OU Team (Generation 4)

[Tyrabsol]

Hello Everyone, I've Began Competetive Battling Recently and Have Been Testing Out Teams :D This is what i came Up With:-

Weavile the Star of the Team Able to Wipe out Most Common Leads (Bar Infernape and Some Metagross)

Scizor the Main Sweeper of the Team,Also there to Scout out Fire Type Moves for the Next Pokemon to Absorb

Heatran, He's Mainly There to Absorb Fire Type Aimed towards Scizor

Celebi the Defensive wall of the Team, Able to Wall many Physical Attackers (Bar Bug Type Moves which Can be Blocked by Scizor)

Gyrados the Water Type Of the Team, Scouting for Electric Type Moves for...

Electivire Mainly on My Team to Absorb the Electric Type Moves Directed Towards Gyrados :naughty:

Weavile:-
Adamant @ Focus Sash
Ev Spread:- 252 Atk 252 Speed 4 HP
Moves:-
Sword Dance
Night Slash
Ice Shard
Brick Break

Scizor:-
Adamant @ Life Orb
Ev Spread:- 252 Atk 252 HP 4 Speed
Moves:-
SD
Roost
Bullet Punch
Bug Bite

Heatran:-
Timid @ Life Orb
Ev Spread:- 252 Sp.A 252 Speed 4 HP
Flamethrower
Dark Pulse
Dragon Pulse
Earth Power

Celebi:-
Bold @ Leftovers
EVs:- 252 Hp 252 Defence 4 Sp.A
Calm Mind
Recover
Earth Power
Grass Knot

Gyrados:-
Adamant @ Leftovers
EVs:- 252 Atk 252 Speed 4 HP
Taunt
Dragon Dance
Waterfall
Stone Edge

Electivire:-
Adamant @ Life Orb
EVs:- 252 Atk 252 Speed 4 HP
Fire Punch
Thunder Punch
Cross Chop
Earthquake

Please Help me Improve my Team

 

[Tyrabsol]

Reserved for Threats

 

[Bloo]

3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you are having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

Your descriptions are lacking, which means you are violating the above quoted RMT rule. If you wish to remedy this problem, explain your reasoning behind each Pokemon and why they work on your team more thoroughly. The sentences you have at the top of your thread are a good start, but try to expand on them a little more. Try to aim for 3-4 well formulated sentences with your descriptions that explain: why you selected a certain Pokemon; what their role is, how they work together with their teammates, etc. I recommend lurking through the RMT Archive in order to see examples of what we're looking for in an RMT! If you fix this problem, private message indicating that you have done so. Once you've done that, I will unlock your thread.