Rate My Team Please

[ZaChAttAcK101]

Okk... So I've been having some thoughts on a new team and it seems to let me down but not too much...maybe because of my favoritism to that pokemon or whatever the case may be...anyways this team happens to be my new team and constructive criticism would be very much appreciated.

Espeon
Timid @ Lvl.100
Moveset
Psychic
Grass Knot
Shadow Ball
Hidden Power Fighting 67

Jolteon
Modest @ Lvl.100
Moveset
Substitute
T-Bolt
Shadow Ball
Hidden Power Ice 68

Staraptor
Jolly @ Lvl 100
Moveset
Pursuit
Brave Bird
Close Combat
Quick Attack

Slowbro
Bold @ Lvl 100
Moveset
Surf
Ice Beam
Grass Knot
Slack Off

Metagross
Adamant @ Lvl 100
Moveset
I-Punch
T-Punch
Meteor Mash
EQ

Salamence
Adamant @ Lvl.100
Moveset
Dragon Dance
Dragon Claw
EQ
Aerial Ace

Again any constructive criticism would be much appreciated and thanks for taking time out to read this thread.

 

[Olie]

I can't help but feel like I'm mini modding, but you need descriptions for your Pokemon's roles.

And uh... you forgot items apperantly.

 

[Taylor]

Please familiarize yourself with the RMT rules by reading them often, then proceed to abide by them. Not using common sense such as reading a forum's ruleset ends up in semi-severe consequenses. You broke this particular rule:

3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you're having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

This does not mean add one sentence saying "Standard x" or "all-around awesome" after each Pokemon. If you put thought into making the team, you can put thought into posting it.