rate my team.

[RoyXpX]

my team:

Bronzong@Leftovers
Sassy Nature
252 HP / 128 Atk / 128 SpD
Levitate

Gyro Ball
Stealth Rock
Hypnosis
Earthquake

He's there to set up the stealth rock.Gyro ball Tyranitar and if its other stuff just hypnosis then swith out.

Zangoose@Life Orb
Jolly Nature
252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spe
Immunity

Return
Swords Dance
Close Combat
Quick Attack

My Physical sweeper.He ussualy never gets OHKO. So i can get a Swords Dance.Then i sweep. Fire Punch is for Skarmory.

Tentacruel@Leftovers
Calm Nature
204 HP / 96 SpA / 172 SpD / 36 Spe
Liquid Ooze

Surf
Ice Beam
Rapid Spin
Toxic Spikes

My special wall and rapid spinner. if i switch into a choice flamethrower or something like that i can toxic spikes while they switch. Ice beam for garchomp's trying to switch in.Surf for STAB.

Dusknoir@Leftovers
Impish Nature
252 HP / 252 Def / 6 SpD
Pressure

Will-O-Wisp
Fire Punch
Ice Punch
Pain Split

My Physical Wall and to stop rapid spinners.pain split for recovery. fire punch for fortress.ice punch for donphan.will-o-wisp stops physical sweepers.

Salamence@Life Orb
Mild Nature
120 Atk / 252 SpA / 136 Spe
Intimidate

Brick Break
Flamethrower
Draco Meteor
Roost

MixMence.Brick Break kills most special walls and heatren.draco meteor only gets resisted by steels. flamethrower for skarmory and fortress.Roost heals him from Life Orb recoil

Magnezone@Leftovers
Modest Nature
172 HP / 252 SpA / 84 Spe
Magnet Pull

Thunderbolt
Hidden Power Ice
Substitute
Magnet Rise

I needed a special attacker that resisted both electric and dark so i chose him. he stops skarm right in his tracks.and i could sub while garchomp is going to switch in and just hidden power ice.

help please.

thanks.

 

[Taylor]

Too short on descriptions here. Read the rules:

3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you're having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

This does not mean add one sentence saying "Standard x" or "all-around awesome" after each Pokemon. If you put thought into making the team, you can put thought into posting it.

You're more than welcome to repost this thread once you have increased the ammount of description to each individual Pokemon.