Rmt/Fix my team OU

This is my ou team i use a lot, it's done well but i know for a fact that it could be better and use some fixes so yeah, thanks for anyone who helps or gives tips it's greatly appreciated. and if my team is bad don't worry about staing so, but if you do give me options on how to fix my team so it won't be bad. Thanks.​


Team at a glance​



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Replaced Landorus with Gallade
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Replaced Rotom-W for Jellicent
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Gallade replaced by Terrakion
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Fixed up my team after looking at it a bit ^​






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Aerodactyl-Adamant
Item-Focus Sash
Ability-Rock Head
Ev's - 4 Hp 252 Attack/ 252 Speed
Stealth Rock
Earthquake
Stone Edge
Ice Fang


Aerodactyl is my lead for a few reasons. Reason number one being that most times i never get a chance to get my Stealth Rocks out because either most other people i face counter my lead or because they are faster with me, using Aerodactyl i am sure to get my SR up no matter what beacuase of it's high speed stat and focus sash literally makes it impossible for me to not be able to get them up because i can not be 1hko. After i lead of and get my stealth rock up my other moves allow me to take down almost any pokemon they send out against me, that's about it for Aerodactyl.




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Terrakion-Jolly
Item-Choice Scarf
Ability-Justified
Ev's - 4 Hp/ 252 Attack/ 252 Speed
Close Combat
Earthquake
X-Scizzor
Stone Edge



Gallade is my Choice Scarfer. I CS mine because with his descent speed and well balanced out attack he is a big threat, outspeeding pokemon allows him to bring/keep me in the game. If he happens to be in trouble with a bit of predictions he could use one of his moves from his great move pool which can take out a lot of the pokemon in this meta, allowing Gallade to be quite dangerous if used right.
Close Combat is probably his most powerful move being as it is as the same type as him so it is STAB allowing it do do quite a handsome amount of damage to nearly any pokemon out there. Stone Edge is for those annoying pokemon like other flying types or dragons setting up DD for a sweep, being scarfed allows you to still outspeed them and if you hit a Stone Edge they are most likely going down and if all else fails there is still the trusty Night Slash that is there to have you're back.​


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Scizor-Adamant
Item-Choice Band
Ability-Technician
Ev's- 240 Hp/ 252 Attack/ 20 Speed
U-turn
Bullet Punch
Pursuit
SuperPower

Scizor is probably one of my favorite pokemon to use he hardly ever lets me down and usually take out 2 pokemon in nearly every battle i have allowing me to keep up with my opponent or stay in the lead. U-turn is his best stab move with his ability technician allowing it to be super powerful and deals a great amount of damage to most pokemon. Bullet Punch is probably his most favorable move as it can take down most pokemon and it is exceptionally dangerous mid or late game as it can probably drop any pokemon that comes it's way. Superpower is in case you happen to run into blissey, Ferrothron or any other pokemon that likes to stall you out and be really annoying. Last but not least is Pursuit which is for a pokemon who likes to think it's switching out without taking any damage, if you correctly pursuit can be quite handy.​




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Virizion-Modest
Item-Life Orb
Ability-Justified
Ev's- 4 Hp/ 252 Sp.Attack/252 Speed
Focus Blast
Giga Drain
Hidden Power-Fire
Calm Mind

Virizion is probably my second favorite of the dogs of black and white, Terrakion being first. I have managed to pull off many come backs and sweeps with this beast, it has yet to let me down always dropping at least 1-2 pokemon a game along with scizor allows me to pretty much dominate the game. Focus Blast is his strongest stab move as a special sweeper set, it deals great damage to a lot of pokemon especially after a calm mind which allows it to 1-2hko a lot of pokemon including Blissey with focus blast. giga Drain is in case i'm running low on health and i can do damage to a pokemon who doesnt resist it well, which allows me to gain health because as a sweeper loses a lot of health due to it's life orb. Last but not least is Hidden Power fire which is for those scizors who try to come in a bullet punch me down, hp fire allows me to put a quick stop to that and easily get that annoying Scizor out of the way.​




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Heatran-Calm
Item-Leftovers
Ability-Flash Fire
Ev's- 248/ 252 Sp.Defense/ 8
Lava Plume
Protect
Toxic
Roar

Heatran has always been a really great pokemon for me to use ever since the 4th generation of pokemon had come out. He get's descent speed and great special attack allowing him to be a great special sweeper. or you could use the defenseive set and make him a bulky beast. I use the Calm nature for the extra defense so i can withstand hits from a few pokemon that tend to catch me in my tracks. Lava plume is my stab move which ultimately puts a hurting on a lot of pokemon in the game. Toxic is so i can stall them a bit and whither them down. Roar is in case i don't want to fight the pokemon out on my opponents field or i cant do a full fight with it and protect is there so maybe i can gain a little health and maybe live another hit or so i can see what move they are using.​




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Jellicent-Bold
Item-Leftovers
Ability-Water absorbe
Ev's- 248 Hp/ 216 Defense/ 44 Speed
Scald
Will-O-Wisp
Recover
Pain Split


Jellicent is probably one of my favorite water types this generation of pokemon as it always seems to be the formidable. I like to use bold as when i use Jellicent i like to use his bulky defensive set. Scald is for those pokemon who think they are great until they get burned and ruined for the whole battle lol., Jellicent rarely let's me down. WoW allows me to burn those physical sweepers who like to try and set up to sweep me, but WoW cut's thier attack in half or so pretty much ruining their chances of a sweep. Pain Split allows me to regain health if my health is low or i know im abuot to take great damage allowing me to still stay up and in the game. Recover pretty much does the same thing but it's good to keep it handy anyway.​
 
@Aerodactyl, taunt > ice fang
@Landorus, it isn't a good pokemon without ss, you can change to landorus by Gliscor:
Gliscor (M) @ Toxic Orb
Trait: Poison Heal
EVs: 252 HP / 252 SDef / 4 Spd
Careful Nature (+SDef, -SAtk)
- Substitute
- Toxic
- Earthquake
- Protect


it's a defensive gliscor


and heatran orber? is better scarf, balloom or leftovers
HP Grass > HP Ice
Protect or Substitute > Flash Cannon

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@Aerodactyl, taunt > ice fang
@Landorus, it isn't a good pokemon without ss, you can change to landorus by Gliscor:
Gliscor (M) @ Toxic Orb
Trait: Poison Heal
EVs: 252 HP / 252 SDef / 4 Spd
Careful Nature (+SDef, -SAtk)
- Substitute
- Toxic
- Earthquake
- Protect


it's a defensive gliscor


and heatran orber? is better scarf, balloom or leftovers
HP Grass > HP Ice
Protect or Substitute > Flash Cannon

well overall a lot of people use landorus even not on SS, he's still quite formidable. and he's my scarfer, and i'd rather not ditch my scarfer for a wall i'm not great at using at that.

EDIT : Made a few fixes to my team hopefully improving it. I looked at it a bit ago and noticed that i had pokemon that wouldn't really resist fighting types allowing me to maybe get swept if i wasnt careful and i chose a different scarfer as i also had 3 water weaknesses.
 
Hey, PokemonPlayer93. Nice team.

First off, your Aerodactyl should have Taunt over Ice Fang, so it can abuse its formidable 130 base Speed Stat to prevent opponents from setting up their hazards. While Ice Fang does provide a certain coverage, it's still a weak move, and Aerodactyl is used as a suicide lead to get the Stealth Rock up, and then die. I notice a weakness to Choice Specs Tornadus, who can come in and wreck everything with Hurricane. To fix this slight weakness, I would suggest a Specially Defensive Heatran as opposed to your Offensive variant you currently use. It allows you to take special hits with much more ease, adding stability to your present FWG core (Heatran - Virizion - Jellicent). Its survivability will increase, strengthening your core. It can also utilize Roar to pHaze away set-up sweepers. Lava Plume does a good amount of damage, letting you beat Scizor. It also has a nice 30% burn chance, which can be a great help if you are able to obtain it. Toxic is a nice way to stall out opponent, and Protect racks up Toxic damage inflicted to your opponent. Now, I would recommend Choice Scarf Terrakion over your current Scarf Gallade. It outspeeds more threats when wielding a Scarf, and allows you to revenge-kill +1 Volcarona with a STAB Stone Edge. It's a better revenge-killer in general. Unlike Gallade, Terrakion resists both of Volcarona's STAB moves, which lets you take it out. Both Heatran and Terrakion help dealing with that moth. Cool team, and good luck!

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Heatran @ Leftovers | Flash Fire
Calm Nature | 248 HP / 252 SpD / 8 Spe
Lava Plume | Roar | Protect | Toxic

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Terrakion @ Choice Scarf | Justified
Jolly Nature | 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spe
Close Combat | Stone Edge | X-Scissor | Earthquake

Summary of Changes:

Offensive Heatran ---> Specially Defensive Heatran
Scarf Gallade ---> Scarf Terrakion
 
Hey, PokemonPlayer93. Nice team.

First off, your Aerodactyl should have Taunt over Ice Fang, so it can abuse its formidable 130 base Speed Stat to prevent opponents from setting up their hazards. While Ice Fang does provide a certain coverage, it's still a weak move, and Aerodactyl is used as a suicide lead to get the Stealth Rock up, and then die. I notice a weakness to Choice Specs Tornadus, who can come in and wreck everything with Hurricane. To fix this slight weakness, I would suggest a Specially Defensive Heatran as opposed to your Offensive variant you currently use. It allows you to take special hits with much more ease, adding stability to your present FWG core (Heatran - Virizion - Jellicent). Its survivability will increase, strengthening your core. It can also utilize Roar to pHaze away set-up sweepers. Lava Plume does a good amount of damage, letting you beat Scizor. It also has a nice 30% burn chance, which can be a great help if you are able to obtain it. Toxic is a nice way to stall out opponent, and Protect racks up Toxic damage inflicted to your opponent. Now, I would recommend Choice Scarf Terrakion over your current Scarf Gallade. It outspeeds more threats when wielding a Scarf, and allows you to revenge-kill +1 Volcarona with a STAB Stone Edge. It's a better revenge-killer in general. Unlike Gallade, Terrakion resists both of Volcarona's STAB moves, which lets you take it out. Both Heatran and Terrakion help dealing with that moth. Cool team, and good luck!

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Heatran @ Leftovers | Flash Fire
Calm Nature | 248 HP / 252 SpD / 8 Spe
Lava Plume | Roar | Protect | Toxic

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Terrakion @ Choice Scarf | Justified
Jolly Nature | 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spe
Close Combat | Stone Edge | X-Scissor | Earthquake

Summary of Changes:

Offensive Heatran ---> Specially Defensive Heatran
Scarf Gallade ---> Scarf Terrakion
You state very good points. thank you for helping me to fix this team, i appreciate it, i'm sure this will help me out. I will make these changes right now :)
 
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