XY UU Please rate my team

[Mega NO Body]

Well I decided to experiment with mons I don't usually use. Its the first time I'm posting.
Here goes,
Blastoise@Blastoisine
nature: modest
evs:252HP,252spatt,4spd
ability:torrent
Rapid spin
Dark pulse
scald
icebeam
Typical rapid spinning Blastoise, my first starter in my first pokegame fire red.
Mienshaoo@choicescarf
nature:naughty
evs:252att,252spd,4Hp
ability: Regenator
U-turn
Drain punch
Poison jab
Me first
I've seen a lot of people use it so I decided to use it too. Its my teams scouter\threat analyser. U-turn I don't have to explain. Drain punch cause I needed a fighting move + the extra hp absorption is always handy. Poison jab because its a strong move and people don't expect it in a Mienshaoo for some reason it also has 30% chance to poison. Me first as a last resort when a priority move is used against it.
Zoroark@Shellbell
nature:Hasty
evs:252spatt/252spd/4att
ability:Illusion
Night Daze
flamethrower
grass knot
sucker punch
Zoroark, also new to me but I've tricked many people with it. Night daze and flamethrower, I don't have to explain, grass knot if I get lucky with heavy mons. Sucker punch as a last resort or to revenge kill.
Rhyperior@Life orb
nature:Adamant
evs188HP/68att/252def
ability:Solid rock
Earthquake
Stone edge
Rock polish
Stealth rock
A great pokemon and my main stealth rock setter. Also a physical wall. Basically its a multifunctioning wall/sweeper/trap setter. If get the chance to rock polish, it rocks.
Jolteon@wise glasses
nature:Modest
evs 252spatt/252spd/4spdef
ability:Volt absorb
Discharge
Shadowball
Signal beam
Toxic
Yeah I know wise glasses and signal beam. I use life orb if no item clause. Discharge over thunderbolt for paralysis chance. Shadow ball I don't have to explain. Signal beam for I don't know its unexpected from Jolteon so maybe on a unsuspecting mon. Toxic or Yawn u tell me. Basically toxic I use when I predict a switch or when I know I won't survive.
Snorlax@leftovers
nature:Adamant
evs:252HP/40att/216Spdef
ability:thick fat
Superpower
Body slam
Wild charge
Rock slide or Rest or Substitute( Can't make up my mind)
Snorlax.... Its like Rhperior but a special wall. Superpower a very good move always useful with Snorlax's high attack stat. Body slam, that's standard for lax. Wild charge, u won't believe how helpful it was against Suicunes and Slowking and Vaporeon............ The fourth move I already explained.

Any suggestions or well anything will be helpful.

 

[davidTheMaster]

Hey dude ! I you invite to read the RMT Rules for before posting on this part of the forum, You must have minimum 3 sentences which describe the role of your pokemon which constitute your team

For the moment i can't rate your team sorry :|, Do you understand me

 

[Mega NO Body]

Ah sorry just became a member 5 min. ago. I thought the main rule was don't make it too long, don't make it too short. My lines aren't too big though, well I'll make sure that doesn't happen again. Rate my team if u find the time. Bye.

 

[davidTheMaster]

Ah sorry just became a member 5 min. ago. I thought the main rule was don't make it too long, don't make it too short. My lines aren't too big though, well I'll make sure that doesn't happen again. Rate my team if u find the time. Bye.

I'll give you a tip, more you give explanation but not repetitive, plus your RMT will be cool, and also use of images for present your pokemon, in order to make this easier to read, please do spaces between your explanation of why you've chosen this move, this item

 

[Mega NO Body]

'kay thanx, well like I said its my first time in a forum. Thanks again for your advice. The picture idea sound cool.

 

[ium]

descriptions need to be expanded upon, as stated here:
http://www.smogon.com/forums/threads/other-teams-rules-read-before-making-an-rmt.3501444/