oh man! No way!

[Radiodream]

So I have been wanting to try out a new team on shoddy but before I do I wanna see if there are any tweaks you guys can give me. So without further hesitation...

Team at a glance:

Bronzong @ Leftovers
Ability: Levitate
EVs: 252 HP/4 Atk/252 SDef
Sassy nature (+SDef, -Spd)
- Hypnosis
- Stealth Rock
- Gyro ball
- Explosion
My Lead. Plain and simple really. Sleep them than set up rocks or a screen and explode when needed. can be used as a special wall later when need be. Especially with wish support from jirachi and light screen.
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Swampert (M) @ Leftovers
Ability: Torrent
EVs: 252 HP/4 Atk/252 Def
Impish nature (+Def, -SAtk)
- Avalanche
- Earthquake
- Roar
- Waterfall
One of my favorites. My hazer and physical wall. Healing comes from Jirachi just like fro bronzong. Ummm....nothing more i can say here.
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Deoxys-e @ Life Orb
Ability: Pressure
EVs: 186 Att/ 72 Spe/ 252 Sp Att
Naive nature (+Spd, -SDef)
- Psycho Boost
- Ice Beam
- Superpower
- Thunderbolt
I love this guy. Fragile but it does its job. Psycho boost over shadowball for stab. I know cressy can wall it but oh well :[
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Shaymin @ Choice Specs
Ability: Natural Cure
EVs: 252 Spd/252 SAtk
Modest nature (+SAtk, -Atk)
- Seed Flare
- Rest
- Hidden Power [Fire]
- Psychic
After all the buzz I want to use one so bad. Seed Flare is a monsterous attack for such a little guy and Hp fire for tose steels and Grassy ones that want to come in on my Swampert. Rest to heal its self and psychic cause there isnt much of a choice.
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Jirachi @ Leftovers
Ability: Serene Grace
EVs: 240 HP/56 Atk/76 Def/136 SAtk
Impish nature (+Def, -SAtk)
- Wish
- U-turn
- Reflect
- Zen Headbutt
My favorite healer. Its a standard for me. Thunder to paralyze and for Garyados. reflect to soften those earthquakes that wanna come my way.
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Garchomp (M) @ Yache Berry
Ability: Sand Veil
EVs: 4 HP/252 Atk/252 Spd
Adamant nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
- Dragon Claw
- Swords Dance
- Earthquake
- Fire Fang
lol speaks for its self :]

Well thats the Team. Any feedback would be awesome. I will also give you a cookie for comments. :]

Changes made in bold

 

[Taylor]

I think Heatran will cause you problems, especially with Toxic Spikes support because your only answer to it is Swampert (as far as switching in goes). You can revenge kill it with Deoxys, but I see you doing no more than 75% damage to Heatran.

Be aware of Garchomp when your Bronzong's gone (because Explosion is your only form of attacking it). Swampert can hold it back, but not for too long. Deoxys won't be able to take down a Garchomp with Substitute up neither. Possibly Gyro Ball, or something to answer to Garchomp when it comes in. That means Wish support will be nescessary for your Bronzong's stability so you can come in and get rid of Garchomp. You'll also want a completely differn EV spread, preferably the standard.

Gyarados won't stop until you bring in Deoxys. That means the opponent finds out your Deoxys revenge kill is the only answer, then you'll have to watch out for Waterfall the next time - Which could take down Deoxys and leave you open the next time.

Your Garchomp is the only answer to SDLucario, period.

Infernape comes in on anything but Deoxys and Garchomp, and you're losing a Pokemon. Fire Blast, Grass Knot, Hidden Power [Ice] and Close Combat is just as common as the Nasty Plot variation.

Heracross is going to have fun too. Coming in on non-Deoxys and tearing up the field, forcing you to sacrafice Pokemon to bring in your Deoxys.

Some things to look out for, are you prepared to sarafice a member or two to aide these problems?

 

[Aki]

Holy shit you are so CBTar weak and Weavile weak, just like kd8 said. A whole heap of 600 BST pokes may work good in theory, but not when it leave's you open to just about every oU Sweeper. Dragonite, Salamence 9Especially specs), Weavile, Fuck. The only hope you've got against them is Bronzong, so hope the fuck he dosen't die.

Other than that, you seem to have Baton Passing and Trapping covered well.

 

[Taylor]

In theory, Swampert and Bronzong can easily handle Weavile. CBTyranitar hits anything hard with prediction, but he does have Wish support for Swampert which may help him a little.

U-turn > Thunder and a different EV spread may help here. You can then hit Tyranitar hard with a Reflect, Wish and U-turning Jirachi passing to Bronzong / Swampert too. Dealing damage from 3 different stand points.

 

[Raj]

The most efficient spread for Deoxys-E looks like this:
Naive @ Life Orb
186 Att/ 72 Spe/ 252 Sp Att
Makes sure it outspeeds Scarfchomp and kills the same things it could before. Also, I'd put Grassknot over Psycho Boost (which doesn't get the best coverage) because GK OHKOs Swampert. You don't really want to half your Sp. Att do you? Plus the EVs given allow you to Superpower for serious damage twice. The first does 70% on Blissey and the second will still OHKO T-Tar or Weavile.

Good Luck!

 

[Radiodream]

Well My general idea for the team was to use Shaymin and some of the standard pokemon I usually use. I havent had the time to test the team on shoddy so I dont know really what I should change or who to replace. Jirachi and shaymin are a must for me. The only ting I really refuse to use is blissey but other than that Im willing to change a few things here and there so some Ideas of who to replace would be helpful.