OU Team - Please rate

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I'm trying to build a team for competitive games...this one has an 80% win rate so far. Please review and let me know where I could improve or who to replace. Thanks! ---
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Aerodactyl
80 HP, 100 A, 176 Spe, 154 SpeD
+Jolly
+Pressure
+Focus Sash
-Stealth Rock
-Rock Slide
-Substitute
-Roost
= Typically my lead pokemon, Focus Sash is there so that Stealth Rock always gets out.

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Breloom
46 HP, 252 A, 212 Spe
+Adamant
+Poison Heal
+Toxic Orb
-Substitute
-Focus Punch
-Mach Punch
-Spore
= Rotates on lead with Aerodactyl

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Porygonz
6 De, 252 SpeA, 252 Spe
+Timid
+Download
+Choice Scarf
-Tri Attack
-Thunderbolt
-Ice Beam
-Hidden Power (fighting)

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Blissey
80 A, 252 D, 178 SpeD
+Sassy
+Natural Cure
+Left Overs
-Softboiled
-Flamethrower
-Seismic Toss
-Thunder Wave

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Dusknoir
252 HP, 108 D, 150 SpeD
+Impish
+Pressure
+Leftovers
-Shadow Sneak
-Pain Split
-Ice Punch
-Will o wisp

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Togekiss
252 HP, 6 SpeA, 252 SpeD
+Calm
+Serene Grace
+Leftovers
-Air Slash
-Aura Sphere
-Roost
-Thunder Wave (I like this better than Body Slam...I know some of you may disagree, but it is more reliable :-/ )


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umm before u expect anyone to rate u should really read the rmt rules, i think its rule 3, u have no description to half your pokemon.
 
3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you are having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

This does not mean add one sentence saying "Standard x" or "all-around awesome" after each Pokemon. If you put thought into making the team, you can put thought into posting it.
 
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