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    [*]Introduction
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    [*]Hey Everyone! First post on RMT so please let me know if I make any mistakes.
    I've been battling with this team for roughly two weeks making slight adjustments where necessary. Ive peaked at about 1300 and I know I can do better. I am fairly comfortable with the way this team works and I feel confident about the plays I can make with these guys. However there are many holes that I cannot think of how to fill. I have a lot of trouble with pokemon like mega lopunny, mega medicham, and mega metagross specifically. Ferrothorn and heatran sometimes cause difficulty playing around as well. Well here's the team! Any and all criticism is very appreciated! Thank you!!
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    [*]Teambuilding Process
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    [*]I play very offensively, so I made my team reflect that. Every pokemon on this team, in one way or another has full sweeping capabilities. I have a setup sweeper and tank in gyrados, two hard hitting special attackers in Mega Gardevoir and Heliolisk, a stealth rocker and fairy slayer in Bisharp, a mixed attacker with great coverage in infernape and an absolute truck in Staraptor.
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    [*]The Team
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    [*]Gyarados @ Leftovers
    Ability: Intimidate
    EVs: 252 HP / 4 Atk / 252 Def
    Impish Nature
    - Waterfall
    - Thunder Wave
    - Dragon Dance
    - Earthquake
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    [*]The MVP of my team! This unorthodox set works so well for me. People see dragon dance and assume I'm fully offensive but then I can tank hits for days. Important to check talonflame, and counter other physical attackers.
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    [*]Heliolisk @ Choice Specs
    Ability: Dry Skin
    EVs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
    Timid Nature
    - Surf
    - Volt Switch
    - Thunderbolt
    - Hyper Voice
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    [*]Heliolisk was the latest pokemon put on the team and I really like the coverage and ability this guy brings to the table. Dry skin is great to go in tandem with Infernape, when a pokemon like rotom uses hydro pump against Infernape, it just takes a quick switch to helio and I have full health. Hits super hard with all of its moves and makes for an excellent pivot.
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    [*]Infernape @ Life Orb
    Ability: Blaze
    EVs: 168 Atk / 88 SpA / 252 Spe
    Hasty Nature
    - Mach Punch
    - Close Combat
    - Fire Blast
    - Grass Knot
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    [*]Excellent mixed attacker. The EV spread is really nice and it OHKOs hippodown with grass knot which has helped more times than I can count. Close combat and fire blast hit super hard and mach punch is awesome for revenge killing.
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    [*]Staraptor @ Choice Band
    Ability: Reckless
    EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
    Adamant Nature
    - Brave Bird
    - Close Combat
    - Quick Attack
    - U-turn
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    [*]This thing is an absolute monster. Words or even calcs cannot describe the pure aggression that Staraptor has. Quick attakc is awesome for revenge killing and actually hits super hard with the choice band. Brave Bird destroys souls. Im considering switching U-Turn for double edge because I dont use U-turn on staraptor very often?
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    [*]Megaman (Bisharp) @ Focus Sash
    Ability: Defiant
    Shiny: Yes
    EVs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spe
    Adamant Nature
    - Stealth Rock
    - Knock Off
    - Iron Head
    - Sucker Punch
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    [*]Despite his awesome nickname, megaman is my least favorite member of the team. I dont know what it is, but I never actually get much use from him.He uses knock off once, maybe sets up rocks, and thats about it. I need another steel type who can kill fairies and set up rocks. Im thinking Excadrill?
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    [*]Gardevoir-Mega @ Gardevoirite
    Ability: Synchronize
    EVs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
    Modest Nature
    - Heal Bell
    - Hyper Voice
    - Psyshock
    - Thunderbolt
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    [*]Last but not least we have Mega Gardevoir. She hits so hard and has amazing coverage for her counters. Heal bell is there incase one of my physical attackers get burned or if anyone gets paralyzed. Her place on the team is absolutely expendable however.
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    [*]Conclusion
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    [*]Thank you for reading all of this! Any and all help will be appreciated! Have an excellent day. /CENTER]

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First off, welcome to Smogon! I see this is your first post and want to point to some good resourses that might help.

The big issue with this team is that this team tries to fit offensive pokemon into defensive roles that hinders the team's potential. As a result, the team gets run over by a ton of setup sweepers. For instance, once Tyranitar sets up a Dragon Dance on Choice Specs Heliolisk's Hyper Voice, the team's only options to stop it are Gyarados or Infernape, both of which are easy to wear down. Thundurus with a Nasty Plot OHKOs every single member of this team, and even without a Nasty Plot, nothing can switch into Thunderbolt + Superpower. Even Life Orb Starmie doesn't have to worry about anything besides Bisharp and Gardevoir. These are only examples; the big picture is this is an offensive team in sore need of more priority and revenge killing to maintain momentum.

Unfortunately, I don't have a magic solution that will make this team better without a complete revamp. I am sure other posters might try to patch some things with defensive mons, but that is not the right approach here. Instead, I am going to link you to Plus's Battling 101 videos to help you develop some basic fundamentals that I think are missing here. Spending an hour watching those videos will improve your game more than an hour of laddering with this team. From there, keep practicing on the ladder and take notes of what pokemon / teams are causing you trouble and eventually there should be a few patterns.

Once you are done watching the videos, feel free to PM me if you have any questions.
 
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