RaTe My TeAm [Emeryn]

[Emeryn]

Aggron @ Focus Sash
Ability: Sturdy
EVs: 252 HP / 252 Atk / 6 Def
Nature: Relaxed
~ Metal Burst
~ Stone Edge
~ Focus Punch
~ Earthquake
Well, you can see this pokemon isn’t a killer survivor pokemon, metal burst will be used to deflect back (wow) the KO moves that would be used from the opponent, he will not die with an powerful move on the 1 turn, (FOCUS SASH) the metal burst will make sure to put that opponent to the “ground”.
But, with his very low speed he will die in the next round D:

Altaria @ Life Orb
Ability: Natural Cure
EVs: 252 HP / 108 Atk / 64 Def / 64 SpD / 20 Spe
Nature: Adamant
~ Rest
~ Sleep Talk
~ Outrage
~ Dragon Dance
As you can see (can’t you?) this Altaria is my Sleeping Dancer Pokemon :D!While sleeping he will dance and use Outrage to defeat his opponents, well I have’nt to much to say, this Altaria is what you can see 8D.

Dusknoir @ Leftrovers
Ability: Pressure
EVs: 252 HP / 28 Atk / 228 Def
Nature: Impish
~ Will-O-Wisp
~ Pain Split
~ Earthquake
~ Ice Punch
Tank! Will-o-Wisp will make the opponent burn, Pain Split I put because… because… because… yeah is that you said! If fighting an flying pokemon it will crash his wings with ice punch, Earthquake is just to make’em cry! I’M an newbye pokemon trainer so, let me do what Mr Honchrow says (TENSE)… Looks like this simple (and random-choiced) buildset is nothing to make you think… ok next Pokemon 8D (--‘)

Skarmory @ Leftrovers (wow what a creativity!)
Ability: Keen Eye
EVs: 252 HP / 64 Atk / 176 Def / 16 Spe
Nature: Impish
~ Brave Bird
~ Roost
~ Stealth Rock
~ Whirlwind
Hey, I saw this buildset here in the university, I want this plan make light…
----“Oh, this pokemon will be hard, *Whirlwind!!* *the hardy pokemon switch out* *Pokemon X Switches in* *the Stealth rock used before, makes pokemon X be hurt*----- If this is possible (is this?) this will pass to be the reason A to put Skarmory in my team! Hey, there are only 2 Pokemon remeaning, c’mom, this your Computer is expensive, don’t crush it by reading this Post! Ok, next!

Froslass @ Choice Specs
Ability: Snow Cloack
EVs: 4 Def / 252 SpA / 252 Spe
Nature: Timid (_ô)
~ Ice Beam
~ Shadow Ball
~ Thunderbolt
~ Hidden Power Ground
This Pokémon will play on the Attack Field!! There’s no much to talk about this Poké. Yes Fire Blast attacks can Smash-It-Down. Ok, I think you know that I am a terrible team maker… Ok, I’m excited (tense) and... Next \o/

Tyranitar @ Expert Belt
Ability: Sand Stream
EVs: 252 Atk / 232 SpA / 24 Spe
Nature: Brave
~ Crunch
~ Superpower
~ Fire Blast
~ Ice Beam
Well this is the last Pokemon, first congratulations, you are in the last Poké. Ok, this will not be my lead cuz I hate Sandstorm! So, as you know I’m a iniciant, I don’t even know what’s the difference of Water and Grass! Tyranitar will be an Tyranitade attacker that has one mission: Smash, crash and Superpoweeeer! (can it be a music?)
Ok, feel free to give ideas, and etc…
As my first “Rate my Team” I have’nt to much to detail…
NOTE: I AM BRAZILIAN AND I CAN’T SPEAK ENGLISH VERY WELL (YOU SAW THIS), SO FORGIVE MY ENGLISH AND ME.
Ok, you saw that I have no Defensive Pokemon (??),and this is the first team I make so, if you can help me to make this team a good team…
Thanks,
Strategy:… … … … … … … … … … … … … ….ok I don’t have an strategy –-‘, I just attack and attack, whirlwind with Skarmory, roost, Fire Blast, Ice Beam…
…………………………..END……………………………………………….(TO BE CONTINUE…)

 

[Fuzznip]

Hello, I got your pm. Now, as you said in your pm, you're a different trainer, so I'll see what I can do to make your team slightly better. I'll look at your team individually and tell you what you can change.

Aggron

Now, there's a few problems with your Aggron set. If you want to make your Aggron a Pokemon that will counter back the opponent's attack and hope to hang on a Focus Sash, then running 252 HP EVs is a bit counterproductive, don't you think? So to fix this problem, I suggest you make Aggron use Leftovers so it can regain parts of its health once it has finished Metal Bursting the opponent. Also, I suggest you remove Focus Punch. Firstly, it receives no STAB bonus, and secondly, not many of the leads are weak to Fighting-type moves. There's many other options Aggron can use, but what I think is best, it would be Stealth Rock. I suggest you run this move instead of Focus Punch so you can get up Stealth Rock early in the game.

Altaria

Ok, now to Altaria. I don't really like this kind of moveset that you are using, so I'm going to suggest something a little different then Altaria. I want you to try using Dragonite. The set looks like this:

Dragonite @ Leftovers l Calm nature
252 HP / 6 Def / 252 SpD
-Dragon Dance
-Roost
-Heal Bell
-Dragon Claw

With this set, Dragonite becomes extremely bulky and very difficult to take down. You can switch it in on things like Heatran and Blissey, and then work your way up by boosting your Attack and Speed with Dragon Dance. Roost and Heal Bell allow Dragonite to never fear from being crippled by paralysis or a burn, and allows Dragonite to heal itself up back to full health when needed. I think you should really look into using this set, since it can be extremely devastating and can win you the match if no one is ready for it.

Dusknoir

Ok, well, there's nothing wrong with your Dusknoir set. Looks fine to me!

Skarmory

Ok, now that I've suggest to you to use Stealth Rock on Aggron, there's no reason to run Stealth Rock on Skarmory, right? So, I think you gotta run Spikes instead of Stealth Rock. Now you are capable of having Stealth Rock and 3 layers of Spikes in play, which can really help your sweepers in getting some KOs. Everything else looks fine.

Froslass

Ok, well, I think Froslass needs some more changing. I want you to run Gengar instead of Froslass, because Gengar completely outclasses Froslass. Froslass carries a nasty Stealth Rock weakness, and since it's Choice Specs'd, it will have to switch out and in a lot. So, I think you should try running a Choice Specs Gengar. The set will looks like this:

Gengar @ Choice Specs l Timid nature
252 SpA / 6 Def / 252 Spe
-Shadow Ball
-Focus Blast
-Thunderbolt
-Trick

This set allows Gengar to massively hurt Pokemon that are attempting to switch into it. Shadow Ball coming off of 538 is really scary if you ask me. Focus Blast allows you to hurt Blissey and friends, and Thunderbolt takes care of the bulky Water-types and Flyers, namely Gyarados. Trick allows you to severely cripple a tank. For example, Blissey loves switching into Gengar to shrug off it's attacks, but Blissey wouldn't love it if it switches right into a Trick. Now that Blissey has been crippled, it will be much harder for it to function.

Tyranitar

And last but not least, Tyranitar. Now, there's another little thing that's counterproductive; you are running 24 Speed EVs when you are using a Brave nature which lowers your Speed! So, I'd like to suggest you try using a different Tyranitar set, the common CBTar.

Tyranitar @ Choice Band l Adamant nature
176 HP / 252 Atk / 80 Spe
-Crunch
-Stone Edge
-Earthquake
-Pursuit

Tyranitar becomes an absolute powerhouse with a Choice Band, reaching a really high Attack stat. Running this set can definitely destroy many things that don't resist its attacks. Also, with Spikes and Stealth Rock support, not much can safely switch into it without being 2HKOed. You should really look into this set.


Hope I helped!