Rate my team please (im new)

[Darkhound]

line up:
Aerodactyle, Jirachi, Jynx, Dusknoir, Zapdos, Feraligator

Aerodactyle(YallKnowMe)Pressure
252atk 252spe Jolly@ Focus Sash
-taunt
-stealth rock
-earthquake
-stone edge
Ok so pretty much the standard lead here so not much explanation needed

Jirachi(11:11)Serene Grace
240Hp 192Spe 76SpD impish@ choice scarf
-trick
-thunder wave
-iron head
-wish
this rachi serves as both trick and wish support as well a t-wave support while still retaining the famous (paraflinch) ability which could pull off a late game win

Jynx(Luna)Foreworn
252Spa 252Spe Timid@leftovers
-substitute
-calm mind
-ice beam
-lovely kiss
my main sweeper and main pkmn on this team simply because ive liked her since RBY days however i have never used her competetivley >.< the standard luna set which works well agains the unexpecting

Zapdos(PewPew)Pressure
252Spa 252Spe Timid@choice scarf
-thunderbolt
-hp grass
-heat wave
-U-turn
my scout and hard hitter zapdos has the strongest t-bolt in the game and when hes as fast as the lightning hes throwing it packs a punch to the unexpected

Dusknoir(KnockKnock)Pressure
252hp 232Atk 26def Adamant@leftovers
-substitute
-focus punch
-fire punch
-pain split
my bulky physical sweeper sub up on a switch and deal massive damage w/ focus punch and pain split off the sub HP loss and fire punch for scizor

Feraligator(Steve)Torrent
28hp 252Atk 228Spe Adamant@life orb
-dragon dance
-ice punch
-waterfall
-earthquake
the DD-dos set except imo feraligator does it better w/ no 2x SR weakness and no 4x elec weakness and Torrent feraligator has just as much potential if not more than dos to sweep

ok so the team is pretty much centered around Jynx and to alow jynx to set up then she will be able to threaten many bulky pkmn and cripple her counters with sleep alowing her to continue to wreak havoc. Aeorodactyle is standard suicide/SR lead zapdos is used as a scouter and as a DD-dos check and jirachi forces a switch letting jynx come in and set up feraligator is just because i needed a back up late game sweeper if jynx should go down and waterfall packs alot of punch when he is below a third of his hp.

i am willing to change out any pkmn except jynx of course i would like to think of movesets or team utillity for that pokemon however advice is much appreciated.

thanks for the help

 

[Legacy Raider]

This thread is being locked under rule 3:

3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you are having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

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