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i ended up trading alot on different chatrooms, mainly serebii. i traded some evds for other evds. then i looked at what i got, and man this team looked good. my strategy is really baiting the opponent and switching not only to a counter, but to a pokemon that can get a stat boost out of the predicted move.

rate/comment please.

For my lead

Jirachi@ choice scarf ---------------when i first started competetive battling on gamebattles.com, lead
Hasty-252 atk, 252 speed, 4 hp -----jirachi raped my suicide azelf, then i realized its so versatile. it can do
moves- ----------------------------everything a lead can do. kill other leads before they can set up SR,
iron head --------------------------scout with u-turn, ruin slow bulky leads with trick, an set up its own SR
stealth rock
U-turn
trick

Celebi@leftovers -------------------i just got this one yesterday, once you see the rest of my team you'll
Bold-252 HP, 248 def, 8 sp.atk -----see what im trying to do. this is just to bait fire attacks and walling
moves- ---------------------------other attacks it resists. substitiute on something i can force out, then
Leech seed ------------------------leech seed the counter. hopefully the counter has a fire attack.
psychic
substitute
recover

Heatran@Leftovers ---------------------And here is why i use celebi. these 2 work unbelievebly well together,
Naive- 252 sp.atk, 252 speed, 4 hp ------covering eachothers weaknesses, and baiting a flash fire boost. since
moves- ---------------------------------scarf sets are soo common, i thought to not use it. substitute on the
substitute -------------------------------swittch, then do whatever fits best, most likely toxic and cripple bulky
flamethrower -----------------------------waters or go back to celebi, force a switch again and go on from there
toxic
earth power


Gyarados@life orb --------------------------------He hits hard, causes switches.... yeah he hits rele hard. this sea
Adament- 252 atk, 252 speed, 4 hp ---------------monster is perect bait for the next guy.
moves-
dragon dance
stone edge
earthquake
aqua tail

Electivire@Expert belt ----------------------soooo underrated i feel. i had to use him,after a motor drive boost,
adament-252 atk, 252 speed, 4 hp ----------hes takin out gyarados's counter. if the opponent switches they will
moves- ------------------------------------lose hp from my attack i was going to use on gyarados's counter.
thunderpunch ------------------------------then unless the couter has a scarfed pokemon, i can attack again and earthquake ko ice punch----------------------------------him. i'm not saying that he's getting the 2HKO on all pokemon but
brick break--------------------------------alot of pokemon can be finished off.


Snorlax@leftovers --------------------------another pokemon i hadn't seen in a while, i decided to bring
Careful- 252 sp.def, 100 def, 156 Hp --------back curselax, he walls special attacks very well, curse on the
moves- ------------------------------------switch and now im bulky in both defense and offense, while
body slam ----------------------------------being able to hit whatever is there pretty hard. i am aware that i get
curse --------------------------------------walled by ghosts but this is for wifi so rotom isnt a
earthquake--------------------------------- problem, leaving only two OU ghosts to wall me
rest



please leave any changes/suggestions or what my team is weak against. thanks
 
Your format is annoying to follow. Please stick to the standard format - it will make your post much more readable.

6. Formatting. Make your post readable. If the format is messy and illegible you will not be likely to receive help and may have your thread locked. Adding pictures to your post can make it more visually appealing too, but pay attention to rule 11. Here is a guideline on how to post each Pokemon.

Pokemon @ Item
Ability:
EVs:
Nature:
- move
- move
- move
- move

*Detailed description of the Pokemon's purpose to the team*
The part I bolded in the above quote is where your descriptions should be. Also, increase the length of your Gyarados description.

OK, seems you ignored this post. I'm locking this until you decide to increase your Gyarados descriptions and fix your format.
 
Got your Pm and I am on such a High right now.

Your team has severe issues with Rotom/Dusknoir on wifi) who can really threaten if Heatran goes down.

I think that a Jolteon over Electivire suits the team much better. Personally UI would like a CB Scizor over Celebi since it still lures fire moves but gives your team a nice revenger

Have a Nice Day!
 
Got your Pm and I am on such a High right now.

Your team has severe issues with Rotom/Dusknoir on wifi) who can really threaten if Heatran goes down.

I think that a Jolteon over Electivire suits the team much better. Personally UI would like a CB Scizor over Celebi since it still lures fire moves but gives your team a nice revenger

Have a Nice Day!


well rotom isnt used on wifi and dusknoir isnt too common so im fine with that. and how does jolteon suit the team better? and CB scizor is too boring and common. plus, i like that heatran resists celebi's waknesses and vise versa, they work great in conjunction thanks for the suggestions tho
 
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