Profiles Profile: Jasonguppy

[Jasonguppy]

Hope this is okay! Sorry if i didn't do something right...
Trainer Name: Jasonguppy
Pokemon: Claire the Murkrow
CC: 3
UC: 0
Berries:
2x Oran Berry
2x Leppa Berry
2x Cheri Berry
2x Chesto Berry
2x Pecha Berry
2x Rawst Berry
2x Aspear Berry

 

[Jasonguppy]

Claire

Murkrow [Female] [Claire]
Types: Dark/Flying

Abilities:: Insomnia/Super Luck/Prankster (Dream World)

Nature: Adamant (+Attack, -Special Attack)
Stats:
HP: 90
Atk: 4 (+)
Def: 2
SpA: 2 (-)
SpD: 2
Spe: 91
Size Class: 1
Weight Class: 1
Base Rank Total: 15

EC: 0/6
MC: 0
AC: 0/5

Attacks:
Peck
Astonish
Pursuit
Haze
Wing Attack
Night Shade
Assurance

Confuse Ray
Psycho Shift
Roost
Feather Dance
Whirlwind

Toxic
Thunder Wave
Attract
Steel Wing
Thief

 

[Its_A_Random]

Hello there Jasonguppy

First things first, & your Pokémon profile should be shifted into your second post. Your berry list is incorrect; you should start with two each of Oran, Leppa, Cheri, Chesto, Pecha, Rawst, & Aspear Berries (This should go in a guide or something).

As far as your Pokémon are concerned, your Murkrow needs its Adamant nature factored into its stats, with the adjusted stats denoted with a (+) & a (-). Its BRT is set in stone as a defined number that is listed in the Data Audit Tables. This number is 15. There is nothing wrong with it move-wise.

That is all. Post on my profile when you have made the changes, & I will look over this again.

This post is temporary & will be deleted a few days after approval. 11/10 C.C.

EDIT: Okay now. I forgot this but you should have listed in your profile that you have 3 Currency Counters & 0 Universal Counters. You should indicate a (+) besides Murkrow's Attack Rank & a (-) besides Murkrow's Sp. Attack rank, although that is not completely mandatory. Make the changes & you are APPROVED. Welcome to ASB!