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RU Poison that heals QC [2/2] GP [1/1]

Lyra

Lyra

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[SET]
name: Poison Heal
move 1: Close Combat
move 2: Seed Bomb
move 3: Facade
move 4: Protect
item: Toxic Orb
ability: Poison Heal
nature: Adamant
evs: 252 HP / 80 Atk / 176 Spe
tera type: Steel / Normal

[SET COMMENTS]
Set Details

Breloom's unique defensive profile makes it a great check to the tier's Dark-types like Krookodile, Umbreon, and Wo-Chien as well as Rhyperior, and it's a decent wallbreaker with good resilience. It's also able to switch into the many Scalds and Thunder Waves in the tier after it activates Poison Heal. In addition, status-boosted Facade allows Breloom to damage Flying- and Poison-type Pokemon such as Noivern and Fezandipiti. Protect scouts the intention of Choice-locked Pokemon, like Galarian Zapdos and Basculegion-F, while also racking up Poison Heal recovery. Protect also ensures Toxic Orb is activated when Breloom first enters the field. 176 Speed EVs allow Breloom to outspeed Modest offensive Empoleon and Hisuian Goodra. Maximum HP allows Breloom to stomach hits such as Strange Steam from Galarian Weezing and Psychic Noise from Jirachi, allowing it to outlast them long-term. Tera Steel allows Breloom to flip its Fairy, Psychic, and Flying weaknesses into resistances, turning the tables on revenge killing attempts from the likes of Gardevoir and Galarian Zapdos, while Tera Normal lets Facade 2HKO the likes of Fezandipiti and Salamence.

Breloom fits best on bulky offense to balanced teams due to its ability to stomach Knock Offs and status while keeping up offensive pressure. Breloom is a great partner for special attackers such as Raikou, Fezandipiti, and Basculegion-F, all of which can bring it in safely versus special sponges such as Cyclizar and Hisuian Goodra. Breloom also a great teammate for Armarouge, which dispatches bulky Psychic-type Pokemon like Slowbro and Reuniclus while Breloom switches into the plenty of bulky Dark- and Water-type Pokemon like Umbreon and Empoleon that Armarouge might struggle with. Similarly, Slowbro pairs well with Breloom, as it resists Fire- and Psychic-type attacks like Sacred Fire and Psychic Noise from Entei and Reuniclus for it, while Breloom resists Electric- and Dark-type attacks like Thunderbolt from Raikou and Magnezone and Knock Off from Krookodile. Krookodile is also a great partner for Breloom, as it removes Heavy-Duty Boots and Rocky Helmet from foes like Slowbro, Galarian Weezing, and Hippowdon while also setting up Stealth Rock to chip it's usual checks like Galarian Weezing. Physical sweepers like Bisharp and Gyarados enjoy Breloom weakening physical walls like Galarian Weezing, Slowbro, Chesnaught, and Hippowdon while absorbing Toxic and Thunder Wave from the likes of Umbreon and the aforementioned Slowbro.

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Should be ready for QC :D. Mowtom shall be ready soon too!!!
 
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[SET]
name: Poison Heal
move 1: Close Combat
move 2: Seed Bomb
move 3: Facade
move 4: Protect
item: Toxic Orb
ability: Poison Heal
nature: Adamant
evs: 252 HP / 80 Atk / 176 Spe
tera type: Steel / Normal

[SET COMMENTS]
Set Details

176 Speed EVs allow it to outspeed max speed modest Empoleon and Hisuian Goodra. 80 Attack EVs with an Adamant Nature let it hit as hard as it can. Close Combat is strong STAB that rips through Steel-type Pokemon such as the aforementioned Hisuian Goodra and Registeel as well as others like Mamoswine and Cyclizar. Seed Bomb threatens other Fighting-resistant and -immune Pokemon such as Slowbro, Bascuelgion-F Golurk, and Basculegion-F, and Gardevoir while also massively damaging Hippowdon. Facade allows it Breloom to bust through Flying- and Poison-type Pokemon such as Noivern and Fezandipiti. Protect allows it to scouts the intention of Choice locked Pokemon, like Galarian Zapdos and Basculegion-F, while also racking up Poison Heal recovery. 176 Speed EVs allow Breloom to outspeed Modest Empoleon and Hisuian Goodra. Tera Steel allows it to flip its Fairy, Psychic and Flying weaknesses into a resistances, turning the tables on revenge attempts from the likes of Gardevoir and Galarian Zapdos, (AC) while Tera Normal turns Facade into an extremely powerful move not many Pokemon would be comfortable taking, allowing it to 2HKO the likes of Fezandipiti and Salamence. Reordered to have everything in the correct place.

Breloom fits best on more bulkier teams due to it's unique defensive profile. It's a great check to Krookodile, while also being a great status absorber, switching into the many Scalds and Thunder Waves in the tier after it activates Poison Heal. It's Breloom's a great partner for special attackers such as Raikou, Fezandipiti and Bascuelgion-F Basculegion-F, all of which can bring it in safely vs special sponges such as Cyclizar and Goodra Hoodra. Its also a great teammate for Calm Mind Shadow Ball Reuniclus, switch dispatches bulky Psychic-type Pokemon while Breloom switches into the plenty of bulky Dark-type Pokemon like Wo-Chien and Umbreon Reuniclus would struggle with. I'm not going to remove this mention (yet), but CM Shadow Ball Reuniclus isn't a notable mon in the tier. Would prefer you find another Psychic-type that can handle opposing Psychic-types (and Umbreon doesn't beat CM Reuniclus anyway so...). Similarly Calm Mind Slowbro also pairs well with Breloom resisting Fire- and Psychic-type moves attacks for it while Breloom resists Grass- and Dark-type moves for it attacks in return. Krookodile is a great partner for Breloom as it removes Heavy-Duty Boots and Rocky Helmet from foes like Slowbro, Galarian Weezing, and Hippowdon, while also setting up Stealth Rock.

A lot of repetitive grammar mistakes to correct and examples to add - implement and tag me when done,
 
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Lyra said:
[SET]
name: Poison Heal
move 1: Close Combat
move 2: Seed Bomb
move 3: Facade
move 4: Protect
item: Toxic Orb
ability: Poison Heal
nature: Adamant
evs: 252 HP / 80 Atk / 176 Spe
tera type: Steel / Normal

[SET COMMENTS]
Set Details

Breloom's unique defensive profile makes it a great check to Krookodile and x, while also being a great satus absorber, being able to switch into the many scalds and Thunder Waves int the tier after it activates Poison Heal. Close Combat rips through Steel-type Pokemon such as Hisuian Goodra and Registeel. Seed Bomb threatens Fighting-resistant and -immune Pokemon such as Slowbro and Golurk while also massively damaging Hippowdon. Facade allows Breloom to bust through Flying- and Poison-type pokemon such as Noivern and Fezandipiti. Protect scouts the intention of Choice locked Pokemon, like Galarian Zapdos and Basculegion-F, while also racking up Poison Heal recovery. 176 Speed EVs allow Breloom to outspeed Modest Empoleon and Hisuian Goodra. Tera Steel allows it to flip its Fairy, Psychic and Flying weaknesses into resistances, turning the tables on revenge attempts from the likes of Gardevoir and Galarian Zapdos, while Tera Normal turns Facade into an extremely powerful move not many Pokemon would be comfortable taking, allowing it to 2HKO the likes of Fezandipiti and Salamence. idk about slashes but ive ran leechtect to good success (w just one stab), ive also heard sd is a p good breaker as well. worth mentioning both imo.

Breloom fits best on more bulkier teams that appreciate it checking x, x and x while maintaining a decent offensive presence. due to it's unique defensive profile. It's a great check to Krookodile, while also being a great status absorber, switching into the many Scalds and Thunder Waves in the tier after it activates Poison Heal. this is kinda more like mini overview vibes which i think fits the first paragraph better. you should still mention it fits on bulkier teams somewhere tho, mine is just an example but feel free to put it wherever Breloom's a great partner for special attackers such as Raikou, Fezandipiti and Basculegion-F, all of which can bring it in safely vs special sponges such as Cyclizar and Goodra Hoodra. Its also a great teammate for Armarouge, which dispatches bulky Psychic-type Pokemon like Slowbro and Reuniclus while Breloom switches into the plenty of bulky Dark and Water-type Pokemon like Umbreon and Empoleon that Armarouge might struggle with. Similarly Calm Mind Slowbro also pairs well with Breloom resisting Fire- and Psychic-type attacks for it while Breloom resists Grass- and Dark-type attacks in return mention specific mons/moves, dont just say types cause thats just dex info. also mention that slowbro or any bulky setup sweeper rlly appreciates having a tox absorber. Krookodile is a great partner for Breloom as it removes Heavy-Duty Boots and Rocky Helmet from foes like Slowbro, Galarian Weezing and Hippowdon while also setting up Stealth Rock. i would maybe mention removal options since it appreciates not having chip dmg counteract its psn heal, also mons that dont like scald

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
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[SET COMMENTS]
Set Details

As zizalith said above, add an introductive sentence here Close Combat rips through Steel-type Pokemon such as Hisuian Goodra and Registeel. Seed Bomb threatens Fighting-resistant and -immune Pokemon such as Slowbro and Golurk while also massively damaging Hippowdon. both are STAB moves and therefore don't require a sentence Facade allows Breloom to bust through Flying- and Poison-type pokemon such as Noivern and Fezandipiti. add how it synergizes with the Toxic Orb Protect scouts the intention of Choice locked Pokemon, like Galarian Zapdos and Basculegion-F, while also racking up Poison Heal recovery. it also ensure Facade is activated when Breloom first enters the field / talk about the ability and the item here 176 Speed EVs allow Breloom to outspeed Modest offensive Empoleon and Hisuian Goodra. explain why we invest in bulk Tera Steel allows it to flip its Fairy, Psychic and Flying weaknesses into resistances, turning the tables on revenge attempts from the likes of Gardevoir and Galarian Zapdos, while Tera Normal turns Facade into an extremely powerful move not many Pokemon would be comfortable taking, allowing it to 2HKO the likes of Fezandipiti and Salamence.

Breloom fits best on more bulkier teams due to it's unique defensive profile. It's a great check to Krookodile, while also being a great status absorber, switching into the many Scalds and Thunder Waves in the tier after it activates Poison Heal. zizalith is right about this opening, try to merge these two sentences like he suggested Breloom's a great partner for special attackers such as Raikou, Fezandipiti and Basculegion-F, all of which can bring it in safely vs special sponges such as Cyclizar and Goodra Hoodra Goodra Hoodra :row:. Its also a great teammate for Armarouge, which dispatches bulky Psychic-type Pokemon like Slowbro and Reuniclus while Breloom switches into the plenty of bulky Dark and Water-type Pokemon like Umbreon and Empoleon that Armarouge might struggle with. Similarly Calm Mind Slowbro also pairs well with Breloom resisting Fire- and Psychic-type attacks for it while Breloom resists Grass- and Dark-type attacks in return. be more specific here, what Pokemon, what moves? Krookodile is a great partner for Breloom as it removes Heavy-Duty Boots and Rocky Helmet from foes like Slowbro, Galarian Weezing and Hippowdon while also setting up Stealth Rock.
add physical sweepers that enjoy Breloom being able to weaken pretty much every popular physical wall in the tier
add hazard support
Great job! I'll have a final look when you implement these but good work there. Credit zizalith as well.
 
Lyra said:
Breloom's unique defensive profile makes it a great check to Krookodile, Umbreon, and Rhyperior, while also being a great satus absorber, being able to switch into the many scalds and Thunder Waves in the tier after it activates Poison Heal.
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You're right, Breloom has a unique defensive profile but you don't really explain why afterwards so be clearer here and really say that Breloom is one of the best answers to the few Dark-types in the tier like Krookodile, Bisharp and Wo-Chien WHILE being a decent wallbreaker with a good staying power. This is what makes it unique. In reality it's not that good of a status absorber since it can't reliably switch in versus the main Pokemon that spread status such as Slowbro, Reuniclus or Weezing-Galar you see.

Lyra said:
Breloom fits best on more bulkier teams due to it's ability to check Krookodile, Rhyperior and annoy Umbreon while keeping up offensive pressure.
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You're just saying the same thing as the introductive sentence here. Breloom is valuable in bulky offenses to balanced teams that lack a Knock Off or status absorber (even though it's not great at the latter) or a way to beat bulky Dark-types such as Umbreon and Wo-Chien.

Lyra said:
Similarly Calm Mind Slowbro also pairs well with Breloom resisting Fire- and Psychic-type attacks like Sacred Fire and Psychic Noise from the likes of Entei and Reuniclus for it while Breloom resists Grass- Electric- and Dark-type attacks like Leaf Storm Thunderbolt from Raikou or Magnezone and Knock Off in return from Krookodile. Krookodile The latter is also a great partner for Breloom as it removes Heavy-Duty Boots and Rocky Helmet from foes like Slowbro, Galarian Weezing and Hippowdon while also setting up Stealth Rock which helps Breloom because?. Physical Sweepers like Bisharp and Gyarados enjoy Breloom weakening all kinds of physical walls you really have to be more specific than "all kinds" while absorbing Scalds and Thunder Waves for them if you say this you have to say from which Pokemon these status moves are coming from!. Noivern and Cyclizar work as entry hazard control with Defog and Rapid Spin, respectively, as Spikes greatly dig into Breloom's longevity.
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Implement this too.
QC 2/2 done.
 
[SET]
name: Poison Heal
move 1: Close Combat
move 2: Seed Bomb
move 3: Facade
move 4: Protect
item: Toxic Orb
ability: Poison Heal
nature: Adamant
evs: 252 HP / 80 Atk / 176 Spe
tera type: Steel / Normal

[SET COMMENTS]
Set Details

Breloom's unique defensive profile makes it a great check to the tier's Dark-types like Krookodile, Umbreon, and Wo-Chien as well as Rhyperior, while being and it's a decent wallbreaker with good resilience. It's also able to switch into the many scalds and Thunder Waves in the tier after it activates Poison Heal. In addition, status-boosted Facade allows Breloom to damage Flying- and Poison-type pokemon Pokemon such as Noivern and Fezandipiti due to the power boost from Toxic Orb. Protect scouts the intention of Choice locked Choice-locked Pokemon, like Galarian Zapdos and Basculegion-F, while also racking up Poison Heal recovery. Protect also ensures Toxic Orb is activated when it Breloom first enters the field. 176 Speed EVs allow Breloom to outspeed Modest offensive Empoleon and Hisuian Goodra. Max Maximum HP allows it Breloom to stomach hits such as Strange Steam from Galarian Weezing and Psychic Noise from Jirachi, allowing it to outlast them long-term. Tera Steel allows it Breloom to flip its Fairy, Psychic, (AC) and Flying weaknesses into resistances, turning the tables on revenge killing attempts from the likes of Gardevoir and Galarian Zapdos, while Tera Normal turns lets Facade into an extremely powerful move not many Pokemon would be comfortable taking, allowing it to 2HKO the likes of Fezandipiti and Salamence.

Breloom fits best on more bulkier teams due to it's its ability to stomach Knock Offs and status while keeping up offensive pressure. Breloom's a great partner for special attackers such as Raikou, Fezandipiti, (AC) and Basculegion-F, all of which can bring it in safely vs versus special sponges such as Cyclizar and Hisuian Goodra. Its Breloom is also a great teammate for Armarouge, which dispatches bulky Psychic-type Pokemon like Slowbro and Reuniclus while Breloom switches into the plenty of bulky Dark- and Water-type Pokemon like Umbreon and Empoleon that Armarouge might struggle with. Similarly, (AC) Slowbro also pairs well with Breloom, (AC) as it resists resisting Fire- and Psychic-type attacks like Sacred Fire and Psychic Noise from the likes of Entei and Reuniclus for it, (AC) while Breloom resists Electric- and Dark-type attacks like Thunderbolt from Raikou and Magnezone and Knock Off from Krookodile in return. The latter . (AP) Krookodileis also a great partner for Breloom, (AC) as it removes Heavy-Duty Boots and Rocky Helmet from foes like Slowbro, Galarian Weezing, (AC) and Hippowdon while also setting up Stealth Rock as it likes hazards digging into it's to chip its usual checks like Galarian-Weezing Galarian Weezing. Physical Sweepers sweepers like Bisharp and Gyarados enjoy Breloom weakening physical walls like Galarian-Weezing Galarian Weezing, Slowbro, Chesnaught, and Hippodown Hippowdon while absorbing Toxics Toxic and Thunder Waves Wave from the likes of Umbreon and the aforementioned Slowbro.

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/lyra.563264/
Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/flampoke.654091/
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/zizalith.410251/
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/rarelyme.513635/
Grammar checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/user5.104/
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/user6.105/
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