SS OU Please rate my first competitive team

Hi, this is my first post on RMT and this is my first attempt at building a competitive team. I'd describe my team as being balanced as it's not built around any specific Pokemon. Instead the Pokemon work together to setup and check threats. The team is mostly offensive and it's made up of 1 bulky special sweeper, 1 physically defensive Pokemon, 2 bulky physical sweepers and 2 fast physical sweepers. Any and all advice is much appreciated. Thank you in advance!

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Togekiss @ Light Clay
Ability: Serene Grace
EVs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Timid Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Reflect
- Light Screen
- Dazzling Gleam
- Fire Blast

I send Togekiss out first to set up Reflect and Light Screen. I'm not sure if I need both. My team are mostly bulky or fast physical sweepers so perhaps I only need light screen to mitigate damage from special attacks? Dazzling Gleam is a strong STAB move and Fire Blast is used to check steel types such a Ferrothorn and Corviknight. I'm not sure I'm making the most of Togekiss's Serene Grace ability with this moveset but it's other abilities don't seem to have much utility either.

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Tyranitar @ Smooth Rock
Ability: Sand Stream
EVs: 252 HP / 252 Atk / 4 SpD
Adamant Nature
- Dragon Tail
- Crunch
- Earthquake
- Brick Break

Tyranitar can force the opponent to switch using Dragon Tail. This works great after having used Toxapex and Ferrothorn to set up Toxic Spikes and Spikes respectively. Ferrothorn is immune to sandstorm but the rest of my team are damaged by it. I'm not sure if there is any point using Smooth Rock to extend sandstorm, I'm considering Assualt Vest instead for extra damage output. Crunch is a strong STAB move and Eathquake and Brick Break are for coverage. Brick Break also removes screens but there might be a better way to do this.

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Toxapex @ Rocky Helmet
Ability: Regenerator
EVs: 248 HP / 8 Atk / 252 Def
Impish Nature
- Substitute
- Toxic Spikes
- Knock Off
- Pain Split

Toxapex is physically defensive. He could lead but I usually send out Togekiss first to set up screens. I use Substitute and then set up two layers of Toxic Spikes. Knock Off is for coverage and I like being able the remove my opponents hold item but I'm not sure if it's worth taking up a moveslot for. For a defensive build I'm not sure I'm adequately checking Pokemon that threaten Toxapex. Pain Split works really well with Substitute. Rocky Helmet punishes Pokemon that use contact moves against Toxapex.

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Ferrothorn @ Focus Sash
Ability: Iron Barbs
EVs: 248 HP / 252 Atk / 8 SpD
Brave Nature
IVs: 0 Spe
- Spikes
- Curse
- Gyro Ball
- Power Whip

Spikes stacks with Toxapex's Toxic Spikes and Tyranitar can force switches using Dragon Tail. Curse further lowers Ferrothorn's speeds and makes Gyro Ball a powerful STAB move that checks several OU favourites (Clefable, Cloyster etc.) Power Whip is another powerful STAB move and I find it useful to have at least one Pokemon with a grass move. Ferrothorn is 4x weak to fire and I don't know what to do about it, hence the Focus Sash. Perhaps an Occa berry to halve damage from a super effective fire attacks would be better.

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Cloyster @ Leftovers
Ability: Skill Link
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Adamant Nature
- Shell Smash
- Protect
- Icicle Spear
- Rock Blast

Shell Smash raises Atk and Spe by 2 which compliments Cloyster's EV spread. Skill Link allows Icicle Spear and Rock Blast to hit 5x for 125 base damage each. Icicle Spear is also a STAB move and Rock Blast provides coverage. Protect and Leftovers help Cloyster to last longer in battle but regardless he seems to have a lot of weaknesses and it's not uncommon for him to get OHKO'd.

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Cinderace @ Life Orb
Ability: Blaze
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Bulk Up
- Pyro Ball
- High Jump Kick
- U-turn

Cinderace was the last Pokemon I added to the team. Initially I had Clefable but I decided it wasn't a good idea to have two Fairy type Pokemon. I don't really like that Cinderace is a pure fire type because I think it makes him quite vulnerable. Due to this and his high Atk and Spe I've opted for a fast physical sweeper spread. Life Orb and Bulk Up allows Cinderace to maximise damage. Pyro Ball is a power STAB move and High Jump Kick is for coverage (checks super-effective Rock types). U-turn is also for coverage and allows me to switch while also doing damage if Cinderace HP begins to get low.
 
First of all looking at this team it is very week to zeraora and to combat this I suggest replacing tyranitar with a hippowdon. It does most of the things tyranitar does plus it helps you set up rocks. Here is the standard hippo set:
Hippowdon @ Leftovers
Ability: Sand Stream
EVs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 4 SpD
Impish Nature
- Earthquake
- Slack Off
- Stealth Rock
- Whirlwind

Secondly, while togekiss can be a good mon I dont think its the best on this team I would replace it with a Corviknight seeing as it is a lot better on this team and not only gives you defog but helps beat excadrill which this team loses to. Once again here is the most helpful set:
Corviknight @ Leftovers
Ability: Pressure
EVs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 4 SpD
Impish Nature
- Iron Head
- Defog
- Roost
- Body Press

lastly I just made a few set changes to help cope with the metagame better,

Toxapex @ Rocky Helmet
Ability: Regenerator
EVs: 248 HP / 8 Atk / 252 Def
Impish Nature
- Substitute
- Toxic Spikes
- Knock Off
- Pain Split
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Toxapex @ Black Sludge
Ability: Regenerator
EVs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 4 SpD
Bold Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Scald
- Recover
- Haze
- Toxic

Now the ferro:
Ferrothorn @ Focus Sash
Ability: Iron Barbs
EVs: 248 HP / 252 Atk / 8 SpD
Brave Nature
IVs: 0 Spe
- Spikes
- Curse
- Gyro Ball
- Power Whip
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Ferrothorn @ Leftovers
Ability: Iron Barbs
EVs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 4 SpD
Impish Nature
- Spikes
- Body Press
- Knock Off
- Leech Seed

both cloyster and Cinderace didnt need much changing so I dont feel the need to import them both all I did to cloyster was remove leftovers add kings rock and remove protect for ice shard and for Cinderace I removed life orb and put heavy duty boots and removed bulk up for Gunk shot (you can run court change I just prefer Gunk) here is the final paste after I did my edits feel free to try it out and reply with any errors and I can try my best to help you fix them. Good build for your first!


https://pokepast.es/5f4c7aa4174081cc
 
This looks great, thank you so much for your help! I can't wait to try it out! Replaceing Tyranitar with Hippowdon makes total sense and it makes me feel more confident knowing it's immune to electric. Black Sludge on the Toxapex is great too, I completely forgot that existed. I was initially going to have Corvknight but I couldn't figure out how to use it right. Definitely feeling the need for defog so I think he'll fit the team really well.

Thanks again! I'll let you know how it goes :blobthumbsup:
 
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