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[SET]
name: Support
move 1: Scald
move 2: Protect
move 3: Helping Hand
move 4: Icy wind / Perish song
item: Wiki Berry / Sitrus Berry / Wacan Berry
ability: Drizzle
nature: Bold Nature
EVs: 244 HP / 124 Def / 4 SpA / 76 SpD / 60 Spe
[SET COMMENTS]
* Politoed enables Kingdra's Swift Swim making it a near obligatory teammate to pair Politoed with, as Kingdra is an extremely fast and powerful Pokemon in rain. Politoeds good bulk and supporting moves allow it to be a good help to its team with moves like Helping Hand, Icy Wind and Perish Song. Politoed's rain boosted Water STAB is able to threaten common metagame Pokemon like Landorus-T, Regirock and Incineroar.
* Scald is used as the Water STAB of choice as a Scald burn can cripple Physical attackers like Glastrier, Metagross, and Garchomp.
* Helping Hand increases Politoed's partner's next attack being especially notable alongside Kingdra who can 2HKO or OHKO just about the entire Metagame with a Helping Hand boost. with a Helping Hand boost you can OHKO Registeel, Clefairy, and Porygon2 ,and 2HKO Dynamaxed Zapdos, Dynamaxed Moltres-G, and Rotom-W. Because Politoed isn't very strong or fast boosting it's partners next attack can be more useful than itself attacking.
* Icy Wind is used as speed control for crippling faster attackers like Zapdos, Urshifu-R, and Urshifu. Icy Wind is useful for Kingdra to stay maintain its speed advantage versus Tailwind and opposing Weather. Perish Song is an option that can be used to clean up games especially useful with Kingdra's ability to pick up early KOs. Perish Song is also useful in handling Set up Pokemon in the endgame like Ferrothorn and Registeel.
* Wiki Berry and Sitrus Berry give Politoed more longevity, Sitrus Berry also being 3HKOd by Urshifu Wicked Blow as opposed to 2HKOd. Wacan Berry allows Politoed to live Regieleki Magnet Max Lightning.
* The given EVs alongside a Bold Nature live Rillaboom Grassy Glide. 60 Speed EVs outspeeds Venusaur at plus one speed from Kingdra's Max Airstream. The Special defense and HP EVs are able to live Modest Life Orb Spectrier Max Phantasm.
[SET] Support Politoed
name:Politoed
move 1:Scald
move 2:Protect
move 3:Helping Hand
move 4:Icy wind/ Perish song
item: Wiki Berry / Sitrus berry/ Wacan berry
ability: Drizzle
nature: Calm
evs: 244 HP / 124 Def / 4 SpA / 76 SpD / 60 Spe
This set works fine, but in the name section we actually put the set name. you don't have to list that it's politoed, we know that because this thread is for politoed's analysis! the correct format would look like this
name: Support
move 1: Scald
move 2: Protect
move 3: Helping Hand
move 4: Icy Wind / Perish song
item: Wiki Berry / Sitrus Berry / Wacan berry
ability: Drizzle
nature: Calm
evs: 244 HP / 124 Def / 4 SpA / 76 SpD / 60 Spe
take note of how I spaced the set details and also how it's just called support. be sure to do this for your other set too!
[SET COMMENTS]
*Politoed is necessary to the functioning of rain teams as it has the Drizzle ability summoning the rain. Politoed alongside Kingdra and its Swift Swim ability are recommended as very necessary teammates to almost any rain team.
*Scald is used as accurate water stab with a 30% burn chance as a nice boon.
*Helping Hand Gives its partner a 50% the the next attack they launch powering up its teammates to pick up Kos they otherwise could not. Helping hand alongside Kingdra in rain can 2HKO or OHKO just about the entire Meta game. Helping hand of course still helps other teammates.
*Icy Wind: Icy wind gives speed control to the team breaking Focus sash's. This also helps kingdra to stay faster in rain vs Tailwind.
* 244 Hp evs and 76 spdf HP Evs calm lives Regieleki Thunderbolt. 60 Speed Evs outspeeds Venusaur at plus one
[Other Options]
* Politoed can be given a minus speed nature with no speed Evs to under speed opposing Incineroar Tyranitar Grimmsnarl and other base sixty speed Pokémon. If they swap to Tapu Fini as you Swap to RIllaboom Since your slower you swap second meaning to Tapu Fini misty terrain and than Rillaboom's grass terrain Will go up. Encore can be used over Icy wind or Helping Hand to lock Pokémon into debilitating moves like Trick room and Tailwind.
we don't do other options in VGC analyses atm. just set details! so this section can be removed
[SET COMMENTS]
*Choice specs Politoed despite the low special attack stat hits very hard with Rain and Choice specs boosted attacks. Choice Specs Politoed is an offensive threat itself being quite threatening to common just about anything that doesn't resist water. Frailer offensive Pokémon like Urshifu are OHKOd by scald and even a bulkier Pokémon like Metagross takes around 80% from scald.
*Muddy Water is strong dual target water stab capable of ignoring redirection
*Scald is reliable single target stab capable of burning the opponent.
*Ice Beam hits grass types and dragons that Politoed otherwise could not do much to. Also is able to hit Pokémon ice weak outside rain like
Landorus-t Moltres-g.Especially useful when in sun where your water moves are weakened.
* Hydro Pump is an extremely power but unreliable Water stab. You can choose to use this option only when necessary.
* Icy Wind can provide speed Control.
*60 speed Evs makes it so at plus one speed you are faster than Venusaur. 212 HP Evs is Optimal for grassy terrain healing.
For set 1
252 SpA Transistor Regieleki Thunderbolt vs. 244 HP / 76+ SpD Politoed: 164-194 (83.6 - 98.9%) -- guaranteed 2HKO
252 Atk Choice Band Urshifu Wicked Blow vs. 244 HP / 124 Def Politoed on a critical hit: 168-198 (85.7 - 101%) -- 6.3% chance to OHKO
For set 2
236+ SpA Choice Specs Politoed Scald vs. 0 HP / 4 SpD Urshifu in Rain: 195-229 (111.4 - 130.8%) -- guaranteed OHKO
236+ SpA Choice Specs Politoed Scald vs. 252 HP / 0 SpD Metagross in Rain: 142-168 (75.9 - 89.8%) -- guaranteed 2HKO
these are good but they don't need to be in the analysis. thank you for providing proof though :)
yes i spelled my name wrong on forums by mistake :)
[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[yourwelcomthank, userid1]]
- Quality checked by: [[username1, userid1]]
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]]
Unfortunately as is, the analysis, even with the formatting fixes, isn't really up to our standards. I would recommend taking a look at some of the completed VGC 21 analyses on the dex and using the analysis discussion channel in our discord if you have questions.
The spelling and grammar standards would also be helpful for you. Remember that all moves/pokemon proper noun type stuff must be capitalized!
I was going to give this a QC check but there are still so many errors in grammar and formatting that I do not feel like I can do so at this time. Please, please take a look at the resources I linked above and polish this (and Kingdra) up. I will have to put these back up for reservation if you cannot do so.
[SET]
name: Support
move 1: Scald
move 2: Protect
move 3: Helping Hand
move 4: Icy wind/ Perish song
item: Wiki Berry / Sitrus berry/ Wacan berry/ Rindo Berry
ability: Drizzle
nature: Bold Nature
EVs: 244 HP / 124 Def / 4 SpA / 76 SpD / 60 Spe
please format this properly. i really hope you know how to by now
[SET COMMENTS]
* Because of Drizzle Politoed is necessary for the functioning of rain teams (is it? isn't pelipper an option? what makes politoed the best choice?). Politoed is able to support its team with Icy Wind, Helping Hand, and Perish Song (This is a very incomplete thought, if you want to be general that's okay but we can do a bit better than listing the moves), Politoed's rain boosted Water STAB is able to threaten common metagame Pokemon like Landorus-T, Regirock and Incineroar (support politoed isn't really an offensive Pokemon so I would not play this up too much). Politoed has many flaws, its weak to the many common Grass-types and Electric-types of the format, like Zapdos, Venusaur, and Kartana, Politoed is also not very strong unless it is Choice Specs and in that case it cannot Protect or Hold a berry meaning its much easier to take down. (we don't really care about negatives in these. just tell me why I should use this pokemon or what it's supposed to do. the kingdra comment below should be in this section)
* Politoed enables Kingdra's Swift Swim making it a near obligatory teammate to pair Politoed with, as Kingdra is the fastest and one of the most powerful Pokemon in rain.
* Scald is used as the Water STAB of choice as a scald burn can easily cripple physical attackers like Kartana and RIllaboom being especially notable. (These examples are pretty off, Scald is mostly burning things like Garchomp and Dragapult that people might use to answer kingdra. politoed isn't staying in on these grasses)
* Helping Hand increases Politoed's partner's next attack being especially notable alongside Kingdra who can 2HKO or OHKO just about the entire Meta game (I need specifics) with a Helping Hand boost (why does Politoed using Helping Hand matter? why wouldn't politoed just be attacking?). There are a lot of Pokemon that can outspeed Politoed and threaten to KO it, so having Helping Hand can help ensure it does something useful before it faints. fluff
* Icy Wind is used as speed control for crippling faster attackers like Zapdos, Urshifu-R, and Urshifu. Perish Song is an option that can be used to clean up games especially useful with Kingdra's ability to pick up early KOs. I think you can develop these thoughts better. Why does Icy Wind matter if Kingdra is just outspeeding everything? Does Perish Song function purely to clean up games after Kingdra attacks?
* Wiki Berry and Sitrus Berry give Politoed more longevity (Do they allow it to survive anything in particular). Wacan Berry helps Politoed take Electric-type attacks from like Zapdos, Regieleki, and Rotom-W. Rindo Berry helps it take Grass-type attacks from Rillaboom, Kartana, and Venusaur.
* The given EVs alongside a Bold Nature live Rillaboom Grassy Glide. 60 Speed EVs outspeeds Venusaur at plus one speed from Kingdra's Max Airstream. The Special defense and HP EVs are able to live Modest Life Orb Spectrier Max Phantasm.
* Muddy Water is strong dual target Water STAB capable of swinging games with accuracy drops (are spread moves useful for anything? think about kindra, which is often using only single target attacks).
* Scald is reliable Water STAB able to cripple physical threats like Metagross and Glastrier how?. Scald OHKOs Incineroar and Assault Vest Entei.
* Ice Beam hits Grass-types and Dragon-types that Politoed otherwise would struggle with like Venusaur, Dragapult and, Amoonguss. Ice beam is Also able to hit Pokemon ice weak outside rain like Landorus-T and Galarian Moltres. this feels pretty fluffy
* Hydro Pump is an extremely powerful but unreliable Water STAB. You can choose to use this option only when necessary to pick up OHKOs on Bulkier Pokemon like Metagross, that you could not with Scald. this entire line is clunky. hydro pump does more damage but is reliant on shaky accuracy
* Choice Specs Politoed despite the low special attack stat hits very hard with rain, STAB, and, Choice Specs boosted attacks. Frailer offensive Pokémon like Urshifu are OHKOd by scald, and even a bulkier Pokemon like Metagross takes around 80% from scald. this is choice specs politoed, so this should be the first BP to introduce the set to the reader
* 60 Speed EVs outspeeds Venusaur at plus one speed from Kingdra's Max Airstream. 212 HP EVs is Optimal for grassy terrain healing as any less HP would make you Heal less from Grassy Terrain. this is way too specific tbh, just make it either max hp or max spatk, I'm fine with either
For set 1
252+ Atk Rillaboom Grassy Glide vs. 244 HP / 124+ Def Politoed in Grassy Terrain: 164-194 (83.6 - 98.9%) -- guaranteed 2HKO after Grassy Terrain recovery
252+ SpA Life Orb Spectrier Max Phantasm vs. 244 HP / 76 SpD Politoed: 160-188 (81.6 - 95.9%) -- guaranteed 2HKO
For set 2
236+ SpA Choice Specs Politoed Scald vs. 0 HP / 4 SpD Urshifu in Rain: 195-229 (111.4 - 130.8%) -- guaranteed OHKO
236+ SpA Choice Specs Politoed Scald vs. 252 HP / 0 SpD Metagross in Rain: 142-168 (75.9 - 89.8%) -- guaranteed 2HKO
+1 236+ SpA Politoed Muddy Water vs. 248 HP / 156+ SpD Incineroar in Rain: 186-218 (92.5 - 108.4%) -- 43.8% chance to OHKO
+1 236+ SpA Politoed Scald vs. 4 HP / 100 SpD Assault Vest Entei in Rain: 198-234 (103.6 - 122.5%) -- guaranteed OHKO
yes i spelled my name wrong on forums by mistake :)
[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[yourwelcomthank, userid1]]
- Quality checked by: [[username1, userid1]]
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]]
Please be sure to put some effort into revamping this. It feels like despite linking you the grammar standards you are still not properly capitalizing things and are misplacing numerous commas/have too much spacing etc. I tried to give you mostly questions in my comments because I think this will be the best way for you to grow as a writer. please let me know when this is done
[SET]
name: Support
move 1: Scald
move 2: Protect
move 3: Helping Hand
move 4: Icy wind / Perish song
item: Wiki Berry / Sitrus Berry / Wacan Berry (capitalize)
ability: Drizzle
nature: Bold Nature evs:EVs: 244 HP / 124 Def / 4 SpA / 76 SpD / 60 Spe
[SET COMMENTS]
* Because of Drizzle Politoed is necessary for the functioning of rain teams as it is the only viable Drizzle userat this point I'm convinced this sentence should just be cut and you should move on to the next one as a starting point. Politoed enables Kingdra's Swift Swim making it a near obligatory teammate to pair Politoed with, as Kingdra is an extremely fast and powerful Pokemon in rain. Politoeds good bulk and supporting moves allow it to be a good help to its team with moves like Helping Hand, Icy Wind and Perish Song mention enabling swift swimmers like kingdra here. Politoed's rain boosted Water STAB is able to threaten common metagame Pokemon like Landorus-T, Regirock and Incineroar. this thought is just super disjointed from the other statement, find some way to link these together
* Scald is used as the Water STAB of choice as a Scald burn can cripple Physical attackers like Glastrier, Metagross, and Garchomp with burns while also providing consistent damage.
* Helping Hand increases Politoed's partner's next attack being especially notable alongside Kingdra who can 2HKO or OHKO just about the entire Metagame with a Helping Hand boost. with a Helping Hand boost you can OHKO Registeel, Clefairy, and Porygon2 ,and 2HKO Dynamaxed Zapdos, Dynamaxed Moltres-G, and Rotom-W. Because Politoed isn't very strong or fast boosting it's partners next attack can be more useful than itself attacking. this sentence is just a grammatical and structural mess. do you read these over when you write them??? If you want to say Helping Hand is nice for partners because Politoed has little offensive pressure and allows Kingdra to get these KOes, then do so.
* Icy Wind is used as speed control for crippling faster attackers like Zapdos, Urshifu-R, and Urshifu. Icy Wind is useful for Kingdra to stay maintain its speed advantage versus Tailwind and opposing Weather. your examples are a bit odd since I wouldn't consider the Urshifus things that really threaten Kingdra, I also think that you can combine these points. Perish Song is an option that can be used to clean up games especially useful with Kingdra's ability to pick up early KOs. Perish Song is also useful in handling Set up Pokemon in the endgame like Ferrothorn and Registeel.
* Wiki Berry and Sitrus Berry give Politoed more longevity, Sitrus Berry also being 3HKOd by Urshifu Wicked Blow as opposed to 2HKOd. Wacan Berry allows Politoed to live Regieleki Magnet Thunderbolt it is more worth mentioning that it lets you live max lightning....
* The given EVs alongside a Bold Nature live Rillaboom Grassy Glide. 60 Speed EVs outspeeds Venusaur max SpeedTogekiss at plus one speed from Kingdra's Max Airstream you don't really do anything by outspeeding Venusaur anyway. at least you can scald kiss for a bit more damage. The Special defense and HP EVs are able to live Modest Life Orb Spectrier Max Phantasm.
* Choice Specs Politoed despite the low special attack stat hits very hard with rain, STAB, and, Choice Specs boosted attacks. Frailer offensive Pokémon like Urshifu are OHKOd by scald, and even a bulkier Pokemon like Metagross takes around 80% from scald.
* Muddy Water is strong spread Water STAB capable of swinging games with accuracy drops. Being a spread move it is useful in dealing with redirection from Clefairy and Amoonguss.
* Scald is reliable Water STAB able to cripple physical threats like Metagross and Glastrier with a burn. Scald OHKOs Incineroar and Assault Vest Entei.
* Ice Beam hits Grass-types and Dragon-types that Politoed otherwise would struggle with like Venusaur, Dragapult and, Amoonguss.
* Hydro Pump is Politoed's Strongest STAB option though inaccurate which can be used over Scald to pick up KOs you otherwise could not, like achieving an OHKO versus Zapdos, Spectrier, and Metagross.
* 60 Speed EVs outspeeds Venusaur at plus one speed from Kingdra's Max Airstream. 212 HP EVs is Optimal for grassy terrain healing as any less HP would make you Heal less from Grassy Terrain.
wanna cut this because 18% usage isn't great and I think this set just sucks in general.
I am begging you to proofread this and implement my suggestions properly. I will reject this analysis if the quality is not up to snuff next time and I refuse to write it for you