Pangoro @ Life Orb
Ability: Iron Fist
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Adamant Nature
- Swords Dance
- Knock Off
- Bullet Punch / Zen Headbutt
- Drain Punch
Ever since dropping in April, Pangoro has proven to be a formidable wallbreaker and late game cleaner. Pangoro possesses a very high Attack stat, amazing STABs and great coverage that can beat the entire tier.
reword that last bit to say something more like "great coverage that lets Pangoro threaten the majority of the tier" Zen Headbutt nails its usual checks like Weezing and Garbordor and Bullet Punch is a great priority especially since its boosted by Iron Fist hitting Fairy Types like Comfey on switch in.
I personally would focus more here on the distinctions between the two; Zen Headbutt means you're dedicating more to wallbreaking, while Bullet Punch improves Pangoro's ability to clean weakened teams late-game Access to Swords Dance lets Pangoro set up on Pokemon it can threaten out or are passive like Rhydon and Palossand. this sentence doesn't really do anything for a FB Spotlight Pangoro appreciates hazard support from Rhydon as Rhydon takes on Incineroar, who is faster that Pangoro, much better and threatens the common Xatu so Rhydon can reliably set up Stealth Rocks.
ehhhh, I would just generalize this to it appreciating entry hazard support given it helps Pangoro wallbreak and synergizes well with how effectively Pangoro forces switches Pangoro also appreciates paralysis support from Glare Druddigon since Druddigon is so reliable at shuffling paralysis and allow Pangoro can revenge kill.
simplify this to how Glare support helps make up for Pangoro's lacking speed Pangoro is great as an early game wallbreaker as Pangoro has ample set up opportunities and soften the opposing team for Pangoro's fast teammates.
this sentence is very out of place; I would try to work in the information it supplies along with the first sentence, since they both say more or less the same thing or at the very least are conveying the same overall idea