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Body Press (Dondozo) @ Leftovers
Ability: Unaware
Level: 50
Tera Type: Grass
EVs: 4 HP / 4 Atk / 196 Def / 148 SpD / 156 Spe
Impish Nature
- Wave Crash / Earthquake
- Order Up
- Body Press
- Protect

[SET COMMENTS]
Dondozo takes advantage of Unaware and its good natural bulk to boast a good matchup against metagame staples such as Calyrex-I and Zamazenta-C while picking away at the opponent's team for Calyrex-S to clean it up. Order Up boosts Dondozo's Body Press when paired with Tatsugiri-D and hits Dragon-types such as Tera Dragon Zamazenta-C. Body Press threatens foes such as Zamazenta-C and Terapagos, and Order Up's Defense boosts leave Dondozo untouchable to physical attackers like Calyrex-I after a few Defense boosts. Earthquake can be used over Wave Crash for a spread move. Thanks to Dondozo's heightened defenses after a Commander boost, Leftovers becomes even more valuable, making Dondozo even bulkier with passive recovery and allowing it to easily stall turns with Protect. With a Commander boost, the Defense investment lets Dondozo comfortably 2HKO Zamazenta-C and OHKO Incineroar at +3 most of the time. The Special Defense investment and Commander boost lets Dondozo survive two Thunderbolts from Raging Bolt. The Speed investment allows Dondozo to outpace Adamant Urshifu formes after Commander boosts. Tera Grass lets Dondozo resist Electric- and Grass-type attacks like Wood Hammer from Rillaboom and Thunderclap while also giving Dondozo an immunity to Spore and Rage Powder.

Dondozo tends to struggle with Fake Out users like Rillaboom, Incineroar, and Iron Hands; they can easily cycle in and out to spam Fake Out and catch Dondozo a turn after it uses Protect, forcing it to use Protect again, preventing it from dealing damage, and letting foes rack up damage. The Urshifu formes can significantly chunk Dondozo with powerful Wicked Blows and Surging Strikes that hit through its boosts with critical hits. Miraidon also threatens Dondozo with big hits like Draco Meteor and Electro Drift. Removing the aforementioned Fake Out users and the Urshifu formes allows Dondozo to come in safely and chip foes for Calyrex-S to clean up. Galarian Weezing can help by setting up Toxic Spikes and chipping foes before Dondozo gets on the field, allowing it to rack up Toxic damage with Protect and picking off foes for Calyrex-S. Galarian Weezing can also significantly chunk the Urshifu formes with Strange Steam. Calyrex-S is able to come in after Dondozo weakens the opposing team, cleaning up the game while helping Dondozo by being able to outspeed and KO Miraidon.

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Sweeper (Dondozo) @ Leftovers
Ability: Unaware
Level: 50
Tera Type: Grass
EVs: 4 HP / 220 Atk / 60 Def / 12 SpD / 212 Spe
Adamant Nature
- Wave Crash
- Order Up
- Earthquake Body Press (main set)
- Protect

[SET COMMENTS]
Dondozo is able to take advantage of Unaware and Tatsugiri's Commander boosts, boasting a good matchup into meta staples such as Calyrex-I. Order Up is nice to hit Dragon-types such as Miraidon while boosting a stat of Dondozo's, depending on which form of Tatsugiri is chosen. Earthquake avoids redirection from foes such as the Ogerpon formes and deals good damage to Pokemon such as Raging Bolt and Iron Hands. (add bpress here, talk about order up defense+bpress synergy) Leftovers grants passive healing to Dondozo, increasing its longevity. (this is just dex info, why is that specifically important with dondozo? Talk about how like because of the high defenses after commander allows more use out of hp and how you can utilize protect to gain more hp or smth) With a Commander boost, the Attack investment allows Dondozo to OHKO Miraidon after Miraidon goes for Tera Fairy. With the bulk investment and a Commander boost, Dondozo survives a Helping Hand boosted Astral Barrage from Choice Specs Tera Ghost Calyrex-S, while avoiding a 2HKO from Quark Drive boosted Iron Hands's Wild Charge. (this doesnt seem super relevant replace this with smth else, I can try to find smth if you want) The Speed investment allows Dondozo to outspeed Jolly Urshifu after a Commander boost. (I don't think jolly ursh is the most relevant thing rn)Tera Grass lets Dondozo resist super effective Electric- and Grass-type attacks, (this is just dex info an example or two would be nice) also gaining an imunity to Spore and Rage Powder.

Dondozo tends to struggle with Fake Out users like Rillaboom and Iron Hands, as they can easily cycle in and out, spamming Fake Out and preventing Dondozo from benefiting off of its Commander boosts. (this is really vague, you need to explain the specific problem; why can't I just protect and ignore fake out) Miraidon can also threaten Dondozo, as long as it doesn't have its Commander boosts to tough out Draco Meteor. (252 SpA Choice Specs Hadron Engine Miraidon Draco Meteor vs. +2 4 HP / 60 SpD Dondozo: 148-175 (65.4 - 77.4%) -- guaranteed 2HKO after Leftovers recovery, it still does a lot with draco and you always combine with giri infront of mirai anyways) The Urshifu formes can also chunk Dondozo significantly, with powerful Wicked Blows and Surging Strikes, respectively. (again you have to elaborate, why are wicked blow and surging strikes good into dondozo specifically?) Indeedee-F is a great option in removing the option of Fake Out and overriding Miraidon's Electric Terrain. Iron Hands is another good option, scaring off both Miraidon and the Urshifu formes. (Dozo with partners is weird, deedee+hands aren't doing enough as specific partners for dozo to be worth mentions imo, talk about what you can do strategically into the threats that you mentioned (ursh and fake out and stuff) rather than teammates wise. Also talk about weezing csr those are the biggest partners and how they chip/kill opposing mons to allow for dozo to clean or vice versa)

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Sweeper (Dondozo) @ Leftovers
Ability: Unaware
Level: 50
Tera Type: Grass
EVs: 4 HP / 220 Atk / 60 Def / 12 SpD / 212 Spe
Adamant Nature
- Wave Crash
- Order Up
- Earthquake Body Press (main set)
- Protect

[SET COMMENTS]
Dondozo is able to take advantage of Unaware and Tatsugiri's Commander boosts, boasting a good matchup into meta staples such as Calyrex-I. Order Up is nice to hit Dragon-types such as Miraidon while boosting a stat of Dondozo's, depending on which form of Tatsugiri is chosen. Earthquake avoids redirection from foes such as the Ogerpon formes and deals good damage to Pokemon such as Raging Bolt and Iron Hands. (add bpress here, talk about order up defense+bpress synergy) Leftovers grants passive healing to Dondozo, increasing its longevity. (this is just dex info, why is that specifically important with dondozo? Talk about how like because of the high defenses after commander allows more use out of hp and how you can utilize protect to gain more hp or smth) With a Commander boost, the Attack investment allows Dondozo to OHKO Miraidon after Miraidon goes for Tera Fairy. With the bulk investment and a Commander boost, Dondozo survives a Helping Hand boosted Astral Barrage from Choice Specs Tera Ghost Calyrex-S, while avoiding a 2HKO from Quark Drive boosted Iron Hands's Wild Charge. (this doesnt seem super relevant replace this with smth else, I can try to find smth if you want) The Speed investment allows Dondozo to outspeed Jolly Urshifu after a Commander boost. (I don't think jolly ursh is the most relevant thing rn)Tera Grass lets Dondozo resist super effective Electric- and Grass-type attacks, (this is just dex info an example or two would be nice) also gaining an imunity to Spore and Rage Powder.

Dondozo tends to struggle with Fake Out users like Rillaboom and Iron Hands, as they can easily cycle in and out, spamming Fake Out and preventing Dondozo from benefiting off of its Commander boosts. (this is really vague, you need to explain the specific problem; why can't I just protect and ignore fake out) Miraidon can also threaten Dondozo, as long as it doesn't have its Commander boosts to tough out Draco Meteor. (252 SpA Choice Specs Hadron Engine Miraidon Draco Meteor vs. +2 4 HP / 60 SpD Dondozo: 148-175 (65.4 - 77.4%) -- guaranteed 2HKO after Leftovers recovery, it still does a lot with draco and you always combine with giri infront of mirai anyways) The Urshifu formes can also chunk Dondozo significantly, with powerful Wicked Blows and Surging Strikes, respectively. (again you have to elaborate, why are wicked blow and surging strikes good into dondozo specifically?) Indeedee-F is a great option in removing the option of Fake Out and overriding Miraidon's Electric Terrain. Iron Hands is another good option, scaring off both Miraidon and the Urshifu formes. (Dozo with partners is weird, deedee+hands aren't doing enough as specific partners for dozo to be worth mentions imo, talk about what you can do strategically into the threats that you mentioned (ursh and fake out and stuff) rather than teammates wise. Also talk about weezing csr those are the biggest partners and how they chip/kill opposing mons to allow for dozo to clean or vice versa)

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I would still like to see what happens with the partners section ping me when you're done
Sweeper (Dondozo) @ Leftovers
Ability: Unaware
Level: 50
Tera Type: Grass
EVs: 4 HP / 4 Atk / 196 Def / 148 SpD / 156 Spe
Impish Nature
- Wave Crash
- Order Up
- Body Press
- Protect

[SET COMMENTS]
Dondozo is able to take advantage of Unaware and Tatsugiri's Commander boosts, boasting a good matchup into meta staples such as Calyrex-I. Order Up is nice to hit Dragon-types such as Miraidon while boosting a stat of Dondozo's, depending on which form of Tatsugiri is chosen. (only tatsu that we're going to talk about in the analysis is the defense one anyways) Body Press works well in tandem with Order Up, with Order Up boosting Dondozo's Defense, increasing the power of Body Press. Thanks to Dondozo's heightened defences after a Commander boost, Leftovers becomes even more valuable, making Dondozo even bulkier with passive recovery. Dondozo can also use Protect to get extra turns of recovery. With a Commander boost, the Attack investment allows Dondozo to 2HKO Raging Bolt with Order Up. After the same boost, Dondozo OHKOs Ogerpon-H with Wave Crash. The defense investment lets Dondozo OHKO Choice Specs Terapagos with Body Press when at +4, while also survivng two Tera Dark Wicked Blows from Urshifu. The special defense investment and Commander boost lets Dondozo survive two Thunderbolts from Raging Bolt, two Astral Barrages from Tera Ghost Choice Specs Calyrex-S, and two Draco Meteors from Miraidon when using Protect to get Leftovers recovery. (I know I sent all of these to you but you can cut down on a few, just pick the ones that you think are the most important)The Speed is able to outpace Adamant Urshifu after Commander boosts. Tera Grass lets Dondozo resist super effective Electric- and Grass-type attacks like Wood Hammer from Rillaboom and Thunderclap from Raging Bolt, also gaining an imunity to Spore and Rage Powder.

Dondozo tends to struggle with Fake Out users like Rillaboom and Iron Hands, as they can easily cycle in and out, spamming Fake Out and forcing Dondozo to Protect, preventing it from taking advantage of its Commander boosts. (how is forcing dondozo to protect not allowing it to take advantage of commander boosts? so what if dondozo protects, all that happens is that it avoids fake out. You need to elaborate on why forcing dondozo to protect prevents it from taking advantage of commander boosts or just remove this area entirely) Miraidon can also threaten Dondozo with big hits like Draco Meteor, which will add up over time. The Urshifu formes can also chunk Dondozo significantly, with powerful Wicked Blows and Surging Strikes hitting through Dondozo's boosts with critical hits. Removing the Fake Out users and Urshifu formes allows Dondozo to come in safely later and sweep. Weezing-G can also help with this, setting up Toxic Spikes and damaging the Fake Out users when they try and pivot (something about chipping opponents pokemon in general while dondozo can just sit on the field is better to talk about imo). Weezing-G can also significantly chunk thr Urshifu formes with Strange Steam. Calyrex-S is able to outspeed and threaten Miraidon, letting Dondozo come in without worrying about big Draco Meteors.

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Sweeper This is not a sweeper, not sure the naming conventions but its definetly not a sweeper, your using dozo as a big fat stall mon that either poison stalls or picks away enough of ur opps team where CSR can clean it, its also nice that Bpress eats a lot of things that otherwise prevents Astral Sweeps, like Zama or Incin or Pagos (Dondozo) @ Leftovers
Ability: Unaware
Level: 50
Tera Type: Grass
EVs: 4 HP / 4 Atk / 196 Def / 148 SpD / 156 Spe
Impish Nature
- Wave Crash / Earthquake Common enough
- Order Up
- Body Press
- Protect

[SET COMMENTS]
Dondozo is able to take advantage of Unaware and Tatsugiri's Commander boosts IMO this is a given, what does its commander boosts mean, its like extremely hard to kill, boasting a good matchup into meta staples such as Calyrex-I If your going to add the "boasting good mus into" you have to add Zamazenta, if your not running double dark + flutter and 2 of bolt/rilla/amoonguss the match up is unwinnable, and with those its like still losing in your favour, probably the biggest reason to run dozo on caly-s teams, besides also beating terapagos. I would personally highlight some of the reasons why this dondozo is run on CSR teams, not just what the set does. Order Up is nice to hit Dragon-types such as Miraidon while boosting a stat of Dondozo's This order needs to be reversed, your clicking order up to boost Body Press, with it otherwise being okay normal damage and sometimes being nice to hit dragon types. Your never bringing dozo to miraidon anyways, remove this. Body Press works well in tandem with Order Up, with Order Up boosting Dondozo's Defense, increasing the power of Body Press I mean yeah thats kinda obvious, why is fighting coverage so good on dondozo, why is defense good. Once you get a few defense boosts running zama and caly-i cannot touch dozo, your forced to run smog on the latter just to beat it. Thanks to Dondozo's heightened defences after a Commander boost, Leftovers becomes even more valuable, making Dondozo even bulkier with passive recovery Should also mention that Dondozo is just 1 mon on the field, when you stall your opp can do literally nothing, the leftovers HP is esentially worth double normal asw since its 1 health pool. Dondozo can also use Protect to get extra turns of recovery Ye, I would see if I can merge these 2 sentences cuz this is the big thing. With a Commander boost, Dondozo OHKOs Ogerpon-H with Wave Crash No it doesent? Most Operpon run defense/hp investment, you need adamant to OHKO. Besides, this doesent really matter as dozo sucks vs most ogerpon-h team anyways. The defense investment lets Dondozo OHKO Choice Specs Terapagos with Body Press when at +4, while also survivng two Tera Dark Wicked Blows from Urshifu These calcs dont really matter, Dondozo is not really meant to OHKO anything, its much more common to just Bpress twice, and also like specs terapagos and tdark urshifu is not common at all. Talk about this +2 196+ Def Unaware Dondozo Body Press vs. +1 52 HP / 244+ Def Zamazenta-Crowned: 102-122 (58.6 - 70.1%) -- guaranteed 2HKO after Grassy Terrain recovery or something, you dont even need to mention terrain recovery ngl, or this +3 196+ Def Dondozo Body Press vs. 244 HP / 116+ Def Incineroar: 194-230 (96.5 - 114.4%) -- 81.25% chance to OHKO. The special defense investment and Commander boost lets Dondozo survive two Thunderbolts from Raging Bolt and two Draco Meteors from Miraidon Your never bringing Dondozo into this, remove when using Protect to get Leftovers recovery Confusing wording, is this for both?. The Speed is able to outpace Adamant Urshifu after Commander boosts. Tera Grass lets Dondozo resist super effective Electric- and Grass-type attacks like Wood Hammer from Rillaboom and Thunderclap from Raging Bolt, also gaining an imunity to Spore and Rage Powder.

Dondozo tends to struggle with Fake Out users like Rillaboom and Iron Hands Incineroar?, as they can easily cycle in and out, spamming Fake Out and forcing Dondozo to Protect This is dicey and also a 0 sum game, because Dondozo protecting just wastes the turn most of the time. The real thing is catching dondozo on a protect turn so its forced to double protect, preventing it from dealing damage and letting foes such as Urshifu rack up damage When you adjust the previous change to everything not just urshifu. The Urshifu formes can also chunk Dondozo significantly, with powerful Wicked Blows and Surging Strikes hitting through Dondozo's boosts with critical hits. Miraidon can also threaten Dondozo with big hits like Draco Meteor, which will add up over time Its not gonna add up over time, its gonna kill you. Honestly just say dont bring dondozo into miraidon teams. Removing the Fake Out users and Urshifu formes allows Dondozo to come in safely later and sweep I guess its useful to do this but your missing the point, your not playing for dondozo to sweep, your playing for caly-s to sweep and dondozo helps that by chunking them or stalling. Weezing-G can also help with this, setting up Toxic Spikes and chipping foes while Dondozo sits on the field and attacks This is phrased poorly, weezing is long gone when dozo switches in, the toxic is just there as a endgame win condition. Then, its stalling while picking up key ohkoes not attacking in general. Weezing-G can also significantly chunk thr Urshifu formes with Strange Steam. Calyrex-S is able to outspeed and threaten Miraidon, letting Dondozo come in without worrying about big Draco Meteors. Going the entire analysis and mentioning caly-s once at the end is crazy, dozo is built around caly-s its like a 100% pick rate for restricteds. You need to mention the synergy that i've sprinkled throughout, its not just outspeeding miraidon, dondozo is not the main sweeper here its caly-s. What does dondozo do that helps caly-s?

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Body Press (Dondozo) @ Leftovers
Ability: Unaware
Level: 50
Tera Type: Grass
EVs: 4 HP / 4 Atk / 196 Def / 148 SpD / 156 Spe
Impish Nature
- Wave Crash / Earthquake
- Order Up
- Body Press
- Protect

[SET COMMENTS]
Dondozo is able to take takes advantage of Unaware and good natural bulk to boast a good matchup into meta against metagame staples such as Calyrex-I and Zamazenta-C while picking away at the opponent's team for Calyrex-S to clean it up. Order Up is nice to boost boosts Dondozo's Body Press and hit hits Dragon-types such as Tera Dragon Zamazenta-C. Body Press works well to threatens foes such as Zamazenta-C and Terapagos while leaving itself untouchable to physical attackers like Calyrex-I after a few Defense boosts (this is information is relevant to Commander not Body Press ya know). Earthquake can be used over Wave Crash to spread damage across the field. Thanks to Dondozo's heightened defences defenses after a Commander boost, Leftovers becomes even more valuable, making Dondozo it even bulkier with passive recovery, (RC) with the added benefit of Dondozo being the only Pokemon on your side of the field, (RC)(This is obvious) and allowing Dondozo it to easily stall turns with Protect and to gain Leftovers recovery (you already mentioned passive recovery before). With a Commander boost, the Defense investment lets Dondozo comfortably 2HKO Zamazenta-C and most of the time OHKOs OHKO Incineroar when at +3 most of the time. The Special Defense investment and Commander boost lets Dondozo survive two Thunderbolts from Raging Bolt. The Speed is able investment allows Dondozo to outpace Adamant Urshifu formes after Commander boosts. Tera Grass lets Dondozo resist super effective Electric- and Grass-type attacks like Rillaboom's Wood Hammer from Rillaboom and and Raging Bolt's Thunderclap from Raging Bolt, (RC) while also gaining giving it an imunity immunity to Spore and Rage Powder.

Dondozo tends to struggle with Fake Out users like Rillaboom, Incineroar, and Iron Hands, as they can easily cycle in and out, spamming Fake Out and catching Dondozo a turn after it Protectes uses Protect, forcing Dondozo its to double Protect and preventing it from dealing damage and letting foes rack up damage. The Urshifu formes can significantly chunk Dondozo, (RC) with powerful Wicked Blows and Surging Strikes hitting that hit through Dondozo's its boosts with critical hits. Miraidon also threatens Dondozo with big hits like Draco Meteor and Electro Drift. (What would be the check for Miraidon? You have accidentally removed the calyrex part and you should put this line after the Weezing lines to maintain the flow) Removing the aforementioned Fake Out users and the Urshifu formes allows Dondozo to come in safely and chip foes for Calyrex-S to clean up. Weezing-G Galarian Weezing can also help with chipping down foes, setting up Toxic Spikes and chipping foes before Dondozo gets on the field, racking up Toxic damage and picking off foes for Calyrex-S. Weezing-G Galarian Weezing can also significantly chunk the Urshifu formes with Strange Steam. Calyrex-S is able to come in after Dondozo weakens the opposing team, cleaning up the game and sweeping (same meaning). (There is no mention of Tatsuguri; which form to use to get these specific boosts? etc.)

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Body Press (Dondozo) @ Leftovers
Ability: Unaware
Level: 50
Tera Type: Grass
EVs: 4 HP / 4 Atk / 196 Def / 148 SpD / 156 Spe
Impish Nature
- Wave Crash / Earthquake
- Order Up
- Body Press
- Protect

[SET COMMENTS]
Dondozo is able to take takes advantage of Unaware and its good natural bulk to boast a good matchup into meta against metagame staples such as Calyrex-I and Zamazenta-C while picking away at the opponent's team for Calyrex-S to clean it up. Order Up is nice to boost boosts Dondozo's Body Press you might wanna mention the tatsugiri forme that gives +defense as a teammate or something and hit hits Dragon-types such as Tera Dragon Zamazenta-C. Body Press works well to threatens foes such as Zamazenta-C and Terapagos, and Order Up's Defense boosts leave Dondozo while leaving itself untouchable to physical attackers like Calyrex-I after a few Defense boosts. Earthquake can be used over Wave Crash for a spread move to spread damage across the field. Thanks to Dondozo's heightened defences defenses after a Commander boost, Leftovers becomes even more valuable, making Dondozo even bulkier with passive recovery, (RC) with the added benefit of Dondozo being the only Pokemon on your side of the field, (RC)(This is obvious) and allowing Dondozo it to easily stall turns with Protect and to gain Leftovers recovery (you already mentioned passive recovery before). With a Commander boost, the Defense investment lets Dondozo comfortably 2HKO Zamazenta-C and most of the time OHKOs OHKO Incineroar when at +3 most of the time. The Special Defense investment and Commander boost lets Dondozo survive two Thunderbolts from Raging Bolt. The Speed is able investment allows Dondozo to outpace Adamant Urshifu formes after Commander boosts. Tera Grass lets Dondozo resist super effective Electric- and Grass-type attacks like Wood Hammer from Rillaboom and Thunderclap (RC) while also gaining giving Dondozo an imunity immunity to Spore and Rage Powder.

Dondozo tends to struggle with Fake Out users like Rillaboom, Incineroar, and Iron Hands (RC); (ASC) as they can easily cycle in and out (RC) spamming to spam Fake Out and catching catch Dondozo a turn after it Protectes uses Protect, forcing Dondozo it to double use Protect and again, (AC) preventing it from dealing damage, (AC) and letting foes rack up damage. The Urshifu formes can significantly chunk Dondozo, (RC) with powerful Wicked Blows and Surging Strikes hitting that hit through Dondozo's its boosts with critical hits. Miraidon also threatens Dondozo with big hits like Draco Meteor and Electro Drift. (What would be the check for Miraidon? You have accidentally removed the calyrex part and you should put this line after the Weezing lines to maintain the flow) Removing the aforementioned Fake Out users and the Urshifu formes allows Dondozo to come in safely and chip foes for Calyrex-S to clean up. Weezing-G Galarian Weezing can also help with chipping down foes by (RC) setting up Toxic Spikes and chipping foes before Dondozo gets on the field, racking allowing it to rack up Toxic damage with Protect and picking off foes for Calyrex-S. Weezing-G Galarian Weezing can also significantly chunk the Urshifu formes with Strange Steam. Calyrex-S is able to come in after Dondozo weakens the opposing team, cleaning up the game and sweeping (same meaning).

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