OU team- I'm getting used with the new metagame

[Kaiser]

As the title says, im new at this new generation, ive been only playing in-game and I'm totally lost at competitive battling, I'm using this team mostly to re-adapt to competitive battlng... all suggestions are welcome. (sorry for my bad spelling, I'm mexican and i dont write english very well )

Members:

The team:

(M) @ Life Orb
Ability: Inner Focus
EVs: 252 Atk/4 SDef /252 SAtk
Quiet nature (+SAtk, -Spd)
- Draco Meteor
- Fire Blast
- Extremespeed
- Superpower
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Holy shit, this thing is a fucking monster, its impossible to predict what moves does a dragonite has, this thing fucks so many pokemons... Draco meteor hits hard to everything!

@ Leftovers
Ability: Levitate
EVs: 252 HP/164 Def/92 Spd
Bold nature (+Def, -Atk)
- Thunderbolt
- Leaf Storm
- Will-o-wisp
- Shadow Ball
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An excelent swampert counter, blocks rapid spinn and kills water types..

@ Leftovers
Ability: Natural Cure
EVs: 136 HP/156 Def/216 Spd
Timid nature (+Spd, -Atk)
- Rapid Spin
- Surf
- Thunderbolt
- Recover
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I've been thinking about using tentacruel instead of this... what do you think?

@ Choice Band
Ability: Clear Body
EVs: 252 HP/236 Atk/20 Def
Adamant nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
- Bullet Punch
- Earthquake
- Explosion
- Meteor Mash
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Another fucking monster, bullet punch is awesome, thanks to the new gen about all the quick attack moves.

(M) @ Leftovers
Ability: Keen Eye
EVs: 252 HP/64 Atk/176 Def/16 Spd
Impish nature (+Def, -SAtk)
- Brave Bird
- Roost
- Whirlwind
- Spikes
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Brave bird is an awesome move on this guy, i was thinking about using taunt instead of whirlwind.. but i dunno.

(M) @ Leftovers
Ability: Torrent
EVs: 252 HP/40 Def/216 SDef
Careful nature (+SDef, -SAtk)
- Curse
- Earthquake
- Avalanche
- Waterfall
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I think i need rest here, but then i would have to replace avalanche.. and i don't like that


I'm getting most trouble with Stats, WoW,Twave and all that shit fucking gives me trouble.. and also with other rotoms.

 

[Super Mario Bro]

You should really consider expanding your descriptions. Why did you choose these Pokemon to be on your team? What role do they have?

Since you have no dedicated special wall on your team, I suggest placing some Special Defense EVs on Skarmory. Also, Taunt is a good idea to keep stall teams at bay.

Skarmory @ Shed Shell/Leftovers
Careful Nature
EVs: 252 HP/128 SpD/128 Spe
-Spikes
-Taunt
-Whirlwind
-Roost

Speed EVs allow you to outspeed Crocune and RestTalk Gyarados and taunt them before they have a chance to set up.

 

[haunter]

Please expand your descriptions as they're definitely not up to rule 3:

3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you are having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

This does not mean add one sentence saying "Standard x" or "all-around awesome" after each Pokemon. If you put thought into making the team, you can put thought into posting it.

Take a look at the RMT archive to see what kind of descriptions we are looking for. PM me the fixed descriptions and I'll unlock this thread.