rate my team please!

Iam not English, i will improve my language so please be gentle with me.
Hello guys! i wanna post my team on this forum hoing to find serious people that will help me earnest. My idea, or like you want to say, is to do a team (i play wifi on 3ds) around Persian and Starmie.
I known that there are different tier and more better alternative instead of Persian, but please i want it and be mature, accept and recommended what is the best way to use it.
I play on 3ds wifi, sometimes there is also the possibility that we, yes have 6 pokes, but we need to choice only three (afther we have seen the opposite team). So we need to be much versatly.
This is the team that i did on smogon:

Persian (F) @ King's Rock
Ability: Technician
Shiny: Yes
EVs: 252 Atk / 4Def / 252 Spd
- Fury Swipes
- U-turn
- Bite
- Fake Out

scout set but with a good probability of flinch. Fake out first move, u-turn go home. Bite is for ghost type. Fury swipes is for have for 5 turn the possibility to flinch so the possibility to causing flinch is high. I have seen that in this generation Persian can learn also Play rough (fairy type move) but i don't known if is good to give to it. There is also a mix set for Persian but it is frail for boost. Fake out+ Last resort is good but only like last very last sweeper. Persian has also feint (like such punch) for attack first but isnt much strong.

Starmie @ Life Orb
Ability: Analytic
EVs: 252 Spd / 253 SAtk / 4 Def
Timid Nature
- Thunderbolt
- Ice Beam
- Hydro Pump
- Psyshock

Nothing to say about Starmie, it is good...i hoped that it evolved or megaevolved but...However bolt-beam combo, Hydropomp stab and psycoshock 2° stab. Starmie with analytic+life orb has a good power, if it attach for second or on switch the damage is more high.

Gliscor @ Toxic Orb
Ability: Poison Heal
EVs: 156 HP / 252 Atk / 100 SDef
Adamant Nature
- Aerial Ace
- Earthquake
- Taunt
- Roost

I have choiced Gliscor because it can enter when i switch persian but also starmie ( resist at fight and electric, bug) and this set is for stall.

Scizor @ Scizorite
Ability: Technician
EVs: 160 SDef / 96 Spd
Jolly Nature
- Bullet Punch
- Swords Dance
- Bug Bite
- Superpower
Classic set of Scizor but with the new power of mega evolution

Florges (F) @ Leftovers
Ability: Symbiosis
EVs: 132 HP / 252 SDef / 124 SAtk
Modest Nature
IVs: 30 SAtk / 30 SDef
- Aromatherapy
- Wish
- Moonblast
- Energy Ball

Florges is also for stall but also for clear the status and pass wishes. Moonblast is stab. Energy ball is anoher good move but we can change it. I don't want to use hidden power because is hard the breed on the 3ds.

Rotom-Wash @ Wide Lens
Ability: Levitate
EVs: 252 HP / 80 Def / 16 SAtk / 160 SDef
Modest Nature
- Volt Switch
- Will-O-Wisp
- Hex
- Hydro Pump
Rotom-w has a good synergy with scizor and Persian. Together make the famous volt-turn combo. Wow is for burn phisic pokemon and hex is for have another move but also benefict with wow.

Please, really...please help me to do a good team around these two pokes. Happy new years and thanks if listen and help me.
 
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I think Scizor should have U-turn instead of Bug Bite if you are trying to make a VoltTurn Strategy. And also it is based on entry hazards so one Pokemon coud have stealth rock or spikes. If your starmie has analytic it shouldnt have speed evs.
 
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