rate my new team i just made

[youngknight92]

A Glance at my team​

ok so here is my team i need to know how this team is it has been doing good exspecially my tyranitar and slamence but help my team to get better

Tyranitar (M) @ Choice Scarf
Ability: Sand Stream
EVs: 70 HP/188 Atk/252 Spd
Jolly nature (+Spd, -SAtk)
- Ice Punch
- Fire Punch
- Earthquake
- Crunch

i Chose this as a lead because he is very good as a bulky pokemon kind of and he has helped me out big time. he is like a surpirse and can take out almost any lead.

Suicune @ Life Orb
Ability: Pressure
EVs: 6 HP/252 Spd/252 SAtk
Timid nature (+Spd, -Atk)
- Calm Mind
- Ice Beam
- Hidden Power [Electric]
- Surf

i chose him as a special sweeper. he has a life orb for his attacks to be stonger and well he is just bulky

Salamence (M) @ Life Orb
Ability: Intimidate
EVs: 124 HP/12 Atk/196 Def/176 Spd
Naive nature (+Spd, -SDef)
- Dragon Dance
- Outrage
- Fire Blast
- Earthquake

i have salamence for a physical and with a life orb. he has really helped me and i have nothing else to say

Mamoswine (M) @ Occa Berry
Ability: Oblivious
EVs: 252 HP/252 Atk/6 SAtk
Adamant nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
- Curse
- Ice Shard
- Earthquake
- Superpower

this is my special pokemon. With at least 80 percent or more it can live from a heatran that has overheat with a life orb.

Heatran (M) @ Choice Scarf
Ability: Flash Fire
EVs: 6 HP/252 Spd/252 SAtk
Naive nature (+Spd, -SDef)
- Dragon Pulse
- Earth Power
- Explosion
- Overheat

this is a stong special sweeper i have nothing to say

Scizor (M) @ Life Orb
Ability: Technician
EVs: 252 Atk/48 Def/60 Spd/150 SDef
Adamant nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
- Bullet Punch
- Roost
- Swords Dance
- X-Scissor

i have nothing to say but i dont really like this pokemon



if u can give me sugestions and if u have any replacments for szicor

 

[EndlersaurusRex]

I wouldn't put life orb on Suicune. He's meant to be bulky. Tyranitar should have more HP if you want him to be bulky. Heatran shuld have HP Ice / Grass over Dragon Pulse, and Fire Blast over Overheat if you attack for more than 1 turn. Scizor is good. . . I don't know why you don't like him.

You need to give a better analysis of how you use each Pokemon and how they work together. Some of your EVs seem kind of random, so explain that too. Your team at this point, needs some work.

 

[ViVi]

You dont really seem to have any idea what each particular member is supossed to function as, as evidenced by your lack of reasoning for why they do what they do..

Id give Suicune Leftovers, as with Life Orb + the attacks you'll take while setting up Calm Mind will leave a small window of Attack time.

Some EV spreads seem way too random, like the 6 SpAtt on Mamo..and the Occa berry seems to deal with way to specific of a threat to lose the benefits of Leftovers or Life Orb.

And I cant help but feel that your wasting EVs with Heatrans speed..

But without a goal for your team to work towards anything Ive said is sorta irrelavent..