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[kazuya]

Hey everyone here is my team and i wanted to know what i should fix in it i like it and it runs pretty well but i don't know what to change=( any help is good

Lead Aerodactyl


evs 252 atk 252 speed 4 hp Item: focus sash
Nature:Jolly
move #1:taunt
move #2:stealth rock
move #3:stone Edge
move #4:EarthQuake

Comment start with taunt/ stealth than switch if necessary this thing has screwed up so many of my opponents it is not even funny and i love this thing.

All out wall Celebi

Evs 252 hp 252 def 4 Sp def Item: leftovers
Nature:Bold
Ability: Natural Cure
move #1:calm mind
move #2:grass knot
move #3:leech seed
move #4:recover

basic idea is to leech calm mind while walling then recover proceed to sweep while gaining health from leech seed. if i cant pull that off i just regularly wall and help other pokes on my team to finish the weakened pokes off


Special Sweep #1

Evs 252 sp atk 252 speed 4 hp Item: choice scarf
Nature:modest
Ability: flash fire
move #1:explosion
move #2:fire blast
move #3:earth power
move #4:HP ice
Great Special sweeper nice coverage and i throw so many salamance and dragonites of guard it is great ^^

Special sweep #2

Evs 252 sp atk 252 speed 4 hp Item: focus sash
Nature:Timid
Ability:Levitate
move #1:hypnosis
move #2:thunderbolt
move #3:Focus blast
move #4:HP ice
Nice switch in to block those earth moves i really like it i know Hypnosis Accuracy is lowered in plat and There is no shadow ball on this pokemon but i cant fit it on because focus blast is very important on this gengar.

Phys Sweep #1


Metagross
Evs 252 atk 252 def 4 hp Item: choice Band
Nature:adamant
Ability:clear body
move #1:explosion
move #2:bullet punch
move #3:earthquake
move #4:thunder punch

Why let an AMAZING def go to waste i took advantage of it so i can get more walling in than i would of i had chose speed. that is why i mainly use bullet punch as a great priority moves and after CB it packs a punch

Physical sweep #2


BULKY-GYARA
Nature: Adamant Ability: Intimidate Items Leftovers
EVs: 216 HP / 16 Atk / 176 Def / 100 Spe
Move#1:Taunt
Move#2:Dragon Dance
Move#3:Earthquake
move#4:Waterfall
this is an amazing bulky gyarados and i love it i recently got it taunt to setup DD to become a monster earthquke for coverage waterfall for STAB

Thank you any suggestions help ^^

 

[Olimarman]

Gengar needs his shadow ball :p try this set:

Gengar @ Choice specs/ Choice Scarf
252 Special attack, 252 Speed, 4 hp
Trick
Shadow Ball
Thunderbolt
Hp Ice/Focus Blast

Gengar would benefit tremendously off either a scarf or specs, or you can trick it onto walls and cripple them. Hypnosis is practically useless now with its poor accuracy. Personally I'd probably go with scarf since specs could potentially boost up a wall, even if crippled, but its your call. I'd also go with HP ice over focus blast, but also your call, whatever you need coverage for. Thunder bolt+shadow ball are pretty much needed, you can't go wrong with STAB and thunderbolt just provides great coverage.

 

[TAY]

You need to take a look at the RMT Rules, specifically:

Originally Posted by Fat Rule #3
3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you're having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

This does not mean add one sentence saying "Standard x" or "all-around awesome" after each Pokemon. If you put thought into making the team, you can put thought into posting it.

If you fix this up then PM me and I will unlock the thread.