Please Rate My Newest Team

pokefreakman

Here is my new team that looked really good on paper. However it has not be so go in battling so i need some help. I would like you to make all the changes neccisary and i also would like to know who i should use for my starter out of my team. Thank you.


Staraptor:Choice Band: Intimidate
Adamant 252 attack 252 speed 4 hp
Brave Bird
Return
U-turn
Close Combat

Starter. Scares people into switching and when they do they get hit with Brave Bird.


Gyrados;Wacan Berry;Intimidate
Adamant 252 attack 252 speed
Earthquake
Ice Fang
Dragon Dance
Waterfall

My independent sweeper. Dragon Dance then sweep away. Nuff said

Metagross:Life Orb:Clear Body
Adamant 252 attack 252 speed 4 hp
Meteor Mash
Explosion
Bullet Punch
Earthquake

My second option of baton passing. Can hold his own without speed boosts, but it helps. Explosion when done.

Heatran:Choice Scarf:Flash Fire
Modest 252 special attack 252 speed 4 hp
Fire Blast
Dragon Pulse
Earthquake
Explosion

My revenge killer. Comes in on weak poke the fires away best move. Explosion when something(Blissey)needs to die.

Marowak;Thick Club;Rock Head
Adamant 252 attack 252 speed 4 hp
Rock Slide
Brick Break
Earthquake
Double Edge

The person Zapods Baton Passes too. After that, nothing stands in his way.

Zapdos:Leftovers:Pressure
Modest 252 hp, 100 special attack, 100 defense, 56 speed
Thunderbolt
Baton Pass
Agility
Roost

My Baton Passer. With Roost he can Baton Pass more times than most passers. He is also kinda good for sweeping after agility.


Thank you for reading this RMT. Please comment and be nice
 
The thing is, you have no plan. It's alright to go all 6 random sweepers, but you don't even use the most reliable sweepers there are. For example, instead of Ambipom, you could go either routes with like Swellow, who can help take status for your team here and there, or Staraptor, who's Intimidate and sheer power helps a lot more.

I'd also change it around, perhaps just do speed passing rather than Ninjask passing. For example, Zapdos can be a great addition over Ninjask, who can pass Agilities off pretty easily. You keep the basis of Zapdos, Marowak, Gyarados and the normal powerhouse. We can see a pretty big rock weakness here so why not add in something like Metagross. Metagross does great with speed, so you can just slap 4 attacks and Life Orb on it.

As for the last Poke, I wouldn't mind something like a ScarfHeatran used as a revenge killer over Infernape, it's plenty resistances can furthermore help out the team.
 
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