Rate my Revenge-Killer team please

Dragonpolabear

Heyo, I'm Dragonpolabear, and here's my attempt at entering the OU competitive scene.

Now, without any more delay, let's start, shall we?



With this team, I run a lot of revenge killers (5 to be exact) to basically surprise the enemy.

I playtest on the Pokemon Online main server, under the name Dragonpolabear. If you want, pop in and we can duel or something.

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Forretress
Item: Leftovers
Ability: Sturdy
Nature: Relaxed
EV's: 252 HP, 252 Def. 4 Spd

Rapid Spin
Volt Switch
Stealth Rock
Gyro Ball

With this set, I send Forretress in as a suicide rocks user. Normally what happens is:
T1: Stealth Rock
T2: Either gets OHKO'D, Rapid spins in case of spikes/rocks, Volt Switches, or Gyro balls
T3-onward: Rinse and Repeat.

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Tyranitar
Item: Choice Band
Ability: Sand Stream
Nature: Hasty
EV's: 252 Atk, 240 Spd, 16 HP

SuperPower
Pursuit
Crunch
Stone Edge

What I do with TTar is to kill whatever was out first, and set up a Sandstorm for my next Pokemon. With a huge amount of Attack, an Expert Belt, and a wide array of Moves, TTar can kill a lot of things.

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Aron
Item: Shell Bell
Ability: Sturdy
Nature:Timid
EV's:252 SAtk, 252 Spd, 4 Def

Endeavor
Protect
Toxic
Hidden Power (Ground)

Say hello to my main sweeper. With Aron, I can bring opponents down to 1-12 HP, then I kill them with my Sandstorm. If for some reason my Sandstorm isn't up,or my opponent is immune to Sandstorm, then my Shell Bell will heal me back to full, then I can use Hidden Power or Toxic to kill them.

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Azumarill
Item: Choice Band
Ability: Huge Power
Nature: Adamant
EV's: 252 HP, 252 Atk, 4 Spd

Superpower
Aqua Jet
Double-Edge
Ice Punch

This bro is one of my favorite revenge killers and pokemon in general. With a Priority +1, STAB, Water type move with about double the power (AKA Aqua Jet), I can sweep a lot of things.

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Mienshao
Item: Life Orb
Ability: Regenerator
Nature: Naive
EV's: 252 Atk, 24 Satk, 232 Spd

Hi Jump Kick
Stone Edge
Hidden Power (Ice)
U-turn

This sweeper can do a lot of things with this move set. The Satk is meant for the Hidden Power, and I normally can chunk HP with my Hi Jump Kick. The Stone Edge can kill a lot of fliers, and the U-Turn can switch out easily.

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Celebi
Item: Leftovers
Ability: Natural Cure
Nature: Calm
EV's: 252 HP, 236 Sdef, 20 Spd

Psychic
Recover
Thunder Wave
Heal Bell

Celebi is another one of my leads for this team. As a Special Tank, I can set up some heal bells, T-wave my opponents, recover necessary health, and blast the HP out of them with my Psychic.
 
Nice team. I do have to nitpick, however. Forettress does really good with Spikes. So that's a thought. Next, Tyranitar really should be running Stone Edge instead of Ice Punch, as well as a Choice Band.

You don't mention what Hidden Powers you are using. Instead of Ice Punch on Azumarill you should be running Waterfall.

That is all. Just some important move changes, mostly.
 
Howdy.

Aron is a gimmick (an effective one sometimes, yes) and I suggest running something more sure in its place. A second priority user would be good, so consider Mamoswine, who can revenge Dragons with Ice Shard. Or, use Weavile for similar purposes.
 
Nice team bud, Personally I think since this is a revenge killing team you should add in something with heal bell so your team isn't crippled by stupid things like burns or poisons. Maybe run celebi Special Defensive over latios only thing i can think of
 
@deadflame: Yeah. I was rushing on this post, so I forgot some of the little details. *fixed*
Also, with the spikes, I don't feel the need for spikes yet in my playtesting.
I didn't have the Choice Band on the TTar because I didn't know there was no item clause, and I wasn't so sure about that ice punch anyway. *fixed*
@saxtonhale: In my playtesting, Aron has turned out to be a major sweeper, so no changing that yet.
@Zac Flare: Will change the Latios as soon as I figure a moveset for a heal-beller.
 
I think you should replace Mienshao with Breloom. Why because Breloom has Spore and can easily setup with Swords Dance after a Spore. It also has Technician Boosted Mach Punch and Bullet Seed and it does good against a TTar + Keldeo + Landorus Core.

Here is the Set:

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Breloom @ Focus Sash
Trait: Technician
EVs: 252 Spd / 252 Atk / 4 HP
Jolly Nature
- Spore
- Swords Dance
- Bullet Seed
- Mach Punch

It can also work as a pretty good lead.

Hope I Helped =)

 
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