Please help my team

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Mind helping my team out people?

Jolteon@Leftovers
Timid
volt absorb
4 hp / 252 SpA / 252 Spe

Baton pass
Hp Ice
Substitute
Thunderbolt

Jolteons a very effective leader. I basically almost always
substitute as a first move and then baton to something I see
fit.



gyrados @leftovers
Adamant
intimidate
216 hp / 16 atk/ 176 def/ 100 spe

Dragon Dance
Waterfall
Earthquake
Taunt

I usually only pass him in if I sense a earthquake from someone other
than bronzong. The intimidate usually scares them which gets me a free
DD. Oh, I can always reverse switch to jolteon in case I sense a electric attack
which will reimburse his lost hp.


Bronzong@leftovers
levitate
252 hp 152 attk 8 def 96 SpD

Stealthrock
Earthquake
hypnosys
gyro ball

Replaced donphan to cover garchomp and metagross. Pretty neat.

is pretty cool. Stealth rock is also pretty good.


Salamence@choice specs
Modest
intimidate
4 hp / 252 SpA / 252 Spe

Draco Meteor
Dragon Pulse
Flamethrower
Hydro Pump

I usually pass him in against bronzongs for 3 reasons. One, bronzong
will usually earthquake jolteons sub (Dont all bronzs stealth first turn?)
Two, intimidate makes sure salamence can take bronzongs only move left, gyro ball,
and finally flamethrowers rips bronzong up.



Blissey@ Leftovers
Calm
Natural Cure
252 def/ 120 SpA / 136 SpD

Thunderwave
Ice beam
seismic toss
Softboiled

I decided to try old bliss. I put her in hopefully, after rocks are down and against
a special sweeper, charm the physical sweepers switch in, and then light screen up.



Lucario@ life orb
Adamant
Innerfocus
4 hp / 252 attk / 252 spe

Close combat
Sword dance
extremespeed
Stone Edge

Hes my late game sweeper, I usually dont pass him in early on, but when the
field is clear this guy will dominate everything. Oh, I sometimes switch him in if I predict
a fakeout for a free speed boost.
 
You won't flinch by switching in on a Fake Out, hence no speed boost.

The team looks like something made in the early DP. Specsmence, Donphan, Bulkydos and Jolteon.. It's pretty cool. :p

I don't think Donphan is capable of dealing with Garchomp. CBOutrage will 2HKO, while Ice Shard 3HKO Garchomp iirc. YacheChomp will definitely turn that 3HKO into a 4/5HKO, while you're 2HKO in return.

Metagross pretty much rapes you, and Blissey is pretty much setup bait as Clear Body ignore Charm. Personally I would run a Relaxed Bronzong over Donphan, as it's capable of dealing with Garchomp too, and Metagross obviously.
 
Hmmm, looks like a fairly solid team, although your Blissey needs some work.

Replace Light Screen with Siesmic Toss, so that you can kill Raikou with it, along with other Sub Calm Minders. I would remove Charm for Thunderwave, so shut down sweepers as they switch in, including the afore-mentioned metagross.
 
The main problem I see is that this team is too frail to survive against offensive teams but also too weak to take out well built defensive teams.

An easy way to start is by telling you how weak you are to certain threats. Unfortunately, your own Lucario set can actually kill this entire team after 1 Swords Dance. You also have major problems with offensive Gyarados as he sweeps the entire team after 2 Dragon Dances and it wont be hard for him to set that up. Jolteon can help remedy these problems a bit but I think we have to start going deeper.

First, I think we should change Salamence a bit. I personally would run Draco Meteor, Fire Blast, Roost, and filler and try for a very defensive spread just to combat Lucario better and still gain the same kills.

Metagross is a major problem for the team. Thunder Wave is almost needed on Blissey to combat him and I would just use the standard set of Thunder Wave / Softboiled / Seismic Toss / Filler. The filler attack can be charm or light screen or even an attack like ice beam for sub gengar.

I just can't see how Donphan effectively counters Garchomp and I think a Bronzong would be much better. You actually have a Deoxys-S weakness and Bronzong helps remedy that as well as take care of that damn Garchomp ;D

I like the jolteon lead just because how cool Jolteon is and I do like how he can set up with Gyarados early.

pretty cool team.
 
Yeah, I just replaced donphan with bronzong and all that leaves is lucario problem...if I replace stone edge with earthquake on gyrados, cant that sorta fix it <.<
 
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