rate my team

[nidoking183]

there is a local tournament at my game shop for the midnight release of pokemon x and y and im going for the win so i would like some help with my team, i dont think there is any tiers but probably the normal clauses

nidoking

ability:sheer force
item:choice scarf
nature:adament
moves:
ice beam
earth power
flamethrower
earth power

attack:294
defence:173
sp.atk:184
sp.def:161
speed:269

since nidoking is my favourite pokemon its always included in my team, but i chose this set for a late game sweeper, with choise scarf and its high speed, checks and counters with almost all pokemon

swellow

ability:guts
item:flame orb
nature:adamant
moves:
brave bird
pursuit
protect
facade

attack:295
defence:156
sp.atk:122
sp.def:136
speed:349

swellow is a beast with guts, 1/2kho alot of pokemon but its defence its horrible can get one hitted by some faster pokemon so i was thinking of ursaring or zangoose due to swellows low defence

kangaskan

ability:scrappy
item:silk scarf
nature:adamant
moves:
fake out
return
earthquake
sucker punch

attack:286
defence:181
sp.atk:101
sp.def:191
speed:262

kangaskan is my lead with fake out, since its stab it does a good job or seeing what type of team they are just from their first pokemon and return boosted with stab and silk scarf does its job, kangaskans earthquake can be fital for a quick ko when up against fire types and sucker punch for the quick shot

ludicolo

ability:swift swim
item:damp rock
nature:modest
moves:
ice beam
energy ball
rain dance
surf

attack:140
defence:163
sp.atk:300
sp.def:209
speed:221

ludicolo is mainly my rain team counter with energy ball,when rain is up it becomes one of the fastest in the metta game, rain dance with stab and boosted surf is dangerous, ice beam for bug and flying types which can 2 ko ludicolo

bastiodon

ability:sturdy
item:leftovers
nature:impish
moves:
metal burst
rest
toxic
protect

attack:114
defence:399
spec.atk:107
spec.def:288
speed:66

bastiodon is my staller with toxic and protect, metal burst when it gets low and rest back up could put a chesto berry on it to wake it up strait away

i need one more pokemon but i do have some ideas, terrakion,kingdra,cloyster change bastiodon with rhydon or rhyperior but i do have a spare pokemon but i think its hacked i got it from the gts but it doesnt say where i got it from just says ----- so i dont know if i should use it but this is the stats

porygon-z

ability:download
item:life orb
nature:modest
moves:
physic
ice beam
thunderbolt
tria attack

attack:153
defence:169
sp.attk:392
sp.def:181
speed:258

so any help would be much appropriated

thanks
nido~

 

[Jirachee]

Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you are having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

This does not mean add one sentence saying "Standard x" or "all-around awesome" after each Pokemon. If you put thought into making the team, you can put thought into posting it. The standard description length required is three to four lines, if you need more insight look on the detail part, check out the RMT Archive.

aside from that, you need to list the evs of your pokemon, they are much more helpful than stats. also you need to get rid of obviously inferior choices like adamant special nidoking. pm me an updated version of your thread and I'll unlock it