Rate My First Team

[SonicBladeStrike]

okay here is my first team EVER (competitive wise) please dont be rude and give it a rating 1- 10. (Please dont just say this is wrong, actually give some sugestions) And Thank You!!


Team

Skarmory - Brave Bird - 252 HP / 96 / Attack / 156 Defense / 4 Speed Leftovers Impish Keen Eye
Roost
Spikes
Whirlwind

Suicune - Surf - 252 HP / 252 Defense / 4 Special Attack Lum Berry Bold Pressure
Rest
Roar
Ice Beam

Tyranitar - Crunch - 252 HP / 252 Attack / 4 Speed Choice Band Adamant Sand Stream
Stone Edge
Earthquake
Aerial Ace

Salamence - Draco Meteor - 4 HP / 252 Special Attack / 252 Speed Choice Specs Modest Intimidate
Dragon Pulse
Flamethrower
Hydro Pump

Metagross - Meteor Mash - 252 HP / 244 Attack / 12 Defense Choice Band Adamant Clear Body
Earthquake
Explosion
Thunder Punch

Infernape - Nasty Plot - 24 Attack / 252 Special Attack / 232 Speed Life Orb Naive Blaze
Grass Knot
Fire Blast
Close Combat

Strategy - Skarmory will Use Spikes as many times as possible (up to 3) then start using whirlwind. It can take a few hits thanks to its good defense, but ifits Hp gets low, i use roost to bring its HP back to where it should be. Suicune is to roar everyone away so we can weaken the team they have with spikes. Rest is if its Hp gets low, and surf and ice beam are for pokemon suicune can handle himself. Tyranitar Is to just sweep as musch as posible. Equipped with Choice Band, it will knock out a lot of pokemon. Salamence has a wide variety of moves that can really make a lot of its attacks Super Effective. It will gain alot of fire power from its Choice Spec. Metagross is for the physical needs of my team, and I think with choice band he could wipe out almost every pokemon with an explosion or an earthquake. Infernape is fast, so itll get a heads up start and start doing a lot of damage.

 

[Jibaku]

First of all, welcome to Smogon.

I'm afraid I have to lock this thread because your team isn't organized enough for anyone to read. The moves of your Pokemon are located where they shouldn't be, and there should be a description underneath each Pokemon to tell what their purpose it.

3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you're having trouble with this one, start by give an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

As a starter, I suggest you lurk around more and see what makes a good RMT.