OU RMT - A great Team (or not)

[PokéFreak]

Sorry for my bad english but I'm portuguese =P

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First I think in my first Sweeper. I thought that a CB Scizor do it well.

Then I thought one that protect Scizor from it 4x Fire Weakness. Heatran whit Flash Fire absorb the fire moves and then Eart Power on its face.

The most part of teams need SR support. So I put here an standard lead infernape.

For the mid game sweep Jirachi is great whit its mixed set. But it only not, I thought and Flygon do it well too.

Then I saw that my team has problems with CM Cune and I select a counter for it. And here it is, Celebi!

Infernape (M) @ Focus Sash
Ability: Blaze
EVs: 6 Atk/252 Spd/252 SAtk
Naive nature (+Spd, -SDef)
- Close Combat
- Fake Out
- Fire Blast
- Stealth Rock

Heatran (M) @ Leftovers
Ability: Flash Fire
EVs: 6 Atk/252 Spd/252 SAtk
Naive nature (+Spd, -SDef)
- Earth Power
- Fire Blast
- Toxic
- Substitute

Scizor (M) @ Choice Band
Ability: Technician
EVs: 248 HP/252 Atk/10 Spd
Adamant nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
- Bullet Punch
- Pursuit
- Superpower
- U-turn

Flygon (M) @ Choice Scarf
Ability: Levitate
EVs: 6 HP/252 Atk/252 Spd
Jolly nature (+Spd, -SAtk)
- Outrage
- Earthquake
- U-turn
- Stone Edge

Jirachi @ Expert Belt
Ability: Serene Grace
EVs: 252 Atk/252 Spd/6 SAtk
Hasty nature (+Spd, -Def)
- Fire Punch
- Ice Punch
- Iron Head
- Thunderbolt

Celebi @ Life Orb
Ability: Natural Cure
EVs: 2 Atk/36 Def/220 Spd/252 SAtk
Timid nature (+Spd, -Atk)
- Recover
- Leaf Storm
- Psychic
- U-turn

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[Legacy Raider]

3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you are having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

This does not mean add one sentence saying "Standard x" or "all-around awesome" after each Pokemon. If you put thought into making the team, you can put thought into posting it.

You need to improve on your descriptions. Have a look at some of the other RMTs in the forum to see what is expected. If you fix the descriptions properly, PM me the changes and I'll unlock your thread.