OU RMT - Please rate by the 23rd!!

[PikachuRulez]

So on the 23rd September I'm attending an OU tournament. I was very psyched so I made an OU team 2 weeks in advance. I practised on WiFi and came back with very few wins and many losses. I want to know what I can do to perfect it and I need your help guys. Here it is:

Item: Focus Sash
Ability: Pressure
EVs: 252 Atk 252 Spe 4 HP
Nature: Jolly
Moves:
Stealth Rock
Taunt
Rock Slide
Earthquake

This guy is the fastest lead in OU, tied with Crobat. On the first turn he can taunt which may force switch many leads, and set up rocks. Rock Slide and EQ are there for Crobats, Metagrosses, and more. Also my favourite lead in the game.

Item: Life Orb
Ability: Inner Focus
EVs: 252 Atk 252 Spe 4 Def
Nature: Adamant
Moves:
Swords Dance
Close Combat
Extremespeed
Crunch

Close Combat for non DD TTars, Blissey etc, Crunch for Rotoms, Gengars, etc, Extremespeed for powerful priority. Need I say more?

Item: Leftovers
Ability: Pressure
EVs: 252 HP 232 Def 24 Sp.Atk
Nature: Bold
Moves:
Calm Mind
Rest
Surf
Ice Beam/ HP Electric/ Sleep Talk

Suicune's incredible bulk let's it switch into many physical attackers, and can then proceed to CMing and Surfing to victory. When it's low on HP, it can Rest up and gains a short immunity to burns, poison and paralysis. I need help with te last slot, for now that Salamence is Uber, the only reason to use Ice Beam is for Dragonite...

Item: Choice Scarf
Ability: Flash Fire
EVs: 252 Sp.Atk 252 Speed 4 HP
Nature: Mild
Moves:
Fire Blast
Earth Power
Hidden Power Grass
Explosion

Heatran's incredible Sp.Atk and Speed with Choice Scarf makes it a very good Sp.Atker. Fire Blast for Jirachi, Scizor, and Magnezones. Earth Power for fire types like Infernape and Heatran and also for Jolteon and Electivire. Hidden Power Grass for everything else. And when you're low on health, blow up.

Item: Petaya Berry
Ability: Levitate
EVs: 252 Sp.Atk 252 Spe 4 Sp.Def
Nature: Timid
Moves:
Substitute
Shadow Ball
Focus Blast
HP Fire

Keep subbin until you get the petaya boost, then attack with near perfect coverage

Item: Expert Belt
Ability: Motor Drive
EVs: 252 Atk 252 Spe 4 Def
Nature: Adamant
Moves:
Thunder Punch
Ice Punch
EQ
Cross Chop

My team had an electric weakness, so Electivire was the way to go. Switch in on electric attacks, get the speed boost, then sweep. Easy peasy.

So there it is. Rate, Comment, and Subscribe.

 

[aVocado]

Wuzzat ? Do i see DDnite rippin yo team apart ?

DDnite is a major threat to your team once it's gets the boost [Especially that Choice Scarf Tran can't outspeed a Jolly +1 Dnite], and the only Pokemon i see stopping him is Suicune with his Ice Beam, and to solve that problem, i suggest giving Suicune Ice Beam [It's bulky enough to waste 2 turns tanking hits, trust me, because i use it.] as the main option, i also suggest using a Choice Scarf Rotom-W in place of Gengar.

Rotom-W @ Choice Scarf
Timid
252 SpA / 252 Spe / 4 HP
- Thunderbolt
- Shadow Ball
- Hydro Pump
- Trick

This guy stops Dragonite from sweeping your whole team after a DD and revenges it, and can also switch into Gyarados which is also a big threat to your team if it sets up and blast it off with Thunderbolt.

With that in mind, having 2 Scarfers in one team is redundant, so i recommend switching Choice Scarf Heatran to something else.

 

[haunter]

Please expand your descriptions as they're definitely not up to rule 3:

3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you are having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

This does not mean add one sentence saying "Standard x" or "all-around awesome" after each Pokemon. If you put thought into making the team, you can put thought into posting it.

Try to add at least 2-3 sentences to each of your team members by explaining how they do complement each other and the role they do serve for your team.

Take a look at the RMT archive to see what kind of descriptions we are looking for. PM me the fixed descriptions and I'll unlock this thread.