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Forretress @ Sitrus Berry
Ability: Sturdy
Shiny: Yes
EVs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 4 SDef
Relaxed Nature
- Volt Switch
- Spikes
- Rapid Spin
- Stealth Rock
I know Deoxy-D is a way better choice but my friend keeps b*tching if I use that pokemon. I use Forretress to set up hazards it can usually set a steath rock and one layer of spikes before it dies. I volt switch if the enemy is a water or flying type.

Bisharp @ Life Orb
Ability: Defiant
Shiny: Yes
EVs: 32 HP / 252 Atk / 224 Spd
Adamant Nature
- Swords Dance
- Knock Off
- Iron Head
- Sucker Punch
Bisharp is one of the most powerful pokemon on my team. I swords dance if I predict a switch in. Sucker punch usually kills most my foes.

Lucario (M) @ Expert Belt
Ability: Steadfast
Shiny: Yes
EVs: 252 SAtk / 4 SDef / 252 Spd
Timid Nature
- Nasty Plot
- Aura Sphere
- Vacuum Wave
- Flash Cannon
I vacuum wave if the enemy is a dark or steel or ice types. Flash cannon is for faires and nasty plot is if I predict a switch out.

Kyurem-Black @ Choice Band
Ability: Teravolt
EVs: 40 HP / 252 Atk / 216 Spd
Adamant Nature
IVs: 30 Atk / 30 Def
- Outrage
- Dragon Claw
- Earth Power
- Fusion Bolt
With specs most pokemon die in one hit. Kyurem can mostly tank all super effective moves atleast once. I don't use outrage if the enemy has a fairy type.

Azumarill @ Sitrus Berry
Ability: Huge Power
Shiny: Yes
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spd
Jolly Nature
- Belly Drum
- Play Rough
- Aqua Jet
- Waterfall
I usually start off with a belly drum and then do aqua jet. Play rough mostly fails for me but I use it anyway if a pokemon can bulk the aqua jet. Ferrothorn is a big enemy to my team.

Landorus @ Life Orb
Ability: Sand Force
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spd
Jolly Nature
- Earthquake
- Swords Dance
- Stone Edge
- Grass Knot

I switch to my landorous if my Lucario or Bisharp is gonna be hit by an earthquake. I swords dance if I predict a switch out and grass knot water type. Rotom W can tank grass knots very very well so I hate that pokemon.

There is a flaw in my team, a big one. I don't exactly know what it is but you'll know if you play. So please help me make this team better. Sorry for no pictures; I attemped it but this computer wont allow for some reason.


 
One thing to consider; You have 3 steel types, none of whom resist fire attacks. The number of Pokemon who are weak to Fire, Ground, and Fighting outnumber your number of resistances, and by a lot. Personally, I would rid your team of either Kyurem-B or Forretress. Thats just personal opinion.
 
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>My friend keeps bitching if I use that Pokemon
You know, your friend telling you to not use a pokemon doesn't mean shit. If you want to make a good team, don't limit yourself unless you can only fight your friend with this team then it's pointless to make an RMT.

Ditch Lucario. Your team has a heavy weakness to fire so I would suggest using Zard X or Zard Y to combat your fighting and steel weakness, while having something for Ferrothorn.

Give Landorus the ability Sheer Force as it is better than Sand Force in every way (and you're not running a sand team anyway) I would use:

Item: Life orb
-Earth Power
-Gravity/Psychic
-Sludge Wave
-Rock Slide

Gravity lets you hit Rotom W with Earth Power even though it has Levitate. Alternatively, you could run Psychic but imo Gravity is pretty good.
 
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"In depth descriptions"
>My friend keeps bitching if I use that Pokemon
You know, your friend telling you to not use a pokemon doesn't mean shit. If you want to make a good team, don't limit yourself unless you can only fight your friend with this team then it's pointless to make an RMT.

Ditch Lucario. Your team has a heavy weakness to fire so I would suggest using Zard X or Zard Y to combat your fighting and steel weakness, while having something for Ferrothorn.

Give Landorus the ability Sheer Force as it is better than Sand Force in every way (and you're not running a sand team anyway) I would use:

Item: Life orb
-Earth Power
-Gravity/Psychic
-Sludge Wave
-Rock Slide

Gravity lets you hit Rotom W with Earth Power even though it has Levitate. Alternatively, you could run Psychic but imo Gravity is pretty good.
Can you also give me a moveset for Charizard please ?
and this is not just to battle him, it's also gonna be my main team. Although I think Im gonna replace ferrestress w/ deoxy d after the battle
 
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