Rate my team. Or suffer the consequences.

[Aaron Nightcloud]

Hey Guys! I'm new to Smogon, so I'm not entirely sure that I'm doing this right. This is the team I use in Platinum, and is seems to work pretty well, but again, I'm new, so I'm not quite sure what to think. Furthermore, I don't want to hear dim-witted comments like 'This team sucks'. The only way you can get away with that is if you tell me WHY it sucks. From what I hear, Smogon is about constructive criticism, so let's keep it that way. That being said, rate away!

1.Drifblim
Ability-Unburden
Item-Sitrus Berry
a.Charge Beam
b.Shadow Ball
c.Calm Mind
d.Baton Pass

2.Alakazam
Ability-Synchronize
Item-Choice Specs
a.Psychic
b.Reflect
c.Focus Blast
d.Shadow Ball/Charge Beam

3. Sceptile
Ability-Overgrow
Item-Meadow Plate
a.Frenzy Plant
b.Energy Ball
c.Sludge Bomb/Detect
d.Leaf Blade

4. Lucario
Ability-Steadfast
Item-Quick Claw/Fist Plate/Metal Coat
a.Aura Shpere
b.Vacuum Wave
c.Flash Cannon
d.Metal Sound

5. Metagross
Ability-Clear Body
Item-Mind Plate/Earth Plate
a.Meteor Mash
b.Zen Headbutt
c.Earthquake
d.Giga Impact

And This is where I'd like your opinion...
Should I go with...

6A. Dragonite
Ability-Inner Focus
Item-Draco Plate
a.Outrage
b.Dragon Claw
c.Dragon Dance
d.Fly

OR

6B. Electivire
Ability-Motor Drive
Item-Earth Plate/Icicle Plate
a.Thunderpunch
b.Thunder
c.Earthquake
d.Ice Punch

Once again, I'm new to this site, so if I've done something wrong with the format of this team or something like that, please let me know!

 

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Hi, welcome to Smogon. Read the rules before posting again please, as your team isn't currently up to standard.