Rate My Team

[Skill00matic]

Hello Everyone,

This is my first post on smogon forms. I really want to make my UU team good however I feel sad because my team so far has been unsuccessful. Any help would be appreciated!

Here is my team with all of the moves and evs with the reasons that each pokemon is on my team.

Scyther @ Choice Scarf
Ability: Technician
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spd
Jolly Nature
- Aerial Ace
- Bug Bite
- U-turn
- Brick Break

Scyther is my lead, and always seems to do very well. I generally use U-Turn first turn to get an advantage right away.

Scrafty @ Leftovers
Ability: Shed Skin
EVs: 128 HP / 128 Def / 252 SDef
Careful Nature
- Bulk Up
- Crunch
- Drain Punch
- Ice Punch

Scrafty is made to last as long as possible and be almost impossible to take down, similar to my snorlax build. Once I have set up a couple of bulk ups, and start spamming drain punch, scrafty is tough to take down.

Snorlax @ Leftovers
Ability: Thick Fat
EVs: 80 HP / 176 Atk / 96 Def / 156 SDef
Adamant Nature
- Curse
- Return
- Crunch
- Fire Punch

Snorlax is similar to scrafty, however so far he has been extremely useless. Snorlax's set needs help.

Blastoise @ Leftovers
Ability: Torrent
EVs: 252 HP / 232 Def / 24 Spd
Bold Nature
- Scald
- Rapid Spin
- Roar
- Toxic

Blastoise is my defensive wall and used to spin hazards away. Blastoise does his job well and counters arcanine and darmanitan to his best of his abilities.

Galvantula @ Choice Scarf
Ability: Compoundeyes
EVs: 4 HP / 252 SAtk / 252 Spd
Timid Nature
- Volt Switch
- Thunder
- Bug Buzz
- Giga Drain

Galvantula is similar to Scyther. He outspeeds all and keeps momentum of the battle.

Magmortar @ Choice Scarf
Ability: Flame Body
EVs: 4 HP / 252 SAtk / 252 Spd
Modest Nature
- Fire Blast
- Hidden Power [Ice]
- Focus Blast
- Thunderbolt

Magmortar is a bit of a revenge killer. I didn't mean it to happen, but that is the way it ended up happening.

Obviously help is greatly needed, and I will consider all of your comments! Thank you for Reading.

 

[Jirachee]

Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you are having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

This does not mean add one sentence saying "Standard x" or "all-around awesome" after each Pokemon. If you put thought into making the team, you can put thought into posting it. The standard description length required is three to four lines, if you need more insight look on the detail part, check out the RMT Archive.

Your thread is breaking this rule. PM me your updated descriptions and I'll unlock your thread.