1v1 [QC 2/2] [GP 1/1] Mental Herb Bellibolt

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[SET]
Mental Herb (Bellibolt) @ Mental Herb
Ability: Electromorphosis
EVs: 248 HP / 132 Def / 4 SpA / 124 Spe
Bold Nature
- Soak
- Thunder
- Parabolic Charge
- Sucker Punch

[SET COMMENTS]
* Thunder is used over Thunderbolt to 2HKO non-Choice item Iron Valiant.
* Mental Herb helps Bellibolt defeat Taunt and Encore users, such as Iron Valiant and Annihilape.
* The Speed EVs allow Bellibolt to outspeed uninvested base 60 Speed Pokemon like Magnezone and Sylveon.
* Bellibolt should almost always use Soak first, followed by Parabolic Charge to recover and secure the win.
* The HP EVs help Bellibolt against Modest Choice Specs Iron Valiant and the Defense EVs allow it to defeat Choice Band Meowscarada.
* Against Choice Band Meowscarada, Bellibolt should use Soak turn 1 and Thunder turn 2 to avoid being 2HKOed by Flower Trick.
* Against Speed Booster Energy Iron Valiant, Bellibolt should use Parabolic Charge turn 1 and Thunder turn 2 to avoid being locked into an unfavorable move by Encore.
* Against Choice item Iron Valiant, Bellibolt should use Thunder turn 1 to OHKO it after Electromophosis activates.

[CREDITS]
Set(s) created by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/fruan.536219/

Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/akeras.555423/

Quality checked by:
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https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/vertigo.543620/
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/lumii.493772/

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[SET]
Mental Herb (Bellibolt) @ Mental Herb
Ability: Electromorphosis
EVs: 248 HP / 132 Def / 128 Spe
EVs: 248 HP / 132 Def / 4 SpA / 124 Spe
had an extra ev in speed that didnt do anything (it tied ttar ig)
Bold Nature
- Soak
- Thunder
- Parabolic Charge
- Sucker Punch

[SET COMMENTS]
* (add space) Thunder is prefered to preferred over Thunderbolt cause it to threaten the 2HKO on Iron Valiant.
* (add space) Sucker punch allow Bellibolt to win against faster mons who tank but with not many HP the attack, (i have no idea what you are trying to say here can you reword it better) and sturdy mons who are not Donphan. (state the mons that sucker is for over just saying sturdy mons minus donphan)
* Mental Herb helps Bellibolt defeat against Taunt and Encore mons, (remove comma) pokemon, such as like Iron Valiant or and Annihilape. (add period), cause after the Encore, Bellibolt can not be locked on Soak.
* Bellibolt can survive Band Meowscarada, and Specs Focus Blast Iron Valiant with the HP and Defense EVs spread.
* The speed gived Speed EVs allow it to outspeed fast Avalugg, bulky Donphan, bulky Iron Hands, and bulky Kingambit. 0 invest base 60 Speed pokemon like... (speed tiers wording isnt applicable here, the mons you listed are not the correct in speed tier too) (find examples of base 60 mons)
* Bellibolt should almost always use Soak first, then use followed by Thunder or Parabolic Charge, if you need to recover recovery to secure the win, or if it's strong enough to kill to be secure. (any exceptions other than valiant?)
* The HP and Defense EVs allow Bellibolt to defeat Choice Band Meowscarada and Modest Choice Specs Iron Valiant.
* Against Choice Band Meowscarada, Bellibolt should use Soak turn 1 and Thunder turn 2 to avoid being 2HKOed by Flower Trick.
* Against Iron Valiant, use the move you want turn one, and use only thunder after, cause he can protect turn 1, and you didnt want to be locked on Soak.
* Against Booster Energy Speed Iron Valiant, Bellibolt should use Parabolic Charge turn 1, and Thunder turn 2 to avoid being locked into an unfavourable move by Encore. (parabolic charge t1 covers moonblast t1 ig + easier to write)
* Against Choice-item Iron Valiant, Bellibolt should use Thunder turn 1 to OHKO after Electromophosis activates.

[CREDITS]
Set(s) created by: fraun
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/fruan.536219/

Written by: Akeras
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/akeras.555423/

Quality checked by:
[insert user link]
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/bored_glitch.579035/

Grammar checked by:
[insert user link]

implement correctly, dm me on discord if you run into any problems.

i wanna have another look after you implement so just lmk when you finish

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[SET]
Mental Herb (Bellibolt) @ Mental Herb
Ability: Electromorphosis
EVs: 248 HP / 132 Def / 4 SpA / 124 Spe
Bold Nature
- Soak
- Thunder
- Parabolic Charge
- Sucker Punch

[SET COMMENTS]
* Thunder is used over Thunderbolt in order to threaten the to 2HKO on non-Choice item Iron Valiant. (you're already saying that you can ohko choice item in the last bullet point so this one should be more specific, im also not sure if "threaten" is the best fit here? this could definitely be reworded)
* Sucker pPunch is used to win against Magnezone. (maybe elaborate a bit on that point? this is not super intuitive and like soak into parabolic charge you just lose if zone clicks mirror coat so if thats about sturdy im not sure this is a great example but you also just lose to donphan so i'd remove this part completely)
* Mental Herb helps Bellibolt defeat Taunt and Encore Pokemon users, such as Iron Valiant and Annihilape.
* The Speed EVs allow it to outspeed 0 invest uninvested base 60 Speed pPokemon like Magnezone and Sylveon.
* Bellibolt should almost always use Soak first, followed by Parabolic Charge, for recovery to secure the win. (are there any exceptions and what are they, and why is it not optimal to soak into parabolic on them? this part should probably have its own bullet point)
* The HP and Defense EVs allow Bellibolt to defeat Choice Band Meowscarada and Modest Choice Specs Iron Valiant.
* Against Choice Band Meowscarada, Bellibolt should use Soak turn 1 and Thunder turn 2 to avoid being 2HKOed by Flower Trick.
* Against Booster Energy Speed Iron Valiant, Bellibolt should use Parabolic Charge turn 1, and Thunder turn 2 to avoid being locked into an unfavourable move by Encore.
* Against Choice-item (remove hyphen) Iron Valiant, Bellibolt should use Thunder turn 1 to OHKO after Electromophosis activates.

[CREDITS]
Set(s) created by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/fruan.536219/

Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/akeras.555423/

Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/bored_glitch.579035/
 
Stamping Vertigo's check with a few changes...

For the grammar changes, ignore everything on the first bullet but implement everything else.

For QC changes...
Akeras said:
* The HP and Defense EVs allow Bellibolt to defeat Choice Band Meowscarada and Modest Choice Specs Iron Valiant.
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How does the Defense help against Specs Valiant? I'd change this to say the HP helps against Valiant and the defense helps against Meow.
Everything else looks fine, implement Vertigo's check carefully and ask in the discord if you have any questions. For credits, include both Vertigo and me. Thanks.

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GP 1/1

[SET]
Mental Herb (Bellibolt) @ Mental Herb
Ability: Electromorphosis
EVs: 248 HP / 132 Def / 4 SpA / 124 Spe
Bold Nature
- Soak
- Thunder
- Parabolic Charge
- Sucker Punch

[SET COMMENTS]
* Thunder is used over Thunderbolt to threaten the 2HKO non-Choice item Iron Valiant.
* Mental Herb helps Bellibolt defeat Taunt and Encore users, such as Iron Valiant and Annihilape.
* The Speed EVs allow Bellibolt it to outspeed uninvested base 60 Speed Pokemon like Magnezone and Sylveon.
* Bellibolt should almost always use Soak first, followed by Parabolic Charge (rc) to recover and for recovery to secure the win.
* The HP EVs help Bellibolt against Modest Choice Specs specs Iron Valiant and the Defense EVs allow it to him defeat Choice Band Meowscarada. added period
* Against Choice Band Meowscarada, Bellibolt should use Soak turn 1 and Thunder turn 2 to avoid being 2HKOed by Flower Trick.
* Against Speed Booster Energy Speed Iron Valiant, Bellibolt should use Parabolic Charge turn 1 (rc) and Thunder turn 2 to avoid being locked into an unfavorable move by Encore.
* Against Choice item Iron Valiant, Bellibolt should use Thunder turn 1 to OHKO it after Electromophosis activates.

[CREDITS]
Set(s) created by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/fruan.536219/

Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/akeras.555423/

Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/bored_glitch.579035/
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/vertigo.543620/
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/lumii.493772/

Grammar checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/sulo.528036/

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