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[Javaker]

Azelf ( lead ) Naive Nature Focus Sash
Evs: SPA: 252 SPE: 252 ATK 6

Stealth Rock
Taunt
Explosion
Fire Blast

Azelf's job is to set up stealth rock then explode, taunt if needed, also fire blast for tricky steel type leads

Gyarados Adament, leftovers
Evs: ATK: 252 SPE: 252 HP: 6

Waterfall
earthquake
dragon dance
stone edge

Gyarados job is to support tyranitar and heatran, and also sweep after a dragon dance boost

Heatran naive chioce scarf
Evs: SPA: 252 SPE: 252 ATK: 6

Explosion
dragon pulse
flamethrower
earth power

Heatran's job is a late game sweeper, also to avoid fire attacks, also he has explosion to rid me of annoying pokemon. Also his great ice resistance supports salamence.

Scizor Adament, Choice scarf
Evs: HP: 252 ATK: 252 SPE: 6

U-Turn
X-scissor
Bullet Punch
Brick Break

Scizor is my revenge killer and scout

Tyranitar jolly, life orb
Evs: ATK: 252 SPE: 252 DEF: 6


Stone edge
crunch
dragon dance
earthquake

Tyranitar is my wall against certain attacks ( a support to Gengar ) and a sweeper

Gengar timid, leftovers
Evs: SPA: 252 SPE: 252 HP: 6

Shadow Ball
energy ball
hidden power ( fight )
substitute

Gengar is in a supporting roll for tyranitar and heatran, to dodge enemy explosions, fighting move and ground moves


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[haunter]

Please expand your descriptions as they're definitely not up to rule 3:

3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you are having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

This does not mean add one sentence saying "Standard x" or "all-around awesome" after each Pokemon. If you put thought into making the team, you can put thought into posting it.

Take a look at the RMT archive to see what kind of descriptions we are looking for. PM me the fixed descriptions and I'll unlock this thread.