rate my second team

[youngknight92]

rmt and also rmt my other team i posted its called how come good ppl die or somthing like that but this is my second team rmt plz

Tyranitar,electivire,heatran,mamoswine,aerodactyl,suicune

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Tyranitar (M) @ Choice Scarf
Ability: Sand Stream
EVs: 120 Atk/252 Spd/136 SAtk
Naive nature (+Spd, -SDef)
- Fire Blast
- Ice Beam
- Stone Edge
- Crunch
ok so i chose this tyranitar cuz it can out speed i think all leads except a scarf charizard and a aerodacytl but thats all i can think of but anyways this is the first time i used a mix ty i always use a physical but im glad i tried this one cuz it has helped me out alot with alot of leads
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Electivire (M) @ Life Orb
Ability: Motor Drive
EVs: 6 HP/252 Atk/252 Spd
Jolly nature (+Spd, -SAtk)
- Earthquake
- Thunderpunch
- Ice Punch
- Brick Break
ok so now electivire ppl r thinking wow noone uses him anymore but he is good for my team and can outspeed alot of pokes and can defeat alot of pokes
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Heatran (M) @ Life Orb
Ability: Flash Fire
EVs: 6 HP/252 Spd/252 SAtk
Naive nature (+Spd, -SDef)
- Earth Power
- Explosion
- Overheat
- Hidden Power [Ice]
ok this heatran is like in alot of my teams and there is nothing to say he is awesome but i use life orb cuz ppl dont excpetc that so yah
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Mamoswine (M) @ Salac Berry
Ability: Oblivious
EVs: 6 HP/252 Atk/252 Spd
Adamant nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
- Endure
- Endeavor
- Ice Shard
- Earthquake
i always have a mamoswine with occa berry with it and curse ice shard superpower and eq but i thought i would change it a bit with sand stream in effect it will kill at least one pokemon. i use endure then endeavor most of the time or eq and if i dont die i finish it off with ice shard
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Aerodactyl (M) @ Choice Band
Ability: Pressure
EVs: 6 HP/252 Atk/252 Spd
Jolly nature (+Spd, -SAtk)
- Aqua Tail
- Earthquake
- Fire Fang
- Thunder Fang
ok aero i never thought of a cb aero but it works good because fast and ok attack but with cb ur attack can be stronger but i am thinking of changing it to life orb not sure yet
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Suicune @ Leftovers
Ability: Pressure
EVs: 252 HP/252 Def/6 Spd
Bold nature (+Def, -Atk)
- Sleep Talk
- Rest
- Calm Mind
- Surf
this is my last poke i have never used this set but works pretty good



if u have anything that can help my team plz help and dont make fun of me for not doin this rmt good i try the best so anyways if u have a replacement for one of my pokes or any movesets or wat not plz say something​

 

[Dark Wolf]

Well i think electivire is not a good pokemon, agood replacement would be scarf foretres

 

[Lunar Fang]

Electivire (M) @ Life Orb/Expert Belt
Ability: Motor Drive
EVs:252 Atk/176 Spd/80 SP.Atk
Lonely nature (+Spd, -SAtk)
- Earthquake
- Thunderbolt
- Ice Punch
- Brick Break/Cross Chop
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I'll always suggest Mixvire over physcial vire since it's able to get a smoother run through teams. My 2 cents.

 

[martinky24]

Electivire (M) @ Life Orb

Ability: Motor Drive
EVs: 6 HP/252 Atk/252 Spd
Jolly nature (+Spd, -SAtk)
- Earthquake
- Thunderpunch
- Ice Punch
- Brick Break
ok so now electivire ppl r thinking wow noone uses him anymore but he is good for my team and can outspeed alot of pokes and can defeat alot of pokes
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I think going through your typing and correcting all the mistakes will allow you to handle skarm-bliss more effectively.

Alot of teams easily beat down RMT's that use "ppl" over "people", I have noticed.

I would also include pictures, and maybe even some bold text here or there. It makes the reading much smoother.

 

[TAY]

Either you're trolling or your descriptions are severely lacking in actual content, and either way this thread isn't staying open. If the latter is the case, please take a look at the RMT Rules.