ability: Competitive
nature: Modest
evs: 64 HP / 48 Def / 204 SpA / 56 SpD / 136 Spe
tera type: Fairy

[SET COMMENTS]

Offensive Empoleon is uniquely equipped to provide teams with a strong defensive and offensive presence given its natural bulk and exceptional coverage. Its Water / Steel typing and Special Defense is valuable in a metagame with strong Choice Scarf users such as Basculegion-F, Gardevoir, and Gengar threatening to use their strong STAB attacks to clean games. Surf is a reliable STAB option for Empoleon, as it hits a lot of the metagame for neutral damage. Ice Beam gives Empoleon coverage to hit Dragon- and Grass-types such as Cyclizar, Noivern, Salamence, and Amoonguss. Grass Knot hits Water-types like Basculegion-F and Slowbro while also giving it a means to damage Volcanion. Roost assures Empoleon can reliably recover throughout a game. Leftovers gives Empoleon even more longevity and offsets most entry hazard damage. Competitive is useful for getting a boost from Defog attempts, Intimidate Attack drops, and notably from Moonblast Special Attack drops, as Empoleon often switches into Fezandipiti and Gardevoir. Modest is used given Empoleon has great natural bulk without much investment, giving it more wallbreaking power without offsetting the defensive utility it has. The EV spread provided covers a few relevant defensive and offensive benchmarks. The defensive investments allow Empoleon to survive Hippowdon's Earthquake after taking Stealth Rock damage, Conkeldurr's Mach Punch after taking one layer of Spikes damage, Salamence's Earthquake after taking one layer of Spikes damage, and two Dark Pulses from +2 Modest Blastoise. Offensively, Empoleon threatens to 2HKO Assault Vest Cyclizar with Ice Beam after it takes Stealth Rock damage, 2HKO Slowbro with Grass Knot, and has a favorable roll to OHKO both Hippowdon and Palossand with Surf after they take Stealth Rock damage. The Speed investment allows Empoleon to outspeed Adamant Conkeldurr. Tera Fairy flips its Fighting weakness into a resistance while also making Electric- and Ground-type attacks neutral, allowing Empoleon to stay in against Krookodile and Thundurus if needed.

Offensive Empoleon fits on balance and bulky offense teams, as it pivots into many of the special attackers in the tier and provides an immediate offensive response. Strong Fighting- and Ground-types like Conkeldurr, Galarian Zapdos, Krookodile, and Mienshao appreciate Empoleon switching into Fairy- and Water-type attacks, namely from Basculegion-F and Gardevoir. Offensive Empoleon fits well on teams that can use alternative entry hazard setters like Hippowdon and Jirachi so that it can maximize its offensive presence. Defensive teammates like Levitate Galarian Weezing and Noivern can switch into to Ground- and Fighting-type attacks while removing entry hazards and pivoting. Physical setup Pokemon like Swords Dance Mienshao, Okidogi, and Terrakion benefit from Empoleon being able to take on Slowbro and other bulky Water-types. Magnet Pull Magnezone can partner with Empoleon to trap and eliminate Steel-type Pokemon like opposing Empoleon and Jirachi, two of the better defensive checks to offensive Empoleon. Salamence is an excellent teammate for Empoleon, as it can threaten to hit most of the metagame with its excellent mixed offensive attacks and provide another bulky defensive presence with reliable recovery. Sticky Web setters like Araquanid and Galvantula can partner with and enable offensive Empoleon, as it outspeeds Adamant Overqwil, Adamant Okidogi, and Jolly Bisharp after they get slowed down.

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[SET]
name: Offensive
move 1: Surf
move 2: Ice Beam
move 3: Grass Knot
move 4: Roost
item: Leftovers
ability: Competitive
nature: Modest
evs: 64 HP / 48 Def / 204 SpA / 56 SpD / 136 Spe
tera type: Fairy

[SET COMMENTS]

Offensive Empoleon is uniquely equipped to provide teams with a strong defensive and offensive presence given its natural bulk and exceptional coverage. A specially defensive Water- and Steel-type is valuable in a metagame with strong Choice Scarf users such as Basculegion-F, Gardevoir, and Gengar threatening to use their strong STAB attacks to clean games. Surf is a reliable STAB option for Empoleon as it hits a lot of the metagame for neutral damage. Ice Beam gives Empoleon coverage to hit the Dragon- and Flying Grass-types in the tier such as Cyclizar, Noivern, and Salamence, (AC) and Amoonguss. Grass Knot hits Water-types like Basculegion-F and Slowbro while also giving you a means to damage Volcanion. Roost assures Empoleon can reliably recover throughout a game. Leftovers gives Empoleon even more longevity and offsets most entry hazard damage. Modest is used given Empoleon has great natural bulk without much investment, giving it more breaking power without offsetting the defensive utility it has. The EV spread provided covers a few relevant defensive and offensive benchmarks. The defensive investments allow Empoleon to survive a Hippowdon Earthquake after taking Stealth Rock damage, a Conkeldurr Mach Punch after taking one layer of Spikes damage, and a Salamence Earthquake after taking one layer of Spikes damage. Mention the SpDef benchmarks, like surviving two +2 Modest Blastoise Dark Pulses. Offensively, Empoleon threatens to 2HKO Assault Vest Cyclizar with Ice Beam after it takes Stealth Rock damage, 2HKO Slowbro with Grass Knot, and has a favorable roll to OHKO both Hippowdon and Palossand with Surf after they take Stealth Rock damage. Speed EVs beat Ada Conk. Tera Fairy flips the Fighting-type weakness into a resistance while also making Electric- and Ground-type attacks neutral, allowing Empoleon to stay in against Krookodile and Thundurus if needed. Mention the impact of Competitive, like Moonblast drops, Defog or Intim.

Offensive Empoleon fits on balance and bulky offense teams as it pivots into many of the special attackers in the tier and provides an immediate offensive response. Teammates that appreciate Empoleon switching into Fairy- and Water-type attacks, namely from Basculegion-F and Gardevoir, are strong Fighting- and Ground-types like Conkeldurr, Galarian Zapdos, Krookodile, and Mienshao. Offensive Empoleon fits well on teams that can use alternative entry hazard setters like Hippowdon and Jirachi so that it can maximize its offensive presence. Defensive teammates like Levitate Galarian Weezing and Noivern can provide switch-ins to Ground- and Fighting-type attacks while removing entry hazards and pivoting. Physical setup Pokemon like Swords Dance Bisharp, Mimikyu, and Terrakion benefit from Empoleon being able to take on Slowbro and other bulky Water-types. I don't like Bisharp and Mimikyu here, they already have the advantage into Slowbro. Use some other options like Okidogi, Mienshao or DD Necrozma/Gyara. Magnet Pull Magnezone can partner with Empoleon to trap and eliminate Steel-type Pokemon like opposing Empoleon and Jirachi, two of the better defensive checks to Offensive Empoleon. Salamence is an excellent teammate for Empoleon as it can threaten to hit most of the metagame with its excellent mixed offensive attacks and provide another bulky defensive presence with reliable recovery. Sticky Web probably deserves a mention.

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/flampoke.654091/
Quality checked by:
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A good start, just a few things missing, get these and QC 1/2!
 
Put Sticky Web as a bonus for competitive, since switching in gives you +2 SpA. In the last line, mention Sticky Web helps Empoleon be more threatening against faster Pokemon since their Speed is reduced. I would also probably mention Torrent somewhere, just because a Torrent boosted Surf gets benchmark KOs especially vs Blastoise:
204+ SpA Torrent Empoleon Surf vs. 0 HP / 4 SpD Tera Electric Blastoise: 199-235 (66.5 - 78.5%) -- guaranteed 2HKO
0- Atk Cyclizar Rapid Spin vs. 0 HP / 0 Def Tera Electric Blastoise: 48-57 (16 - 19%) -- possible 6HKO
0- Atk Cyclizar Knock Off (97.5 BP) vs. 0 HP / 0 Def Tera Electric Blastoise: 61-72 (20.4 - 24%) -- guaranteed 5HKO

vs

204+ SpA Empoleon Surf vs. 0 HP / 4 SpD Tera Electric Blastoise: 133-157 (44.4 - 52.5%) -- 18.4% chance to 2HKO


Great work, qc 2/2
 
1/1 GP Team done lmk on discord if you need to fix the webs part
[SET]
name: Offensive
move 1: Surf
move 2: Ice Beam
move 3: Grass Knot
move 4: Roost
item: Leftovers
ability: Competitive
nature: Modest
evs: 64 HP / 48 Def / 204 SpA / 56 SpD / 136 Spe
tera type: Fairy

[SET COMMENTS]
Offensive Empoleon is uniquely equipped to provide teams with a strong defensive and offensive presence given its natural bulk and exceptional coverage. A specially defensive Water- Its Water / Steel typing and Steel-type Special Defense is valuable in a metagame with strong Choice Scarf users such as Basculegion-F, Gardevoir, and Gengar threatening to use their strong STAB attacks to clean games. Surf is a reliable STAB option for Empoleon, (AC) as it hits a lot of the metagame for neutral damage. Ice Beam gives Empoleon coverage to hit the Dragon- and Grass-types in the tier such as Amoonguss (RC) Cyclizar, Noivern, Salamence, (AC) and Salamence Amoonguss (list pairs should match each other; your first list says dragon- and grass-types, so the second list is changed to have all the dragons first and the grass types second). Grass Knot hits Water-types like Basculegion-F and Slowbro while also giving you it (we don't refer to pokemon as 'you') a means to damage Volcanion. Roost assures Empoleon can reliably recover throughout a game. Leftovers gives Empoleon even more longevity and offsets most entry hazard damage. Competitive is useful for getting a boost from Defog attempts, Intimidates Intimidate Attack drops, and notably from Moonblast Special Attack drops, (AC) as Empoleon often switches into Fezandipiti and Gardevoir. Modest is used given Empoleon has great natural bulk without much investment, giving it more breaking wallbreaking power without offsetting the defensive utility it has. The EV spread provided covers a few relevant defensive and offensive benchmarks. The defensive investments allow Empoleon to survive a Hippowdon's Earthquake after taking Stealth Rock damage, a Conkeldurr's Mach Punch after taking one layer of Spikes damage, a Salamence's Earthquake after taking one layer of Spikes damage, and two Dark Pulses from +2 Modest Blastoise. Offensively, Empoleon threatens to 2HKO Assault Vest Cyclizar with Ice Beam after it takes Stealth Rock damage, 2HKO Slowbro with Grass Knot, and has a favorable roll to OHKO both Hippowdon and Palossand with Surf after they take Stealth Rock damage. The Speed investment allows Empoleon to outspeed Adamant Conkeldurr. Tera Fairy flips the its Fighting-type weakness into a resistance while also making Electric- and Ground-type attacks neutral, allowing Empoleon to stay in against Krookodile and Thundurus if needed. The Speed investment allows Empoleon to outspeed Adamant Conkeldurr. (ev stuff should be together so a reader can follow the paragraph, going from evs to tera back to evs isn't a clear structure)

Offensive Empoleon fits on balance and bulky offense teams, (AC) as it pivots into many of the special attackers in the tier and provides an immediate offensive response. Teammates that Strong Fighting- and Ground-types like Conkeldurr, Galarian Zapdos, Krookodile, and Mienshao appreciate Empoleon switching into Fairy- and Water-type attacks, namely from Basculegion-F and Gardevoir are strong Fighting- and Ground-types like Conkeldurr, Galarian Zapdos, Krookodile, and Mienshao. Offensive Empoleon fits well on teams that can use alternative entry hazard setters like Hippowdon and Jirachi so that it can maximize its offensive presence. Defensive teammates like Levitate Galarian Weezing and Noivern can provide switch-ins to into Ground- and Fighting-type attacks while removing entry hazards and pivoting. Physical setup Pokemon like Swords Dance Mienshao, Okidogi, and Terrakion benefit from Empoleon being able to take on Slowbro and other bulky Water-types. Magnet Pull Magnezone can partner with Empoleon to trap and eliminate Steel-type Pokemon like opposing Empoleon and Jirachi, two of the better defensive checks to offensive Empoleon. Salamence is an excellent teammate for Empoleon, (AC) as it can threaten to hit most of the metagame with its excellent mixed offensive attacks and provide another bulky defensive presence with reliable recovery. Sticky Web is also a way for Empoleon to get a Competitive boost, (AC) as it is already rather slow but can threaten big damage against offensive structures after the boost. (not clear what you mean here - do you mean webs lets it get the boost because of opposing defog? or do you mean it can beat opposing webs teams because it gets the boost? if the latter, it's not clear bc you go right into webs setters for your team after, and if it's the former, just make it clearer that it's the defog not the webs itself) Sticky Web setters like Araquanid and Galvantula can partner with and enable offensive Empoleon, (AC) as it will benefit from attacking first against much of the metagame, as the EV spread provided outspeeds Adamant Overqwil, Adamant Okidogi, and Jolly Bisharp after they get slowed down.

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/flampoke.654091/
Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/machjacob.555741/
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/feen.231398/
Grammar checked by:
 
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