OU team!

[darkmagnifico]

Aerodactyl (M) @ Focus Sash
Ability: Pressure
EVs: 4 HP/252 Atk/252 Spd
Jolly nature (+Spd, -SAtk)
- Rock Slide
- Stealth Rock
- Earthquake
- Taunt

Works ok. Its main job is to get the stealth rock other than that i let it die.
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Scizor (M) @ Choice Band
Ability: Technician
EVs: 248 HP/252 Atk/8 Spd
Adamant nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
- Bullet Punch
- Superpower
- U-turn
- Quick Attack

My main revenge killer. Really powerful. I put quick attack for gyarados and zapdos since bullet punch gives me trouble sometimes.
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Blissey (F) @ Leftovers
Ability: Natural Cure
EVs: 252 HP/252 Def/4 Spd
Bold nature (+Def, -Atk)
- Wish
- Seismic Toss
- Heal Bell
- Thunder Wave

im thinking about softboiled over wish.
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Skarmory (M) @ Shed Shell
Ability: Keen Eye
EVs: 252 HP/64 Atk/176 Def/16 Spd
Impish nature (+Def, -SAtk)
- Brave Bird
- Roost
- Spikes
- Roar

>__> skarm!
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Infernape (M) @ Life Orb
Ability: Blaze
EVs: 64 Atk/192 Spd/252 SAtk
Mild nature (+SAtk, -Def)
- Close Combat
- Hidden Power [Ice]
- Grass Knot
- Overheat

Its good but i sometimes feel that it doesnt belong in this team hard to switch in gets overpowered most of the time, my only response for swampert but cant take it on at full hp
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Swampert (M) @ Leftovers
Ability: Torrent
EVs: 252 HP/40 Def/216 SDef
Timid nature (+Spd, -Atk)
- Curse
- Earthquake
- Avalanche
- Rest

I put this guy here because i ususally have to take on heatrans and i have no way to counter except using blissey, which then he explodes. I also feel that he doesnt belong in the team.
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In general i have problems taking on rotoms...heatran..suicune machamp breloom


well thanks in advance.

 

[Bloo]

3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you are having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

This does not mean add one sentence saying "Standard x" or "all-around awesome" after each Pokemon. If you put thought into making the team, you can put thought into posting it.

You need to improve on your descriptions. As of right now, your descriptions are lacking and hence, violating rule #3. Try to lengthen them more please. Have a look at some of the teams in the RMT archive to see what is expected. Aim for 5 well-formulated sentences for each of your Pokemon. Explain why you chose a Pokemon, what it does, how it contributes to the success of the team, etc. If you fix the descriptions properly, PM me the changes; if they are sufficient enough I will unlock your thread with the edited descriptions.