Pokemon VGC Tournament Team

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Yo, just a new guy that has been lurking in the forums for a while. Hi. Anyway, I am really nervous about entering. I have a team, and about 2/3 of the team is complete. I know that the guys on these forums are generally great at rating teams, so please, give me some adivice.

So, at a glance, this is my team:
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Mismagius @ Wise Glasses
EV's: Probably 255 Sp. Attack, 255 Speed (Yeah, wasn't looking)
Nature: Brave :(
Moves
-Hidden Power (Fighting)
-Psychic
-Thunderbolt
-Shadow Ball

Basically, this and my Machamp help to cover every single type. Also, my Mismagius helps to absorb Explosions and Earthquakes that my team will be firing.

Machamp @ Expert Belt
Ability: Guts
EV's: 160 HP, 252 Atk, 96 Def
Nature: Serious
Moves
-Thunderpunch
-Ice Punch
-Earthquake
-Cross Chop

Pretty simple, I guess. My Machamp acts just like an Electivire except stronger and slower, much slower. Works well with Mismagius.

Infernape @ Life Orb
EV's 4 HP, 252 Sp.Atk, 252 Speed
Nature: Timid
Moves
-Flamethrower
-Grass Knot
-Focus Blast
-Nasty Plot

I'm not done completely with this guy. Tell me some recommendations before it's too late! Whenever there is a free moment, my Infernape will use Nasty Plot and proceed to sweep.

Donphan @ Leftovers
EV's: 252 HP, 6 Atk, 252 Defense/Sp.Defense
Nature: Careful/Impish
-Ice Shard
-Rapid Spin
-Protect
-Earthquake

I'm not done with this yet. If someone would be willing to breed a Phanpy for me with Ice Shard, that would be great. :) Of course, I don't plan on that, yet. This Donphan will be used to get whatever the opponent might throw on the floor (Stealth Rock, Spikes, etc.).

Bronzong @ Light Clay
EV's: 252 HP, 152 Attack, 8 Defense, 96 Sp.Defense
Ability:Levitate
Nature: Relaxed
-Light Screen
-Reflect
-Explosion/Hypnosis
-Gyro Ball

Yeah, a Dual Screener Bronzong. He's here so my defenses can be fortified a bit. Once again, I haven't actually do not have this thing in-game. Also, I've begun to notice that breeding in Pearl isn't really easy compared to Emerald. Donations will be accepted.

Banette @ Choice Specs/Some Disruptive Item I can Trick
EV's: 4 HP, 252 Defense, 252 Speed
Ability: Frisk
Nature: Quiet
-Trick
-Will-o-wisp
-Toxic
-Night Shade

Before this set, I had this Banette know Attract other than Toxic, because I had him holding the Toxic Orb. Well, here is my "original" contribution, if you will. Honestly, this set is really fun to use and the point of his existence is to reak whatever havoc that can be spread before dying painfully.

Please don't forget that this team was actually made in-game, so some of my Pokemon might not have the "ideal" nature. Please forgive me.

Well, that's it. Please rate soon, and nicely, please. Thank you.
 
Hi, welcome to smogon. Please make sure you're following all the RMT rules before posting here. You're currently violating rule 3:

Rule 3 said:
3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you are having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

This does not mean add one sentence saying "Standard x" or "all-around awesome" after each Pokemon. If you put thought into making the team, you can put thought into posting it.

If you fix these up, feel free to post your thread again.
 
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