Quality Control Ogerpon-H Revamp ( QC 0/1 )

[July]

[SET]
Ogerpon-Hearthflame (F) @ Hearthflame Mask
Ability: Mold Breaker
Tera Type: Fire
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Swords Dance
- Ivy Cudgel
- Horn Leech
- Play Rough

[SET COMMENTS]
Ogerpon-H serves as a powerful setup sweeper on Fire teams, due to its great speed stat allowing it outspeed foes such as Iron Treads, Life Orb Landorus and Urshifu-S, and a powerful attack stat enabling it to become very threatening after a Swords Dance and or in sun. Mold Breaker compliments Ogerpon-H's ability to sweep by allowing it to break through Dondozo, OHKO Mimikyu in sun and OHKO Heatran with Ivy Cudgel after a Swords Dance in sun. Ivy Cudgel under sun allows Ogerpon-H to wipe out foes such as Life Orb Landorus-I, Corviknight, Hoopa-U, Skarmory and Volcarona. After a Swords Dance, Ivy Cudgel in sun enables Ogerpon-H to OHKO almost any bulky foe which would normally be 2HKO in sun such as Hatterene, Gliscor, Iron Hands, Hisuian Goodra and Galarian Weezing. Horn Leech provides the utility to regenerate health while also exerting offensive pressure letting Ogerpon-H threaten Water- and Ground- type foes such as Swampert, Mamoswine, Hisuian Samurott and, Urshifu-R, Ursaluna and Hippowdon after a Swords Dance. Play Rough improves matchup into Dragon-types threatening a 2HKO on Garchomp and OHKO on Roaring Moon, Dragapult, and Latios after minor chip.

Ninetales is one of the prominent partners of Ogerpon-H as it sets up sun. It further more provides utility by burning foes such as Urshifu and Great Tusk with Will-o-Wisp and Encore allowing Ogerpon-H to set up on encored mons. Torkoal is another partner who can set up sun while also providing hazard control through Rapid Spin. Cinderace is another ally of Ogerpon-H which assists with hazard removal due to access to Court Change which covers for Ogerpon-H's weakness to hazards. Heatran while being a temporary Ground-immunity with the help of Air Balloon also traps annoying walls such as Clodsire and Toxapex with Magma Storm which give a hard time to Ogerpon-H and knock them out with Earth Power and Magma Storm chip. It also notably OHKOes Flutter Mane with Heavy Slam which can threaten Ogerpon-H with Power Gem if its chipped. Volcarona is a fellow special setup sweeper which can setup via Quiver Dance quickly and get threatening due to being able to recover with Morning Sun, it removing threatening Dark-types such as Greninja, Meowscarada and Ting Lu. It also can punish physical attackers such as Urshifu-R and Snealser with Flame Body. Ceruledge is another fire staple who can sweep whole teams late game on it's own and compliment Ogerpon-H's ability to weaken foes early on so Ceruledge can clean up end game. Weak Armour paired with Swords Dance allows Ceruledge to remove threats faster then Ogerpon-H such as Dragapult, Flutter Mane and Choice Scarfed foes once it sets up.



[STRATEGY COMMENTS]
Other Options
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Fire
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Power Whip is an option which allows Ogerpon-H to check foes such as Toxapex and Clodsire after a Swords Dance which can annoy it normally. Rock Tomb is an another alternative which allows Ogerpon-H to hit Flying-type foes such as Moltres and Dragonite. Trailblaze is another option which allows Ogerpon-H to out speed faster threats and Choice Scarfed foes such as Choice Scarf Landorus, Non Choice Scarf Dragapult, Non Choice Scarf Meowscarada and Choice Scarf Hoopa-U.

[SET CREDITS]

 

[boomp]

July can you have this done by the 16th? otherwise im locking a reassigning

 

[kiru]

x

[SET]
Ogerpon-Hearthflame (F) @ Hearthflame Mask
Ability: Mold Breaker
Tera Type: Fire (Doesn't apply to metagame)
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Swords Dance
- Ivy Cudgel
- Horn Leech
- Play Rough

[SET COMMENTS]
Ogerpon-H serves as a powerful setup sweeper in sun on Fire teams, due to its great speed stat allowing it outspeed foes such as Iron Treads, (AC) Life Orb Landorus, (AC) [comments: somethings Landorus still runs Choice Scarf and specifying the LO feels like more clarity when from a building pov it just has access to Sludge Wave maybe. Very little pokes like this dismantles Fires aggressive core so feels important here.] and Urshifu-S, (ASC) and a powerful attack stat enabling it to become very threatening after a Swords Dance and or in sun. Mold Breaker compliments Ogerpon-H's ability to sweep by allowing it to break physical walls like Dondozo and notably OHKO Skarmory in sun by Ivy Cudgel (RC) and OHKO Heatran with Ivy Cudgel after a Swords Dance in sun. (AP) and OHKO Dondozo with Horn Leech after a Swords Dance. Swords Dance allows Ogerpon-H to easily setup on forced switches such as Mamoswine, Amoonguss and Gholdengo. (Well they probably just can't swap out tbh if they ever go into Amoonguss or Gholdengo into sun considering the resources on Grass, Poison, Ghost, and Steel. Maybe just remove this. the intro already covers a good bit of stuff and SD is passively mentioned in the sentence before and sentence one. id consider this fluff) [Comments: you have a sentence on mold breaker and it doesnt neccesarily talk about sturdy skarm/unuaware donodozo. how is skarm even an issue for fire? i guess it does ohko but categorizing it as like "sturdy" users like skarm ogerpon etc and then etc feels more on profile for just the nature of this being a fire analysis. id reshape that a little and just pay attention to how much you use "in sun" because what happens when ogerpon isnt in sun well itll still have to sd to wallbreak] Ivy Cudgel under sun allows Ogerpon-H to wipe out foes such as Life Orb Landorus-I, Corviknight, Hoopa-U, Skarmory and Volcarona. After a Swords Dance, Ivy Cudgel in sun enables Ogerpon-H to OHKO almost any bulky foe which would normally be 2HKO in sun such as Hatterene, Gliscor, Iron Hands, Hisuian Goodra and Galarian Weezing. Horn Leech provides the utility to regenerate health while also exerting offensive pressure letting Ogerpon-H threaten Water- and Ground- type foes such as Swampert, Mamoswine, Hisuian Samurott and, Urshifu-R, Ursaluna and Hippowdon after a Swords Dance. Play Rough improves matchup into Dragon-types threatening a 2HKO on Garchomp and OHKO on Roaring Moon, Dragapult, and Latios after minor chip.

Ninetales is one of the prominent partners of Ogerpon-H as it sets up sun allowing Ivy Cudgel to get boosted and reach notable 2HKOes on bulky foes such as Hatterene, Hisuian Goodra and Gliscor. ["Ninetales and torkoal are prominent weather setters. ninetales profiles hwish , coal provides spin. maybe just be direct here, the reader gets the ivy cudgel damage here] It further more provides utility by burning foes such as Urshifu and Great Tusk with Will-o-Wisp and Encore allowing Ogerpon-H to set up on encored mons. Cinderace is another ally of Ogerpon-H which assists with hazard removal due to access to Court Change which covers for Ogerpon-H's weakness to hazards. Heatran while being a temporary Ground-immunity with the help of Air Balloon also traps annoying walls such as Clodsire and Toxapex with Magma Storm which give a hard time to Ogerpon-H and knock them out with Earth Power and Magma Storm chip. It also notably OHKOes Flutter Mane with Heavy Slam which can threaten Ogerpon-H with Power Gem if its chipped. Volcarona is a fellow special setup sweeper which can setup via Quiver Dance quickly and get threatening due to being able to recover with Morning Sun, it removing threatening Dark-types such as Greninja, Meowscarada and Ting Lu. It also can punish physical attackers such as Urshifu-R and Snealser with Flame Body. Ceruledge is another fire staple who can sweep whole teams late game on it's own and compliment Ogerpon-H's ability to weaken foes early on so Ceruledge can clean up end game. Weak Armour paired with Swords Dance allows Ceruledge to remove threats faster then Ogerpon-H such as Dragapult, Flutter Mane and Choice Scarfed foes once it sets up.



[STRATEGY COMMENTS]
Other Options
=============
Fire
-----------
Power Whip is an option which allows Ogerpon-H to check foes such as Toxapex and Clodsire after a Swords Dance which can annoy it normally. Rock Tomb is an another alternative which allows Ogerpon-H to hit Flying-type foes such as Moltres and Dragonite. Trailblaze is another option which allows Ogerpon-H to out speed faster threats and Choice Scarfed foes such as Choice Scarf Landorus, Non Choice Scarf Dragapult, Non Choice Scarf Meowscarada and Choice Scarf Hoopa-U.

[SET CREDITS]

lmk when this is implemented July

 

[July]

x

[SET]
Ogerpon-Hearthflame (F) @ Hearthflame Mask
Ability: Mold Breaker
Tera Type: Fire (Doesn't apply to metagame)
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Swords Dance
- Ivy Cudgel
- Horn Leech
- Play Rough

[SET COMMENTS]
Ogerpon-H serves as a powerful setup sweeper in sun on Fire teams, due to its great speed stat allowing it outspeed foes such as Iron Treads, (AC) Life Orb Landorus, (AC) [comments: somethings Landorus still runs Choice Scarf and specifying the LO feels like more clarity when from a building pov it just has access to Sludge Wave maybe. Very little pokes like this dismantles Fires aggressive core so feels important here.] and Urshifu-S, (ASC) and a powerful attack stat enabling it to become very threatening after a Swords Dance and or in sun. Mold Breaker compliments Ogerpon-H's ability to sweep by allowing it to break physical walls like Dondozo and notably OHKO Skarmory in sun by Ivy Cudgel (RC) and OHKO Heatran with Ivy Cudgel after a Swords Dance in sun. (AP) and OHKO Dondozo with Horn Leech after a Swords Dance. Swords Dance allows Ogerpon-H to easily setup on forced switches such as Mamoswine, Amoonguss and Gholdengo. (Well they probably just can't swap out tbh if they ever go into Amoonguss or Gholdengo into sun considering the resources on Grass, Poison, Ghost, and Steel. Maybe just remove this. the intro already covers a good bit of stuff and SD is passively mentioned in the sentence before and sentence one. id consider this fluff) [Comments: you have a sentence on mold breaker and it doesnt neccesarily talk about sturdy skarm/unuaware donodozo. how is skarm even an issue for fire? i guess it does ohko but categorizing it as like "sturdy" users like skarm ogerpon etc and then etc feels more on profile for just the nature of this being a fire analysis. id reshape that a little and just pay attention to how much you use "in sun" because what happens when ogerpon isnt in sun well itll still have to sd to wallbreak] Ivy Cudgel under sun allows Ogerpon-H to wipe out foes such as Life Orb Landorus-I, Corviknight, Hoopa-U, Skarmory and Volcarona. After a Swords Dance, Ivy Cudgel in sun enables Ogerpon-H to OHKO almost any bulky foe which would normally be 2HKO in sun such as Hatterene, Gliscor, Iron Hands, Hisuian Goodra and Galarian Weezing. Horn Leech provides the utility to regenerate health while also exerting offensive pressure letting Ogerpon-H threaten Water- and Ground- type foes such as Swampert, Mamoswine, Hisuian Samurott and, Urshifu-R, Ursaluna and Hippowdon after a Swords Dance. Play Rough improves matchup into Dragon-types threatening a 2HKO on Garchomp and OHKO on Roaring Moon, Dragapult, and Latios after minor chip.

Ninetales is one of the prominent partners of Ogerpon-H as it sets up sun allowing Ivy Cudgel to get boosted and reach notable 2HKOes on bulky foes such as Hatterene, Hisuian Goodra and Gliscor. ["Ninetales and torkoal are prominent weather setters. ninetales profiles hwish , coal provides spin. maybe just be direct here, the reader gets the ivy cudgel damage here] It further more provides utility by burning foes such as Urshifu and Great Tusk with Will-o-Wisp and Encore allowing Ogerpon-H to set up on encored mons. Cinderace is another ally of Ogerpon-H which assists with hazard removal due to access to Court Change which covers for Ogerpon-H's weakness to hazards. Heatran while being a temporary Ground-immunity with the help of Air Balloon also traps annoying walls such as Clodsire and Toxapex with Magma Storm which give a hard time to Ogerpon-H and knock them out with Earth Power and Magma Storm chip. It also notably OHKOes Flutter Mane with Heavy Slam which can threaten Ogerpon-H with Power Gem if its chipped. Volcarona is a fellow special setup sweeper which can setup via Quiver Dance quickly and get threatening due to being able to recover with Morning Sun, it removing threatening Dark-types such as Greninja, Meowscarada and Ting Lu. It also can punish physical attackers such as Urshifu-R and Snealser with Flame Body. Ceruledge is another fire staple who can sweep whole teams late game on it's own and compliment Ogerpon-H's ability to weaken foes early on so Ceruledge can clean up end game. Weak Armour paired with Swords Dance allows Ceruledge to remove threats faster then Ogerpon-H such as Dragapult, Flutter Mane and Choice Scarfed foes once it sets up.



[STRATEGY COMMENTS]
Other Options
=============
Fire
-----------
Power Whip is an option which allows Ogerpon-H to check foes such as Toxapex and Clodsire after a Swords Dance which can annoy it normally. Rock Tomb is an another alternative which allows Ogerpon-H to hit Flying-type foes such as Moltres and Dragonite. Trailblaze is another option which allows Ogerpon-H to out speed faster threats and Choice Scarfed foes such as Choice Scarf Landorus, Non Choice Scarf Dragapult, Non Choice Scarf Meowscarada and Choice Scarf Hoopa-U.

[SET CREDITS]

lmk when this is implemented July

Implemented.