OU team please rate

[Darkhound]

THE LINE UP

@Occa berry Adamant clear body
252hp 236atk 12def 8spe
-bullet punch
-meteor mash
-earthquake
-stealth rock

Standard lead metagross pretty much always gets SR up at the start of the game or can hide and still be effective at putting SR up later. Metagross can counter the weak but fast leads by attacking w/ either meteor mash or EQ and finishing off with bullet punch, most notably Azelf Aeordactyle and Infernape

@toxic orb Adamant Poison Heal
248hp 252atk 8Spe
-bulk up
-mach punch
-seed bomb
-spore
A bulky sweeper variant and the core of my team. The whole goal of my team is to allow breloom to come in and set up a sweep. Spore is tehre to give me sleep support and to help breloom get at least 1 Bulk up in. I like the idea of this bulky sweeper because it gives me survivability and the ability to take out most of the rest of my teams counters.

@choice band Adamant Sandstream
176hp 252Atk 80Spe
-crunch
-pursuit
-stone edge
-aqua tail
The standard bandtar which i use as my ghost azelf and starmie counter as well as a trump card. I try not to let my opponent see this guy until close to the end of the game so that scizor is already eliminated. Im thinking of changing out aqua tail because I dont seem to get much use out of it.

@choice scarf timid levitate
252spe 252Spatt 6def
-thunderbolt
-shadowball
-hp ice
-focus blast
again another standard, gar is used as my revenge killer and my half assed attempt at a gyarados check being able to outspeed it after a DD and OHKO w/ t-bolt also takes care of gliscor and mence w/ hp ice. Shadowball is for stab and focus blast is for bliss and t-tar

@leftovers Modest Serene Grace
252hp 152Spatt 104Spe
-nasty plot
-air slash
-aura sphere
-roost
The special sweeper set for togekiss. I'm using this set instead of the paraflinch simply because of coverage and i dont like to rely on haxx to win. Togekiss is also immune to spikes/tspikes and ground moves and can switch in on special sweepers and set up as well as take on blissey and ttar after a few plots, togekiss is also a farely defensive sweeper and can stay around long with roost.

@life orb Hypercuter Jolly
6hp 252atk 252spe
-swords dance
-earthquake
-stone edge
-fire fang
Im using gliscor as my scizor counter seeing as he resists every single move scizor commonly uses except pursuit and can hit back hard with fire fang or set up on the switch out. this scor can also easily beat luc outspeeding it and ohkoing w/ EQ.

MY OPPINION

All right i still think i have a big DD poke weakness mainly to kingdra and feraligator but if breloom has a few bulk ups then i think i can take em. I made the team into a straight offensive team as advised and to my surprise it is working alot better however i have a huge Machamp weakness and was thinking of making gliscor the dancing tank set just to cover it? also i was thinking of switching out gengar for a scarfRotom w/ trick T-wave shadowball and t-bolt so i can get some para support and then gliscor can still handle mence with stone edge thanks to hypercuter and assuming i have SR down.

anyway please give me some advice on how i can further improve my team, whats been given so far has worked well so thanks alot to those who posted.
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[Immortal Bushi]

Aqua tail is a must on your ttar to counter other hippos. Hippo could take a seed bomb from breloom without many bulk ups and roar it out. Without a user of toxic or grass knot, aqua tail is a good idea to keep hippo at bay.
If you are having trouble with DD pokes then try to keep Gengar alive longer as he can KO them all if it can come in on the DD and not a hit.
It seems that you have a problem with a Nasty plot mixape w/ grass knot. Adding psychic to gengar over shadow ball would help since shadow ball is easy to switch in on and you can still threaten opponents with it if you haven't revealed the whole set. This makes gar a complete revenge killer with less overall power. Explosion can take out ape and many others as a more powerful option. Another option for gar is trick which can help with your Hippo problem.

 

[Staraptor Call]

Psychic is a bad idea on Gengar, since it only hits a few things for more damage than Shadow Ball. Shadow Ball isn't a safe switch for Infernape at all; it does neutral damage. You should switch Blissey and Hippowdon out for something else and make your team a full offensive team. Pure one-sided walls such as those have little place on what would otherwise be an offensive team, and should be reserved for stall.

 

[Darkhound]

Ok i think i will go ahead and switch out blissey and hippowdon to make this a offensive team, do you have any suggestions for poks i could use? il do the movesets and such but im at a little bit of a loss, i have never made an offensive team b4

 

[Darkhound]

alright edited the team so tell me what yall think

 

[Darkhound]

hey can i get a few responses on the changes please =P