Rate and Improve my OU Sunny day team.

[kirbyfast]

Lead:Ninetales Item: Leftovers. ability:Drought.
Flamethrower. 252 hp/120def/136spe
Will-o-wisp
sunny day
roar
I'm using ninetales to get the sun going and to possibly cripple the opponents pokemon. It is defensive so when I need to switch in to combat other weather effects, I can. Not much else tk say about this lead



Infernape. Item:Life orb. Nature:hasty. ability:blaze
Moves:
1.Overheat
2.Close combat
3.Uturn
4.Mach punch. 252 Atk. 4 spa. 253 spe

Taking advantege of the sun with a very strong pokemon. Infernape
can potentially break crippled pokemon with the sun and overheat. The hasty adds to his speed so there shouldnt be much of a problem outspeeding most pokemon that dont hold choice scarf.

Tentacruel. black sludge. calm
protect
toxic spikes
surf
ice beam. 252hp/252spd/2spe

Using tentacruel as a scapegoat. When I need to run from water types I go to tentacruel. This pokemon will also help cripple with toxic spikes. Ice beam can help with dragon types and surf will help just incase they use fire types


Donphan. item:leftovers. nature: impish
252hp/252def/4spe
rapid spin
stealth rock
earthquake
ice beam
Used to wall pokemon physically. Im actually rethinking this choice. I can get rid of hazards with this pokemon and take items away too.

Hydregon naive nature 4hp/252spAtk/spe252 life orb
crunch
flamethrower
dragon dance
draco meteor/ outrage
Gives some extra fire power to my team. This pokemon can help get rid of psychic types. Also giving help to tentacruel in taking out other dragon types. It just seemed like a good choice to me.

Tangrowth chlorophyll life orb adamant/naughty nature
swords dance/growth
power whip
earthquake
rock slide 252 atk/252 spe/4 hp
Something to use to get water types down. Im thinking about using solar beam. I think this sweeper is almost necessary in this team. Taking out water types is the one thing this pokemon can do that the others cant

 

[Jirachee]

Hi

Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you are having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

This does not mean add one sentence saying "Standard x" or "all-around awesome" after each Pokemon. If you put thought into making the team, you can put thought into posting it. The standard description length required is three to four lines, if you need more insight look on the detail part, check out the RMT Archive.

You need at least three lines of descriptions for each of your Pokemon. PM me your updated descriptions and I'll unlock this thread.

Also, your layout is really inconsistent and messy, you should make it something easier to read, like this one:

Example

Genesect @ Choice Scarf
Trait: Download
EVs: 4 Atk / 252 SAtk / 252 Spd
Hasty Nature
- U-turn
- Bug Buzz
- Ice Beam
- Flamethrower