OU First Team

[echuus]

Machamp@Lum Berry

Nature:Adamant
Ability:No Guard
EVs:HP:240/Atk:248/SpD:16/Spd:4

Moves:
-DynamicPunch
-Payback
-Bullet Punch
-Ice Punch
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Gyarados@Leftovers

Nature:Impish
Ability:Intimidate
EVs:HP:252/Def:252/Spd:4

Moves:
-Rest
-Sleep Talk
-Waterfall
-Roar
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Gengar@Leftovers

Nature:Timid
Ability:Levitate
EVs:HP:4/SpA:252/SpD:252

Moves:
-Shadow Ball
-Focus Blast
-Thunderbolt
-Hidden Power [Ice]
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Archeops@Flying Gem

Nature:Jolly
Ability:Defeatist
EVs:Atk:252/Def:4/Spd:252

Moves:
-Acrobatics
-Stone Edge
-Earthquake
-U-turn
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Hydreigon@Life Orb

Nature:Mild
Ability:Levitate
EVs:Atk:140/SpA:136/Spd:232

Moves:
-Draco Meteor
-U-turn
-Fire Blast
-Outrage
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Volcarona@Life Orb

Nature:Timid
Ability:Swarm
EVs:SpA:252/SpD:4/Spd:252

Moves:
-Quiver Dance
-Bug Buzz
-Fiery Dance
-Hidden Power [Rock]​

 

[haunter]

3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you are having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

This does not mean add one sentence saying "Standard x" or "all-around awesome" after each Pokemon. If you put thought into making the team, you can put thought into posting it.

Take a look at the RMT archive to see what kind of descriptions we are looking for. PM me the fixed descriptions and I'll unlock this thread.