RMT #1

Sunblade0410

OU Platin - RMT #1

Gliscor @Leftovers
EV: 252 HP, 42 Def, 216 Spe
Nature: Impish
Ability: Sand Veil / Hyper Cutter (?)

~ Earthquake
~ Stealth Rock
~ Roost
~ Ice Fang

A Physical Tank suggested by Goldfan, it outspeeds Adamant Lucario and some other dudes

Alakazam @Choice Specs
EV: 4 HP / 252 Spe / 252 SpA
Ability: Synchronize
Nature: Timid

~ Psychic
~ Signal Beam
~ Shadow Ball
~ Hidden Power {Ice}

Strong psychical support is needed, thats why I use Zam. If you have a better idea, please post it.

Metagross @Life Orb
EV: 142 HP / 252 Atk / 116 SpA
Nature: Adamant
Ability: Clear Body

~ Earthquake
~ Meteor Mash
~ ThunderPunch
~ Hidden Power {Fire}

Scizor-Counter and my physical sweeper, steel type is also needed I guess, thats why I use Meta. He stopps Gyara and some physical walls when switched in.

Vaporeon @Leftovers
EV: 188 HP / 252 Def / 68 SpA
Nature: Bold
Ability: Water Absorb

~ Surf
~ Ice Beam
~ Wish
~ Yawn

Like Goldfan said, I need Wishsupport and stronger coverage against the common OU's. It also forces to foe to switch because of Yawn, so that his Pokés will get more damage from SR. Thanks for that! =)

Heracross @Choice Scarf
EV: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spe
Nature: Adamant
Ability: Guts

~ Night Slash / Pursuit
~ Megahorn
~ Close Combat
~ Stone Edge

A Choice Scarfer is missing in my team, I think Heracross is a good choice here. He has a great type coverage and defeats almost any Poké I fear.

Cresselia @Leftovers
EV: 252 HP / 58 Def / 200 SpD (Bold)
Nature: Impish
Ability: Levitate

~ Sleep Talk
~ Rest
~ Charge Beam
~ Psychic / Ice Beam

What about Tentacruel? I dont have any reason why the Pokémon is in my team lol...

This is an unconventionally OU-Team I guess, if you can agree with this I've reached my target. I dont want to use the S-OUs like Gyara, Salamence, Sczior, Skymin, Heatran, ... here. Im not satisfied with Cresselia, maybe it stops some Pokémon but it will die at the end of the day.

I think this team is very rentable when played correctly.

Thanks for rate
 
Hi there, I would be glad to rate your team if it was in the proper format, unfortunately yours is not, you have no mention of Abilities which may not be nessecary, but help to make the layout look good. I can only Hazard a guess at which stats your EVs are in. Heracross for example seems to have 7 stats. I suggest you read this thread and re-write it in the correct format. Read around other RMTs and see how other people lay out their comments and Pokemon. I see this is a wifi team, but if you are using shoddy using the Export to Text function will help you there. One last thing is that you should write more in your comments about how your team works together and such-like. We cannot really rate 6 random pokemon if you don't even have any idea why the pokemon are on your team. Thanks =D
 
First off, this isn't a forum to be talking about not liking Super OUs. If you read Smogon's Philosophy you will see we are interested about what works best, and don't really care about your distain for OU Pokemon. Secondly, a little more description will be needed in further RMTs, and you have written the German version of a move, and I am not sure what it is. But seeing as you came back politely and didn't complain I will make an attempt to rate your team.

First off, don't put Tentacruel in over Cresselia, that will leave you wide open to a gyarados sweep. I would keep cresselia in there to keep that and things like Infernape in check so they don't become too much of an issue. As with Dusknoir, if you don't think you need the Will-o-Wisp support too much, you could run something like Milotic or Vaporeon, they won't counter Infernape as well as Dusknoir will, but will provide needed coverage, and make a more relliable counter to Heatran, who is for all purposes a bigger threat to your team. I would suggest Vaporeon as she can pass Wishes around to the bulkier members of your team who don't have recovery (Heracross and Metagross) Now with a different Bulky water on your team, you are going to need a little more insurance against Zapdos and Lucario. Swampert is a little redundant on your team, and Vaporeon is doing a better job anyway.

The more I look at this the more I start to think it needs an overhaul. Vaporeon will no doubt help you, but then that leaves you weak to other threats (Dusknoir is not a 100% Lucario counter anyway) You could add in Zapdos, or possibly Jolly Gliscor to outspeed Lucario over Swampert, that will help against all Lucario, as long as out EV it to outspeed + Natured Lucario. Jolly and 216 Speed EVs will do the trick, Gliscor will also help you out in other such as countering scizor etc... Last but not least You could then lead with a trick / Stealth ROck Lead. Uxie does this job well with its ability to either Thunder Wave (nullifying the scarf) or Yawn (rack up more SR damage) I have also had reasonable success doing this with a trick Mesprit. Anyway I hope some of this helped, and some of my changes can help fix your team up a bit. If it doesn't really work, try joining the Tutoring programme next round to understand what it is to build a team around a strategy and execute that strategy efficiently.
 
Thanks Goldfan for you help. I fixed my mistakes too, sorry for that. Vaporeon and Gliscor are nice alternatives, thanks for that. I forget Vaporeon as a wish support, so that i didnt consider it. I calculate the Speed EV for Gliscor in my head, perhaps i did a mistake again.

Its not the first time I created a team for myself, this collection of Pokémon is some kind of diffrent, thats why I 'failed' in spots. Thanks again!
 
On a side note, I wouldn't lead with Gliscor, it accomplishes nothing except Stealth Rock, and you dont want it dented early in the game when you might need it later. Try leading with a Trick SR lead I suggested or at worst lead with Scarfcross who will at least stop suicides from exploding on you. Trick SR Uxie could go over Alakazam or Cresselia, if you go over Cresselia try using Azelf > Alakazam, unless you are dead scard of Tyranitar. Azelf is a better special sweeper due to having levitate (it can switch in more) and then fact that it can take hits slightly better, and has access to explosion, rendering it not entirely useless against Blissey. It is also not as easily revenge killed by Dugtrio.
 
Umm... Why exactly Impish on Cress? Impish is +Def -Sp. Atk, which your cress has all special attacks. Go with bold (+Def - Atk)
 
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