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[SET]
Psychic Surge (Deoxys-Speed) @ Life Orb / Twisted Spoon
Ability: Psychic Surge
EVs: 4 Atk / 252 SpA / 252 Spe OR 164 Atk / 252 SpA / 92 Spe
Rash / Naive Nature
- Expanding Force
- Ice Beam / Thunderbolt
- Superpower
- Knock Off

[SET COMMENTS]
Deoxys-S is a threatening mixed attacker with diverse coverage and an exceptional speed tier, being able to outpace a majority of the unboosted metagame. Psychic Surge powers up Expanding Force while providing protection from priority such as Sucker Punch and Ice Shard from Kingambit and Chien-Pao. It can also disrupt opposing terrains and strategies which rely on it, such as the Seed Items and Surge Surfer. Ice Beam hits potential checks like Roaring Moon, Ting-Lu and Landorus-Therian. Thunderbolt is an alternative to threaten non-Volt Absorb Corviknight and Manaphy. Superpower flips the matchup targets such as Kingambit, Iron Treads and Empoleon while being a stronger option into RegenVest Roaring Moon. Knock Off is able to threaten opposing Deoxys-S, Latios and Azelf while punishing potential switch-ins with item removal, which weaken RegenVest users such as Swampert and Roaring Moon. Life Orb gives a power boost to all moves, whereas Twisted Spoon is a weaker alternative to avoid Life Orb recoil. 92 Speed EVs and a Naive nature allow Deoxys-S to outspeed other neutral speed Deoxys-S.

Deoxys-S fits well on Offense and Balance teams, which can appreciate its speed and support in item removal and protection from priority. Special wallbreakers like Latios, Gholdengo and Iron Moth appreciate Deoxys-S for its ability to remove defensive items such as Assault Vest and Leftovers while baiting in and weakening Iron Treads and Roaring Moon. Deoxys-S also synergizes with physical attackers like Zamazenta and Roaring Moon which may struggle with Corviknight, Pecharunt and Great Tusk. Scream Tail and Volt Asorb Corviknight are able to check Deoxys-S, so it benefits from teammates like Moltres, Iron Moth and Gholdengo. Choice Scarf users that outspeed Deoxys-S, such as Roaring Moon and Latios, are able to consistently threaten it. Great Tusk, Iron Treads and Corviknight are great defensive partners who are not only check these threats but also remove entry hazards. This is especially helpful due to passive damage from Life Orb and entry hazards accumulating quickly.

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[STRATEGY COMMENTS]
Other Options
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Thanks to its exceptional speed, Deoxys-S functions as an effective lead. Psychic Surge which provides priority protection or No Guard + Zap Cannon to spread paralysis. Focus Sash and Taunt complements this, ensuring Deoxys-S is able to get at least one entry hazard up. Choice Specs offers more immediate power while sacrificing the flexibility of non-Choiced sets. However, its generally outclassed by Sheer Force + Life Orb or Hadon Engine sets which offer similar power without the drawback of a choice lock.

Checks and Counters
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**Fast Attackers**: Fast attackers like Choice Scarf Roaring Moon, Latios and Meowscarada are able to threaten Deoxys-S.

**Special Walls**: Pokemon like Scream Tail and Volt Asorb Corviknight are able to consistently check Deoxys-S.

**Defensive Checks** Pokemon such as Gholdengo, Roaring Moon, Iron Treads and RegenVest Manaphy are able to take a hit from Deoxys-S while threatening it with major damage.
is it worth mentioning stuff like spdef manaphy/ghold/tinglu/rm which are able to live a hit from deos which forces it out/trades?

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[SET]
Psychic Surge (Deoxys-Speed) @ Life Orb / Twisted Spoon
Ability: Psychic Surge
EVs: 4 Def Atk / 252 SpA / 252 Spe / OR 164 Atk / 252 SpA / 92 Spe
Rash / Naive Nature
- Expanding Force
- Ice Beam / Thunderbolt / Energy Ball eforce is good enough for pert after a knock
- Superpower
- Knock Off

[SET COMMENTS]
Paragraph 1:
Although most of the information is factually correct, it sounds really bland and choppy bc ur just listing each move and what they hit. try to expand more
Deoxys-S is a threatening special mixed attacker with diverse coverage and an exceptional speed tier, being able to outpace a majority of the unboosted metagame. Psychic Surge powers up Expanding Force while providing protection from priority such as Sucker Punch and Ice Shard from Kingambit and Chien-Pao. It can also disrupt opposing terrains and strategies which rely on it, such as the Seed Items and Surge Surfer. Ice Beam hits Roaring Moon, Ting-Lu and Landorus-Therian. Energy Ball is potent coverage for Swampert, Manaphy and Primarina. Thunderbolt is hits non-Volt Absorb Corviknight and Empleon while still being to hit Manaphy. Superpower is able to flips the matchup targets such as Kingambit, Iron Treads and Empoleon while being a stronger option into RegenVest Roaring Moon. maybe something about hitting them on their weaker physical side. Knock Off is able to threaten opposing Deoxys-S, Latios and Azelf while punishing potential switch-ins with item removal, mention removing av specifically which can enable special attacking teammates teammate pokemon. Life Orb gives a power boost to all moves which is crucial in order to deal substantial damage what does this mean to Roaring Moon and Iron Treads. Twisted Spoon is an alternative to avoid Life Orb recoil. 92 Speed EVs and a Naive u forgot to slash it in the set nature allow Deoxys-S to outspeed opposing other neutral Speed Deoxys-S which is important on teams were its the only form of speed control.

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Deoxys-S fits on Offense and Balance teams, which appreciate its speed and support be more specific, what support. Offensive Pokemon Special wallbreakers like Zapdos Latios, Gholdengo and Iron Moth Scream Tail appreciate Deoxys-S for its ability to remove defensive items such as Assault Vest and Leftovers while threatening Swampert baiting in and weakening Iron Treads and Roaring Moon. Deoxys-S also synergizes with physical attackers like Zamazenta and Roaring Moon which may struggle with Corviknight, Pecharunt and Great Tusk. Scream Tail and Volt Asorb Corviknight are able to check Deoxys-S, however Knock Off is a consistent method to force progress mention partners to help with stail and corv. Pokemon Choice Scarf users such as Choice Scarf Roaring Moon and Latios are that outspeed Deoxys-S are able to consistently threaten it. Great Tusk, Iron Treads and Corviknight are great defensive partners who are not only able to check these threats but also remove entry hazards which allows Deoxys-S to come in more often. mention how lorb + rocks dmg racks up quickly

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[STRATEGY COMMENTS]
Other Options Written as a paragraph not a list
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Choice-Specs offers more immediate power while sacrificing the flexibility of non-Choiced sets. However, its generally outclassed by SFLO or Hadon Engine which offer similar power without the drawback of a choice lock.

Stealth Rocks is an alternative choice, which can be slotted in on teams which lack a setter. However this serverly limits Deoxys-S offensive potential. U never run rocks on offensive sets, just mention suicide lead
could mention ng zap cannon

Wheres CC???

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qc 0/2, ping for recheck
 
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