ORAS OU Rate my team please :D

[A.J. Garvalena]

So far, the team I have created has been doing pretty well, but I feel like something is missing, and or, I'm doing something wrong. If anyone has any advice, please, feel free to make adjustments. thanks!

The team:

Scizor
Adamant
Technician
252 hp
44 Atk
16 Def
203 Hp
Recover
Bullet Punch
Bug Bite
Swords Dance

Jolteon
Jolly
Volt Absorb
252 SAtk
252 Spe
Thunderbolt
Shadowball
Substitute
Baton Pass

Volcarona
Modesr
Flame Body
252 SAtk
252 Spe
Flame Blast
Quiver Dance
Bug Buzz
Giga Drain

Gyarados
Jolly
Moxie
252 Atk
252 Spe
Dragon Dance
Waterfall
Ice Fang
Earthquake

Metagross
Adamant
Clear Body
252 Atk
252 Spe
Ice Punch
Zen Headbutt
Grass Knot
Earthquake

Dragonite
Adamant
MultiScale
252 Atk
252 Spe
Outrage
Fire Punch
Earthquake
Extremespeed

 

[haxiom]

Hello A.J. Garvalena , and welcome to Smogon!

Unfortunately, this RMT is currently not following the rules which can be found in the RMT Resource Thread; specifically, this thread violates rule #4, because you lack sufficient descriptions for each Pokemon on your team. As such, I am afraid that I will have to lock this thread for the time being. If you would like this thread to be reopened, feel free to PM me with your updated RMT, and I would be happy to reopen this thread for you. If you need help making an RMT up to the required standards, I recommend that you carefully read the RMT Resource Thread and check out other RMTs from the Team Showcase and RMT Archive for some examples.

Good luck with your team, and have a nice day!