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[Rip]

Basic Overall(I'm still working on it.) :

Timid Espeon(Luke) @ Choice Specs
Synchronize
4 HP / 252 SpAtk / 252 Speed
Psychic
Trick
Signal Beam
Hidden Power Ground

Psychic is for some good STAB. Nice to know you at least have some offense. Hidden Power Ground is for those steel and fire types, like Houndoom and Steelix. Signal Beam is good against the dark and psychic Pokemon. Trick will trip walls down, trading the choice item. (My favorite move set.)

Modest Ampharos(Phone) @ Leftovers
Forgot. ????
4 HP / 252 SpAtk / 150 SpDef / 155 Speed
Light Screen
Thunderbolt/ Discharge
Focus Blast
Signal Beam

I'm not so sure about this one... might need to change, but that's why I'm here. Light Screen is for the decent SpDef it has. Thunderbolt has good STAB, while discharge has its 30% paralysis rate. Focus Blast is for some OHKO's on like Rhyperior and such. I really don't know why I put signal beam, but it's good.

Jolly Crobat(Wave) @ Black SLudge
Forgot. ???? Had to do with no confusion.
232 HP / 56 Def / 76 SpD / 144 Spe
Taunt
Roost
Super Fang
Brave Bird

I got this one straight off of Smogon. It worked out really good for me. This is your typical wall team breaker, Taunt being the main move here. Roost is for some extra HP. Super Fang is for hitting hard and not letting the opponent heal much. Brave Bird hit Sword's Dance Infernape with Close Combat hard. Most tactical goes to Wave, my Crobat.

Impish Quagsire(Eddie) @ Leftovers
Water Absorb
252 HP / 4 Atk / 252 Def
Waterfall
Earthquake
Recover
Yawn

Well goddamn was this hard to breed; it took at least a day to breed one like this, because of Water Absorb, the main key. Again I took this from Smogon, and surprisingly, it worked! Smogon movesets usually don't work well with me. Waterfall has good STAB. Earthquake too. Recover restores to stall. And Yawn will force some PKMN out. My favorite.

Adamant Feraligatr(Bait) @ Life Orb
Torrent
146 HP / 252 Atk / 110 Spe
Swords Dance
Waterfall
Return
Aqua Jet

Bait's my lucky one. Everytime I WiFi with her, she does the best. Swords Dance double attack, making Bait DEADLY. Waterfall STAB/ Return + Swords Dance= ASS KICKER. Aqua Jet is first priority, making Bait lucky. :D

Mild Victreebel(TacoBell) @ Black Sludge/ Dry Rock(something like that)
Chlorophyll
44 HP / 170 Atk / 252 SpAtk / 44 Spd
Sunny Day
Sludge Bomb
Leaf Blade
Giga Drain / Solarbeam

TacoBell's chlorophyll makes its speed fast, and it's good for Solarbeam. The dry rock makes Sunny Day last longer. Sludge Bomb is for STAB, and so is Leaf Blade and Solarbeam.


What do you think? POST. O: [:

 

[Eggbert]

Most of these pokemon are essentially UU and will find themselves outclassed by OUs. You can either switch crobat out and make it a UU team or change to the OUs (ie Azelf>espeon, Rotom/Zapdos>Ampharos, Celebi/Roserade>Victrebell) Feraligatr is viable as is quagsire through the use of encore. Crobat is better suited as a lead, ect.

 

[Eos]

First, please take off the nicknames. It really is kinda confusing, and seeing as a lot of people refer to lucario as "Luke" you can see the confusion. Hmmm, i'm assuming this is an ingame team, making it quite hard for it to be rated for a competitive pokemon site, but we'll try! Also, for the ability/trait for a pokemon, if you forget them, you can just type in the pokemon in the top search bar and read up the ability/trait right there. Its easy and quick! One more thing, make sure this is in an actual RMT fashion. Meaning, you need to have it in the correct required format (Rules can be found here: http://www.smogon.com/forums/announcement.php?f=52&a=176). Because of all this, this team may actually not even be accepted for any rates at all until these are worked out.

Sorry for the inconvenience, but please do this and I'm sure raters will then pay attention to this, or even just members like me to give it a fun rating because that is what this is all about! You may even Visitor Message/Private Message me when this is done, if you want me to rate your team, and give it a good analysis.
Good luck with this!

 

[Zebstrika]

Awesome, you use Ampharos! (Also, its ability is Static.)

Then, Leaf Blade and SolarBeam on Victreebel seems redundant, just like having both Feraligatr and Quagsire. I suggest either Sucker Punch or Weather Ball (note you have to breed for Weather Ball. Also, if you feel like breeding, Power Whip averages more power than Leaf Blade.)

 

[haunter]

Which tier is this team for? Crobat is banned in 4th Gen UU so you'll have to remove that. Also, is this team tested?