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[SET]
Ogerpon-Hearthflame (F) @ Hearthflame Mask
Name: Swords Dance (Fire)
Ability: Mold Breaker
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Swords Dance
- Ivy Cudgel
- Horn Leech
- Play Rough

[SET COMMENTS]

Swords Dance Ogerpon-H is the big dog of fire teams courtesy of Hearthflame Mask increasing the output damage, part Grass-typing allowing it to fire back in the Water and Ground matchup and Mold Breaker ignoring threatening foes such as Dondozo and Heatran. After a Swords Dance, Ivy Cudgel allows Ogerpon-H to easily break through bulky foes such as Hisuian Goodra, Clodsire, and Life Orb Landorus-I. Horn Leech provides the utility to regenerate health while also exerting offensive pressure letting Ogerpon-H threaten Mamoswine, Hisuian Samurott, and Urshifu-R after a boost. At +2, Play Rough improves matchup into Dragon-types threatening a OHKO on Garchomp and Dragonite.

Ninetales or Torkoal are most the prominent partners of Ogerpon-H as they set up sun allowing Ogerpon-H's Ivy Cudgel to OHKO foes like Life Orb Landorus-I and after a Swords Dance OHKO bulky foes such as Gliscor, Iron Hands and Galarian Weezing. Ninetales provides utility by burning foes such as Urshifu-R and non-Choice Scarf Great Tusk with Will-O-Wisp, Healing Wish provides Ogerpon-H another chance to sweep once it has been chipped down and Encore allowing Ogerpon-H to set up on encored mons such as Sableye, Pecharunt and Toxapex. On the other hand, Torkoal provides hazard control through Rapid Spin, threaten Roaring Moon with Body Press while tanking it's moves and also sets up Stealth Rock which chips foes such as Alolan Muk and Spectrier allowing Ogerpon-H to sweep more easily. Cinderace is another ally of Ogerpon-H which assists with hazard removal due to access to Court Change which covers for Ogerpon-H's weakness to hazards, it also serves a fast pivot via U-Turn and provides priority in Sucker Punch removing chipped foes. Heatran while being a temporary Ground-immunity with the help of Air Balloon also traps and removes Toxapex which is a big annoyance to Ogerpon-H. It also notably OHKOes Flutter Mane with Heavy Slam which can threaten Ogerpon-H with Power Gem if its chipped. Volcarona and Ceruledge are fellow setup sweepers which appreciate Ogerpon-H's ability to weaken threatening foes such as Hisuian Goodra and Ting-Lu so they can clean up late game.

[STRATEGY COMMENTS]
Other Options
=============
Fire
-----------
Power Whip is an option which allows Ogerpon-H to threaten Toxapex after a Swords Dance which can annoy it normally. Rock Tomb is an another alternative which allows Ogerpon-H to deal with Moltres. Trailblaze is another option which allows Ogerpon-H to out speed faster threats like Iron Valiant and Greninja.

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/july.667394/
Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/boomp.637295/
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[SET]
Ogerpon-Hearthflame (F) @ Hearthflame Mask
Ability: Mold Breaker
Tera Type: Fire (Doesn't apply to metagame)
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Swords Dance
- Ivy Cudgel
- Horn Leech
- Play Rough

[SET COMMENTS]
Ogerpon-H serves as a powerful setup sweeper in sun on Fire teams, due to its great speed stat allowing it outspeed foes such as Iron Treads, (AC) Life Orb Landorus, (AC) [comments: somethings Landorus still runs Choice Scarf and specifying the LO feels like more clarity when from a building pov it just has access to Sludge Wave maybe. Very little pokes like this dismantles Fires aggressive core so feels important here.] and Urshifu-S, (ASC) and a powerful attack stat enabling it to become very threatening after a Swords Dance and or in sun. Mold Breaker compliments Ogerpon-H's ability to sweep by allowing it to break physical walls like Dondozo and notably OHKO Skarmory in sun by Ivy Cudgel (RC) and OHKO Heatran with Ivy Cudgel after a Swords Dance in sun. (AP) and OHKO Dondozo with Horn Leech after a Swords Dance. Swords Dance allows Ogerpon-H to easily setup on forced switches such as Mamoswine, Amoonguss and Gholdengo. (Well they probably just can't swap out tbh if they ever go into Amoonguss or Gholdengo into sun considering the resources on Grass, Poison, Ghost, and Steel. Maybe just remove this. the intro already covers a good bit of stuff and SD is passively mentioned in the sentence before and sentence one. id consider this fluff) [Comments: you have a sentence on mold breaker and it doesnt neccesarily talk about sturdy skarm/unuaware donodozo. how is skarm even an issue for fire? i guess it does ohko but categorizing it as like "sturdy" users like skarm ogerpon etc and then etc feels more on profile for just the nature of this being a fire analysis. id reshape that a little and just pay attention to how much you use "in sun" because what happens when ogerpon isnt in sun well itll still have to sd to wallbreak] Ivy Cudgel under sun allows Ogerpon-H to wipe out foes such as Life Orb Landorus-I, Corviknight, Hoopa-U, Skarmory and Volcarona. After a Swords Dance, Ivy Cudgel in sun enables Ogerpon-H to OHKO almost any bulky foe which would normally be 2HKO in sun such as Hatterene, Gliscor, Iron Hands, Hisuian Goodra and Galarian Weezing. Horn Leech provides the utility to regenerate health while also exerting offensive pressure letting Ogerpon-H threaten Water- and Ground- type foes such as Swampert, Mamoswine, Hisuian Samurott and, Urshifu-R, Ursaluna and Hippowdon after a Swords Dance. Play Rough improves matchup into Dragon-types threatening a 2HKO on Garchomp and OHKO on Roaring Moon, Dragapult, and Latios after minor chip.

Ninetales is one of the prominent partners of Ogerpon-H as it sets up sun allowing Ivy Cudgel to get boosted and reach notable 2HKOes on bulky foes such as Hatterene, Hisuian Goodra and Gliscor. ["Ninetales and torkoal are prominent weather setters. ninetales profiles hwish , coal provides spin. maybe just be direct here, the reader gets the ivy cudgel damage here] It further more provides utility by burning foes such as Urshifu and Great Tusk with Will-o-Wisp and Encore allowing Ogerpon-H to set up on encored mons. Cinderace is another ally of Ogerpon-H which assists with hazard removal due to access to Court Change which covers for Ogerpon-H's weakness to hazards. Heatran while being a temporary Ground-immunity with the help of Air Balloon also traps annoying walls such as Clodsire and Toxapex with Magma Storm which give a hard time to Ogerpon-H and knock them out with Earth Power and Magma Storm chip. It also notably OHKOes Flutter Mane with Heavy Slam which can threaten Ogerpon-H with Power Gem if its chipped. Volcarona is a fellow special setup sweeper which can setup via Quiver Dance quickly and get threatening due to being able to recover with Morning Sun, it removing threatening Dark-types such as Greninja, Meowscarada and Ting Lu. It also can punish physical attackers such as Urshifu-R and Snealser with Flame Body. Ceruledge is another fire staple who can sweep whole teams late game on it's own and compliment Ogerpon-H's ability to weaken foes early on so Ceruledge can clean up end game. Weak Armour paired with Swords Dance allows Ceruledge to remove threats faster then Ogerpon-H such as Dragapult, Flutter Mane and Choice Scarfed foes once it sets up.



[STRATEGY COMMENTS]
Other Options
=============
Fire
-----------
Power Whip is an option which allows Ogerpon-H to check foes such as Toxapex and Clodsire after a Swords Dance which can annoy it normally. Rock Tomb is an another alternative which allows Ogerpon-H to hit Flying-type foes such as Moltres and Dragonite. Trailblaze is another option which allows Ogerpon-H to out speed faster threats and Choice Scarfed foes such as Choice Scarf Landorus, Non Choice Scarf Dragapult, Non Choice Scarf Meowscarada and Choice Scarf Hoopa-U.

[SET CREDITS]

lmk when this is implemented July
 
kiru said:
[SET]
Ogerpon-Hearthflame (F) @ Hearthflame Mask
Ability: Mold Breaker
Tera Type: Fire (Doesn't apply to metagame)
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Swords Dance
- Ivy Cudgel
- Horn Leech
- Play Rough

[SET COMMENTS]
Ogerpon-H serves as a powerful setup sweeper in sun on Fire teams, due to its great speed stat allowing it outspeed foes such as Iron Treads, (AC) Life Orb Landorus, (AC) [comments: somethings Landorus still runs Choice Scarf and specifying the LO feels like more clarity when from a building pov it just has access to Sludge Wave maybe. Very little pokes like this dismantles Fires aggressive core so feels important here.] and Urshifu-S, (ASC) and a powerful attack stat enabling it to become very threatening after a Swords Dance and or in sun. Mold Breaker compliments Ogerpon-H's ability to sweep by allowing it to break physical walls like Dondozo and notably OHKO Skarmory in sun by Ivy Cudgel (RC) and OHKO Heatran with Ivy Cudgel after a Swords Dance in sun. (AP) and OHKO Dondozo with Horn Leech after a Swords Dance. Swords Dance allows Ogerpon-H to easily setup on forced switches such as Mamoswine, Amoonguss and Gholdengo. (Well they probably just can't swap out tbh if they ever go into Amoonguss or Gholdengo into sun considering the resources on Grass, Poison, Ghost, and Steel. Maybe just remove this. the intro already covers a good bit of stuff and SD is passively mentioned in the sentence before and sentence one. id consider this fluff) [Comments: you have a sentence on mold breaker and it doesnt neccesarily talk about sturdy skarm/unuaware donodozo. how is skarm even an issue for fire? i guess it does ohko but categorizing it as like "sturdy" users like skarm ogerpon etc and then etc feels more on profile for just the nature of this being a fire analysis. id reshape that a little and just pay attention to how much you use "in sun" because what happens when ogerpon isnt in sun well itll still have to sd to wallbreak] Ivy Cudgel under sun allows Ogerpon-H to wipe out foes such as Life Orb Landorus-I, Corviknight, Hoopa-U, Skarmory and Volcarona. After a Swords Dance, Ivy Cudgel in sun enables Ogerpon-H to OHKO almost any bulky foe which would normally be 2HKO in sun such as Hatterene, Gliscor, Iron Hands, Hisuian Goodra and Galarian Weezing. Horn Leech provides the utility to regenerate health while also exerting offensive pressure letting Ogerpon-H threaten Water- and Ground- type foes such as Swampert, Mamoswine, Hisuian Samurott and, Urshifu-R, Ursaluna and Hippowdon after a Swords Dance. Play Rough improves matchup into Dragon-types threatening a 2HKO on Garchomp and OHKO on Roaring Moon, Dragapult, and Latios after minor chip.

Ninetales is one of the prominent partners of Ogerpon-H as it sets up sun allowing Ivy Cudgel to get boosted and reach notable 2HKOes on bulky foes such as Hatterene, Hisuian Goodra and Gliscor. ["Ninetales and torkoal are prominent weather setters. ninetales profiles hwish , coal provides spin. maybe just be direct here, the reader gets the ivy cudgel damage here] It further more provides utility by burning foes such as Urshifu and Great Tusk with Will-o-Wisp and Encore allowing Ogerpon-H to set up on encored mons. Cinderace is another ally of Ogerpon-H which assists with hazard removal due to access to Court Change which covers for Ogerpon-H's weakness to hazards. Heatran while being a temporary Ground-immunity with the help of Air Balloon also traps annoying walls such as Clodsire and Toxapex with Magma Storm which give a hard time to Ogerpon-H and knock them out with Earth Power and Magma Storm chip. It also notably OHKOes Flutter Mane with Heavy Slam which can threaten Ogerpon-H with Power Gem if its chipped. Volcarona is a fellow special setup sweeper which can setup via Quiver Dance quickly and get threatening due to being able to recover with Morning Sun, it removing threatening Dark-types such as Greninja, Meowscarada and Ting Lu. It also can punish physical attackers such as Urshifu-R and Snealser with Flame Body. Ceruledge is another fire staple who can sweep whole teams late game on it's own and compliment Ogerpon-H's ability to weaken foes early on so Ceruledge can clean up end game. Weak Armour paired with Swords Dance allows Ceruledge to remove threats faster then Ogerpon-H such as Dragapult, Flutter Mane and Choice Scarfed foes once it sets up.



[STRATEGY COMMENTS]
Other Options
=============
Fire
-----------
Power Whip is an option which allows Ogerpon-H to check foes such as Toxapex and Clodsire after a Swords Dance which can annoy it normally. Rock Tomb is an another alternative which allows Ogerpon-H to hit Flying-type foes such as Moltres and Dragonite. Trailblaze is another option which allows Ogerpon-H to out speed faster threats and Choice Scarfed foes such as Choice Scarf Landorus, Non Choice Scarf Dragapult, Non Choice Scarf Meowscarada and Choice Scarf Hoopa-U.

[SET CREDITS]

lmk when this is implemented July
Click to expand...
Implemented.
 
[SET]
Ogerpon-Hearthflame (F) @ Hearthflame Mask
name: whats the name of the set
Ability: Mold Breaker
Tera Type: Fire
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Swords Dance
- Ivy Cudgel
- Horn Leech
- Play Rough

[SET COMMENTS]
Ogerpon-H serves as a powerful setup sweeper on Fire teams, due to its great speed stat allowing it outspeed foes such as Iron Treads, Life Orb Landorus and Urshifu-S, and a powerful attack stat enabling it to become very threatening after a Swords Dance and or in sun. Mold Breaker compliments Ogerpon-H's ability to sweep by allowing it to break through Dondozo, OHKO Mimikyu in sun and OHKO Heatran with Ivy Cudgel after a Swords Dance in sun. Ivy Cudgel under sun allows Ogerpon-H to wipe out foes such as Life Orb Landorus-I, Corviknight, Hoopa-U, Skarmory and Volcarona. [Comments: I want you to combine these two things together. I want that intro to really show why this mon is a beast. this is a high priority revamp and i really want you to draw in the readers as to why this mon is the top dog for fire teams. Like SD + SPEED + TYPING + ABILITY + Item is the reason why this is the saving grace for Fire right now so i really want you to highlight this mon. Also do not provide calcs on what its doing under sun rn. save it for when you introduce Torkoal / Ninetales. Instead, talk about what its doing after a boost :D If you cant combine thes] After a Swords Dance, Ivy Cudgel in sun enables Ogerpon-H to OHKO almost any bulky foe which would normally be 2HKO in sun such as Hatterene, Gliscor, Iron Hands, Hisuian Goodra and Galarian Weezing. [same here talk about what its doing without sun, save that for sun support teammates.] Horn Leech provides the utility to regenerate health while also exerting offensive pressure letting Ogerpon-H threaten Water- and Ground- type foes such as Swampert, Mamoswine, Hisuian Samurott and, Urshifu-R, Ursaluna and Hippowdon after a Swords Dance. [too many examples, shorten it.] Play Rough improves matchup into Dragon-types threatening a 2HKO on Garchomp and OHKO on Roaring Moon, Dragapult, and Latios after minor chip.[one of the main examples missing is Dragonite as we already know how dd Dnite is a huge pain for Fire. I think the problem with these examples is that 3 of these examples is is either outspeeding or we are doing a scary speed tie and potentially losing out our firepon for free. Dragonite and Garchomp should only be the examples here.]
Tips: K.I.S.S Keep it Short and Simple, we dont need to overwork this analysis, because then it starts becoming fluff and providing extra unecessary info. Highlight the moves yes but no need to overdo it. - when talking about setup mons, just tell me what its doing after a boost thats about it.

Ninetales is one of the prominent partners of Ogerpon-H as it sets up sun. It further more provides utility by burning foes such as Urshifu and Great Tusk with Will-o-Wisp and Encore allowing Ogerpon-H to set up on encored mons. Torkoal is another partner who can set up sun while also providing hazard control through Rapid Spin.[Start off here by introducing both of them being options due to setting up Sun which allows for ogerpon to...... then talk about what each does differently. Ninetales=Hwish / Torkoal=Hazrd removal + bulky vs roaring moon. Take a look how Captain did it in his analysis] Cinderace is another ally of Ogerpon-H which assists with hazard removal due to access to Court Change which covers for Ogerpon-H's weakness to hazards. Heatran while being a temporary Ground-immunity with the help of Air Balloon also traps and removes Toxapex which is a big annoyance to Ogerpon-H. annoying walls such as Clodsire and Toxapex with Magma Storm which give a hard time to Ogerpon-H andknock them out with Earth Power and Magma Storm chip. It also notably OHKOes Flutter Mane with Heavy Slam which can threaten Ogerpon-H with Power Gem if its chipped. Volcarona is a fellow special setup sweeper which can setup via Quiver Dance quickly and get threatening due to being able to recover with Morning Sun, it removing threatening Dark-types such as Greninja, Meowscarada and Ting Lu. It also can punish physical attackers such as Urshifu-R and Snealser with Flame Body. Ceruledge is another fire staple who can sweep whole teams late game on it's own and compliment Ogerpon-H's ability to weaken foes early on so Ceruledge can clean up end game. Weak Armour paired with Swords Dance allows Ceruledge to remove threats faster then Ogerpon-H such as Dragapult, Flutter Mane and Choice Scarfed foes once it sets up. [Cut this down and just clump them into setup sweepers like.... appreciates firepon to remove blah blah and blah while in return they deal with x y z.]



[STRATEGY COMMENTS]
Other Options
=============
Fire
-----------
Power Whip is an option which allows Ogerpon-H to threaten check foes such as Toxapex and Clodsire after a Swords Dance which can annoy it normally. Rock Tomb is an another alternative which allows Ogerpon-H to deal with hit Flying-type foes such as Moltres and Dragonite. Trailblaze is another option which allows Ogerpon-H to out speed faster threats like Iron Valiant, Choice Scarf Hoopa-U, and Landorus and Choice Scarfed foes such as Choice Scarf Landorus, Non Choice Scarf Dragapult, Non Choice Scarf Meowscarada and Choice Scarf Hoopa-U.

[SET CREDITS]
Im taking over for kiru i will take a look after implements, take your time with this
 
boomp said:
[SET]
Ogerpon-Hearthflame (F) @ Hearthflame Mask
name: whats the name of the set
Ability: Mold Breaker
Tera Type: Fire
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Swords Dance
- Ivy Cudgel
- Horn Leech
- Play Rough

[SET COMMENTS]
Ogerpon-H serves as a powerful setup sweeper on Fire teams, due to its great speed stat allowing it outspeed foes such as Iron Treads, Life Orb Landorus and Urshifu-S, and a powerful attack stat enabling it to become very threatening after a Swords Dance and or in sun. Mold Breaker compliments Ogerpon-H's ability to sweep by allowing it to break through Dondozo, OHKO Mimikyu in sun and OHKO Heatran with Ivy Cudgel after a Swords Dance in sun. Ivy Cudgel under sun allows Ogerpon-H to wipe out foes such as Life Orb Landorus-I, Corviknight, Hoopa-U, Skarmory and Volcarona. [Comments: I want you to combine these two things together. I want that intro to really show why this mon is a beast. this is a high priority revamp and i really want you to draw in the readers as to why this mon is the top dog for fire teams. Like SD + SPEED + TYPING + ABILITY + Item is the reason why this is the saving grace for Fire right now so i really want you to highlight this mon. Also do not provide calcs on what its doing under sun rn. save it for when you introduce Torkoal / Ninetales. Instead, talk about what its doing after a boost :D If you cant combine thes] After a Swords Dance, Ivy Cudgel in sun enables Ogerpon-H to OHKO almost any bulky foe which would normally be 2HKO in sun such as Hatterene, Gliscor, Iron Hands, Hisuian Goodra and Galarian Weezing. [same here talk about what its doing without sun, save that for sun support teammates.] Horn Leech provides the utility to regenerate health while also exerting offensive pressure letting Ogerpon-H threaten Water- and Ground- type foes such as Swampert, Mamoswine, Hisuian Samurott and, Urshifu-R, Ursaluna and Hippowdon after a Swords Dance. [too many examples, shorten it.] Play Rough improves matchup into Dragon-types threatening a 2HKO on Garchomp and OHKO on Roaring Moon, Dragapult, and Latios after minor chip.[one of the main examples missing is Dragonite as we already know how dd Dnite is a huge pain for Fire. I think the problem with these examples is that 3 of these examples is is either outspeeding or we are doing a scary speed tie and potentially losing out our firepon for free. Dragonite and Garchomp should only be the examples here.]
Tips: K.I.S.S Keep it Short and Simple, we dont need to overwork this analysis, because then it starts becoming fluff and providing extra unecessary info. Highlight the moves yes but no need to overdo it. - when talking about setup mons, just tell me what its doing after a boost thats about it.

Ninetales is one of the prominent partners of Ogerpon-H as it sets up sun. It further more provides utility by burning foes such as Urshifu and Great Tusk with Will-o-Wisp and Encore allowing Ogerpon-H to set up on encored mons. Torkoal is another partner who can set up sun while also providing hazard control through Rapid Spin.[Start off here by introducing both of them being options due to setting up Sun which allows for ogerpon to...... then talk about what each does differently. Ninetales=Hwish / Torkoal=Hazrd removal + bulky vs roaring moon. Take a look how Captain did it in his analysis] Cinderace is another ally of Ogerpon-H which assists with hazard removal due to access to Court Change which covers for Ogerpon-H's weakness to hazards. Heatran while being a temporary Ground-immunity with the help of Air Balloon also traps and removes Toxapex which is a big annoyance to Ogerpon-H. annoying walls such as Clodsire and Toxapex with Magma Storm which give a hard time to Ogerpon-H andknock them out with Earth Power and Magma Storm chip. It also notably OHKOes Flutter Mane with Heavy Slam which can threaten Ogerpon-H with Power Gem if its chipped. Volcarona is a fellow special setup sweeper which can setup via Quiver Dance quickly and get threatening due to being able to recover with Morning Sun, it removing threatening Dark-types such as Greninja, Meowscarada and Ting Lu. It also can punish physical attackers such as Urshifu-R and Snealser with Flame Body. Ceruledge is another fire staple who can sweep whole teams late game on it's own and compliment Ogerpon-H's ability to weaken foes early on so Ceruledge can clean up end game. Weak Armour paired with Swords Dance allows Ceruledge to remove threats faster then Ogerpon-H such as Dragapult, Flutter Mane and Choice Scarfed foes once it sets up. [Cut this down and just clump them into setup sweepers like.... appreciates firepon to remove blah blah and blah while in return they deal with x y z.]



[STRATEGY COMMENTS]
Other Options
=============
Fire
-----------
Power Whip is an option which allows Ogerpon-H to threaten check foes such as Toxapex and Clodsire after a Swords Dance which can annoy it normally. Rock Tomb is an another alternative which allows Ogerpon-H to deal with hit Flying-type foes such as Moltres and Dragonite. Trailblaze is another option which allows Ogerpon-H to out speed faster threats like Iron Valiant, Choice Scarf Hoopa-U, and Landorus and Choice Scarfed foes such as Choice Scarf Landorus, Non Choice Scarf Dragapult, Non Choice Scarf Meowscarada and Choice Scarf Hoopa-U.

[SET CREDITS]
Im taking over for kiru i will take a look after implements, take your time with this
Click to expand...
Implemented.
 
[SET]
Ogerpon-Hearthflame (F) @ Hearthflame Mask
Name: Swords Dance (Fire)
Ability: Mold Breaker
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Swords Dance
- Ivy Cudgel
- Horn Leech
- Play Rough

[SET COMMENTS]

Swords Dance Ogerpon-H is the big dog of fire teams courtesy of it's great speed, access to quick setup in Swords Dance, Hearthflame Mask increasing the output damage, amazing part Grass-typing providing neutrality to water and allowing it to fire back in the Water and Ground matchup with a strong STAB and Mold Breaker ignoring threatening foes such as Dondozo and Heatran. After a Swords Dance, Ivy Cudgel allows Ogerpon-H to easily break through bulky foes such as Hisuian Goodra, Clodsire Alolan Muk, and Life Orb Landorus-I and Heatran. Horn Leech provides the utility to regenerate health while also exerting offensive pressure letting Ogerpon-H threaten Water- and Ground- type foes such as Mamoswine, Hisuian Samurott, and, Urshifu-R and Ursaluna after a boost Swords Dance. At +2, Play Rough improves matchup into Dragon-types threatening a OHKO on Garchomp and Dragonite after a Swords Dance.

Ninetales orand Torkoal are most the prominent partners of Ogerpon-H as they sets up sun allowing Ogerpon-H's Ivy Cudgel to OHKO foes like Life Orb Landorus-I, Non Choice Scarf Hoopa-U,[????????????????????]] Skarmory and Volcarona and after a Swords Dance OHKO bulky foes such as Hatterene, Gliscor, Iron Hands and Galarian Weezing. Ninetales provides utility by burning foes such as Urshifu[who is that???] and non-Choice Scarf Great Tusk with Will-O-Wisp, Healing Wish provides Ogerpon-H another chance to sweep once it has been chipped down and Encore allowing Ogerpon-H to set up on encored mons[what mons are we encoring?]. On the other hand, Torkoal provides hazard control through Rapid Spin, threaten Roaring Moon with Body Press while tanking it's moves and also sets up Stealth Rock which chips foes(like?) allowing Ogerpon-H to sweep more easily. Cinderace is another ally of Ogerpon-H which assists with hazard removal due to access to Court Change which covers for Ogerpon-H's weakness to hazards.(thats all it's doing?) Heatran while being a temporary Ground-immunity with the help of Air Balloon also traps and removes Toxapex which is a big annoyance to Ogerpon-H. It also notably OHKOes Flutter Mane with Heavy Slam which can threaten Ogerpon-H with Power Gem if its chipped. Volcarona and Ceruledge are fellow setup sweepers which appreciate Ogerpon-H's ability to weaken threatening foes such as Hisuian Goodra and Ting-Lu so they can clean up late game. Volcarona in return removes threatening Dark-types such as Greninja, Meowscarada and Roaring Moon. It also can punish physical attackers such as Urshifu-R and Snealser with Flame Body. While, Ceruledge checks threats faster then Ogerpon-H such as Dragapult, Flutter Mane, and Choice Scarfed foes once it sets up. Not needed tbh

[STRATEGY COMMENTS]
Other Options
=============
Fire
-----------
Power Whip is an option which allows Ogerpon-H to threaten Toxapex after a Swords Dance which can annoy it normally. Rock Tomb is an another alternative which allows Ogerpon-H to deal with Moltres. Trailblaze is another option which allows Ogerpon-H to out speed faster threats like Iron Valiant, Choice Scarf Hoopa-U, and GreninjaLandorus.

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/july.667394/
Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/boomp.637295/
Grammar checked by:
QC 2/2
boomp_small-gif.607419
 
boomp said:
[SET]
Ogerpon-Hearthflame (F) @ Hearthflame Mask
Name: Swords Dance (Fire)
Ability: Mold Breaker
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Swords Dance
- Ivy Cudgel
- Horn Leech
- Play Rough

[SET COMMENTS]

Swords Dance Ogerpon-H is the big dog of fire teams courtesy of it's great speed, access to quick setup in Swords Dance, Hearthflame Mask increasing the output damage, amazing part Grass-typing providing neutrality to water and allowing it to fire back in the Water and Ground matchup with a strong STAB and Mold Breaker ignoring threatening foes such as Dondozo and Heatran. After a Swords Dance, Ivy Cudgel allows Ogerpon-H to easily break through bulky foes such as Hisuian Goodra, Clodsire Alolan Muk, and Life Orb Landorus-I and Heatran. Horn Leech provides the utility to regenerate health while also exerting offensive pressure letting Ogerpon-H threaten Water- and Ground- type foes such as Mamoswine, Hisuian Samurott, and, Urshifu-R and Ursaluna after a boost Swords Dance. At +2, Play Rough improves matchup into Dragon-types threatening a OHKO on Garchomp and Dragonite after a Swords Dance.

Ninetales orand Torkoal are most the prominent partners of Ogerpon-H as they sets up sun allowing Ogerpon-H's Ivy Cudgel to OHKO foes like Life Orb Landorus-I, Non Choice Scarf Hoopa-U,[????????????????????]] Skarmory and Volcarona and after a Swords Dance OHKO bulky foes such as Hatterene, Gliscor, Iron Hands and Galarian Weezing. Ninetales provides utility by burning foes such as Urshifu[who is that???] and non-Choice Scarf Great Tusk with Will-O-Wisp, Healing Wish provides Ogerpon-H another chance to sweep once it has been chipped down and Encore allowing Ogerpon-H to set up on encored mons[what mons are we encoring?]. On the other hand, Torkoal provides hazard control through Rapid Spin, threaten Roaring Moon with Body Press while tanking it's moves and also sets up Stealth Rock which chips foes(like?) allowing Ogerpon-H to sweep more easily. Cinderace is another ally of Ogerpon-H which assists with hazard removal due to access to Court Change which covers for Ogerpon-H's weakness to hazards.(thats all it's doing?) Heatran while being a temporary Ground-immunity with the help of Air Balloon also traps and removes Toxapex which is a big annoyance to Ogerpon-H. It also notably OHKOes Flutter Mane with Heavy Slam which can threaten Ogerpon-H with Power Gem if its chipped. Volcarona and Ceruledge are fellow setup sweepers which appreciate Ogerpon-H's ability to weaken threatening foes such as Hisuian Goodra and Ting-Lu so they can clean up late game. Volcarona in return removes threatening Dark-types such as Greninja, Meowscarada and Roaring Moon. It also can punish physical attackers such as Urshifu-R and Snealser with Flame Body. While, Ceruledge checks threats faster then Ogerpon-H such as Dragapult, Flutter Mane, and Choice Scarfed foes once it sets up. Not needed tbh

[STRATEGY COMMENTS]
Other Options
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Fire
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Power Whip is an option which allows Ogerpon-H to threaten Toxapex after a Swords Dance which can annoy it normally. Rock Tomb is an another alternative which allows Ogerpon-H to deal with Moltres. Trailblaze is another option which allows Ogerpon-H to out speed faster threats like Iron Valiant, Choice Scarf Hoopa-U, and GreninjaLandorus.

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
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Quality checked by:
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