Rate my first Trick room team

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i know its not really good, but its my first effort at a trick room team. so gimme a break :P

Bronzong@lum berry

evs - 252 HP, 252 spc. defence, 6 defence.
bold nature, levitate ability

trick room
Gyro Ball
stealth rock
iron defence

Uxie@leftovers

252/252/6 split between HP, defence, and spc. Defence respectively.

Bold nature
levitate

calm mind
yawn
trick room
physcic

Gliscor@leftovers

252/252/6 split between HP attack, defence respectively.

brave nature
hyper cutter

swords dance
roost
return
earthquake

Dragonite@*Undecided item*

6/252/252 split in HP defence and spc. attack respectively

lonely nature
inner focus

dragon dance
earthquake
ice beam
thunderbolt

Snorlax@leftovers

252/252/6 Split in HP, spc. defence, and attack respectivly.

sassy nature
immunity

belly drum
return
rest
yawn/sleep talk

Claydol@*undecided item*

252/252/6 split in HP defence and spc. defence respectivly.

Lax nature
levitate ability

cosmic power
trick room
toxic
substitute

it needs some serious effort, =/. but i dont think its to bad for a first attempt
 
Somewhere on this team you should consider using Marowak and/or Ursaring.
 
Dragonite: Take out Dragon Dance, the +1 speed boost can actually make you go last if you have Trick Room. Use a STAB Dragon Claw instead for power. You can give him either Life Orb or Expert Belt (depends if you can accept the recoil).

Claydol: Just give it Leftovers, and Earthquake over Cosmic Power: Steels and Poisons will just calmly set up on it if you don't.

Snorlax: Ghosts will come in, crash your party and force you out. I recommand Crunch and Earthquake over Rest-Talk.

Also, careful, Triple-Ice weakness.
 
Okay, I think we're going to need to revamp this team a bit.

We'll keep the Bronzong and Uxie for sure. However, if you're Trick Rooming, it's best to let your sweepers do the attacking. Your sets are pointless and won't contribute to the team. For example, Bronzong should probably be running along the lines of: Hypnosis/Trick Room/Explosion/Stealth Rock. You help set up your sweep, ruin Focus Sashes, and put something out of commission with sleep and blowing someone else up. As for Uxie, what you can do is Trick Room, and then U-Turn your way out of there. It's best to fill out the last two moves with like Bolt/Psychic or Bolt/Beam, to gain coverage against random threats like Gyarados and extra Garchomp help.

Now we're going to go for your sweepers. As mentioned above, Marowak is a fine sweeper and will do infinitely better than Gliscor in terms of sweeping, as it can probably kill off a few Pokes on its own without any set up.

As for Snorlax, something you could attempt to try is just go for an all out sweep. Remember, by the time you get in Lax, you only have 3 moves left. One of those will be Belly Drum, just kill whatever you can within the next two moves, and finish it off with a SelfDestruct. Hell, you can try Custap berry on it, if allowed, and get in an extra attack if all goes according to play.

Now with the team as Marowak/Snorlax/Bronzong/Mesprit, you start filling out your losses. Something I'd try is a slow CBGyarados. Gyarados can help with it max HP since it'll be slow, have great attack, and resistances and Intimidate for Garchomp help as well as Weavile and Heracross.

As for the last Poke, I'd probably attempt something like Jirachi, who has -average- speed, but that's not the point. Jirachi can either be an additional Trick Roomer, and send out Wishes to rinse and repeat stuff, such as Gyarados and Marowak to help them do their work.
 
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