Rate My First Rain Dance Team

[Froman]

So This is my first Rain Dance Team if you have any criticism would be great and put your changes in BOLD and sorry if i make mistakes this is my first Thread I have ever posted...Thanx

Electrode/@Damp Rock(Lead)
Nature:Hasty
Ability:Soundproof
Ev's: 252 Atk/210 Spe/46 SpA
-Rain Dance
-Thunder
-Explosion
-Taunt

A Great Lead I Love It, first use rain dance, then depending the pokemon following up with Taunt or Thunder, they always suspect Explosion so its also great time to get a free switch in.

Ludicolo/@Damp Rock
Nature: Modest
Ability: Swift Swim
Ev's: 4Def/252Spe/252SPA/
-Rain Dance
-Grass Knot
-Surf
-Ice Beam
To my surprise is actually a very good sweeper nothing can really stop this guy except for maybe a Swellow and Cress. Also a great rain supporter when i need to get it back up again.

Toxicroak/@ Black Sludge
Nature:Adamant
Ability:Dry Skin
Ev's: 4 HP/252 Atk/252 Spe
-Cross Chop
-Poison Jab
-Stone Edge
-Sucker Punch
His ability(when its raining) Heals himself an insane 18% total with Black sludge every turn, not just that but he does great damage..also great to switch in when people use a water type attack on lets say Kabutops or Omastar since that would give him ever more health. And with all of his resistances.

Raikou/@Life Orb
Nature:Timid
Ability:Pressure
Ev's:4HP/252Spe/252SpA
-Extrasensory(takes care of unsuspecting Fighting Types and especially my worst enemy Venasaur)
-Thunder
-Rain Dance
-Roar(To get rid of Cursbreon and CM Cress)
He can be very good if used right and great switch in for when people use electric moves. i was going to consider a Lanturn but this guy seems to be doing wonders for my team. Also another Rain Supporter when im in desperate need, but usually their done by the time Ludi and Electrode are dead.

Omastar/@Choice Specs
Nature:Modest
Ability: Swift Swim
Ev's: 4HP/252SpA/252 Spe
-Ice Beam
-Surf
-HP Grass
-Earth Power
Can also be a great switch in when people are using moves not very effective to rock and with swift swim i have wiped whole teams. They just type and complain but this is probly my best sweeper on my team.

Kabutops/@Life Orb
Nature:Adamant
Ability: Swift Swim
Ev's: 70 HP/252Atk/186Spe
-X-Scissor(Great against Cress and other unsuspecting Psychics)
-Waterfall(better then aqua tail bcuz of the accuracy and can flinch)
-Stone Edge
-Aqua Jet
Pretty much the same thing as Omastar but i decide on who i want to switch in between these depending on the persons Def/Sp Def/ Also another sweeper that does killer damage when used right.

 

[DarkCyberElf]

Omastar should have Earth Power over Ancient Power, specifically to rid yourself of your enemy's own pesky Toxicroak. Speaking of which, what does Toxicroak do for your team exactly?

HP Water on Raikou will help get rid of Steelix and Donphan, and it takes advantage of the weather.

My rate must be short on account of no time

 

[Froman]

He's a great type with all his resistances and such and his stone edge and cross chop do crazy damage. Has saved my arse so many times. Great against chansey and other walls because they are scared and usually force switches. Hmm and ill look into Raikou HP Water Thanx

 

[haunter]

You need to expand most of your descriptions as currently they're not up to rule 3. PM me the fixed descriptions and I'll unlock this thread.

3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you are having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

This does not mean add one sentence saying "Standard x" or "all-around awesome" after each Pokemon. If you put thought into making the team, you can put thought into posting it.