Rate my double sun/TR team

Romano

I've made a double team,centred around the 50% damage boost of fire moves of sun and Trick Room.

First,my leads

Camerupt@Focus Sash,Solid Rock
Sassy,228 Hp,72 Sp.att,208 Sp.def
Stealth Rock
Heat Wave
Earth Power
Explosion

and

Dusknoir@Leftovers,Pressure
Impish,252 Hp,252 att,4 Sp.def
Shadow Punch
Ice Punch
Trick Room
Will-o-wisp

My leadtastic leads,Camerupt and Dusknoir.
Camerupt has Stealth Rock,because he's a lead(duh) and Dusknoir has Trick Room because they're both slow.
After the set-up Dusknoir Wisps an opponent and Camerupt hits with a super effective attack.
Shadow punch is a STAB move,and Ice punch has great coverage.If Camerupt almost dies,because he has a Focus Sash,he'll kill the opponents with Explosion,but Dusknoir survives thanks due his typing. If Dusknoir dies,he'll be switched with Heatran and if Camerupt dies,he'll be switched with Heatran too.

Heatran@Life Orb,Flash Fire
Quiet,252 Hp,252 sp.att,4 def
Fire Blast
Earth Power
Solar Beam
Dragon Pulse

And

Torkoal@Heat rock,White Smoke
Relaxed,252 Hp,252 sp.def,4 sp.att
Sunny Day
Lava Plume
Rapid Spin
Stealth Rock

Here,the true team starts,with great use of the sun and the abilities.
In the first turn,Torkoal starts with Sunny Day and Heatran uses Earthpower or Dragonpulse.'
In the next turn Torkoal's still first thanks due the TR and spins or uses SR and Heatran still attacks.
In the next turn,Torkoal uses SR or uses Lava Plume,which will activate Flash Fire and Heatran uses a ultrapowered Fire Blast!
Against the Grounds or Waters ,Heatran can use Solarbeam.
If Heatran dies,he'll be switched with Umbreon and if Torkoal dies,he'll be switched with Togekiss

Togekiss@Kings rock,Serene Grace
Careful,252 speed,252 sp.att,4 hp
Air slash
Aura sphere
Heat wave
Roost

and

Umbreon@Heat rock,Synchronise
Sassy,252 att,252 hp,4 att
Payback
Curse
Sunny day
Moonlight

At this moment,TR is stopped and that's okay.
Togekiss uses Airslash on the strongest opponent and it covers the 2 weaknesses of Umbreon,Bug and Fighting.
Umbreon renews the sun or starts Cursing.
It goes on,and on,they both have heal moves if they're hit.
Heat wave has great coverage and Grass knot is used against some heavy opponents,like Rypherior.
After 6 turns,Umbreon starts using Payback,which deals double damage when Umbreon's already hit,which will happen,because Umbreon's slow.

This was my double team,please rate it.
 
I think I replace Magnezone with Marowak or Camerupt
Marowak works great as a physical attacker,but Camerupt has Eruption.
Give me advice,please.

Maybe as a lead a Magcargo?
 
Can someone please Rate my team? I'm joining a tournement at December 11,and I don't have much time. Please give me some tips.
 
At first glance, most of your descriptions are too idealistic. A wise player would have taunted your lead Dusknoir and completely shut down your setup plans. Vaporeon and Lapras lead can surf together, bypassing Camerupt's Focus Sash, possibly KOing your precious TR Dusknoir. This means that you will lose at least 1 TR sweeper from the beginning. Maybe Protect on Camerupt can help in this situation.

And your other members are over-relying on TR. I suggest adding 1 more fast Pokemon to cope with the helpless situation without TR.

TR only has 4-5 turns duration. Stealth Rock on Torkoal means that you are wasting turns, and switching is quite uncommon in 2v2 battles that it hardy has a prominent effect to your opponent. Let alone you have 2 stealth rockers in the same team.
 
Hey, short rate.

I don't see a need using Trick Room here, as all of your team focus on attacking only, which only in double does. Infernape would do a better Job than Dusknoir, since he can Fake out to prevent anyone from touching Camerupt. Using the set of 64 Atk / 252 Spa / 192 Spe | Naive | Fire Blast / Solarbeam / Fake out / Close Combat | Focus Sash | abuses sunny day like no other day. Fire Blast is STAB and it is boosted from Sun, as well as if your hp is below 25%, his ability activates, and does much more power. Stealth Rock on Camerupt is funny, as using that move in doubles is kind of w/e. I suggest you change Camerupt to Crobat, Crobat is a reliable pokemon to Taunt, as well as to set-up Sunny day. Crobat @ Heat Rock | Inner Focus | Timid | 104 HP / 152 SpA / 252 Spe | Taunt / Sunny Day / Roost / Heat Wave | Being a fast pokemon to set-up Sun, its pretty darn good. On Heatran, i suggest you using Modest > Quiet nature, also use Sunny Day > Dragon Pulse. Scarf Typhlosion with eruption can replace Torkoal here. Its the best Eruption users ever made. Anyways, how about using Infernape > Togekiss and Houndoom > Umbreon?

Good luck
 
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